XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Islandcity]

Very nice

I use to do stuff like this back in the day and what you have here is a brilliant piece of work love all the little details of the brick and rock and the ship and then the clouds and that brings me to the lighting within the clouds I think you could have a beam of light shining from the clouds to shine down on the castle or water even. Theres alot of nice little artistic and amusing things about this piece, I did however think you could have put more into it, so below and throughout the review are a few tips and advice that could help improve on this, but overall I found it to be pretty good.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some lighting from the clouds.

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[Takeda and Sabinsky]

Nice work

I like this sketch here the pencil work looks nice and you seem to have done a great job with, toobad you couldnt put this on a larger canvus of sorts and such, but I do like what you have going here and hope you put more stuff like this on the portal. anyways nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Could be on a larger canvus.

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[igglybuff]

Cute

and once again you bring us some cute jigglypuff, you did an outstanding job on this piece its cute and fresh, just wish these pieces were abit larger in size to allow for more detail to be shown, but for the mostpart I like what you have done here smooth lines good tone.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Larger view screen

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[Lethal Attack - Sram Dofus]

Nice work

First of all nice work here and congrats on the front page award that's always a nice thing so that orb that she is shooting or grasping that can be a main focus point and you should really make it glow and shine like very bright just an idea to think about

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine focus points would be a plus here

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[Ak Torsafru]

Love this

I especially love what you have done with the orange hair and how it shines off so well that has been a really focal point of detail the female girl is already well drawn and love the little extra details that you really put forward here and it shows off well

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Really couldn't find anything here to really improve on here it's a fantastic piece with no major changes needed

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[Cornered]

Awesome

Very nice dark picture this is one that you can really use the lighting effects to take place and you have lots of lighting points such as the ground the backround the eyes lightning etc so you should give those points more glow more shine more effect comming off of them

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting effect focus points could be worked on

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[Demonic Innocence]

Nice work

The drawing itself is really good some nice detail that you put in the drawing with some small little details that make this really big the only thing this really needs is possibly some blood hanging from the mouth but other then that it's an outstanding piece of work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some blood dripping from mouth to give it more of a shock effect

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[Gengar + Dragonair]

Love this

Wow this is nice and the purple really accents this well but in my opinion there should be more of a glow on the outer line work of the snake and let it really glow outwards just an idea you may like so nice job sofar

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glow on the purple outline

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[Wolf Drawing]

Really beautiful

This here is really beautiful and the type of stuff I tend to really be fond of. Very nice lines and it's just a beautiful sketch all together you really know what you are doing and it shows so nice job here very nice effort. Gonna check out your other stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A colored version of this would be pretty awesome

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[Dragon Eye]

Well notbad

Ok so I love eyes and this one was well sketched with some good detail and even better shading I think this could be even better with some color maybe even parts of it just color but I like what you have done sofar

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some color if not to all then just parts of the eye

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