XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inktober Day 24]

Funny

This here was actually funny. And makes me wonder what he did eat but the drawings are good and you made some humor here so a nice piece I liked it keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Fill in the background a bit more

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[Potatoman Begins: Page 8]

Notbad

And another part of the story comes to light some good parts here actually and the whole radio activity was a good idea here. As always characters good. Storyline nice and art always on que so this was a good comic nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More radioactivity would be good more Bazar creations

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[Noire]

Love it

Now here was a nice piece of art work I love that little pink diamond or crystal. I think that should have much more of a sparkle or streak of light from it or at least a glow brighter then what you have it as now

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More brightness from diamond more streaks of lightning from it

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[Hallween shenanigans]

Nice

This was nice I like the stars. I like the backround and the comic style this represents. And great characters here. Good style and amusing. I would think about making the stars brighter it would be kinda neat

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the stars brighter

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[JoJovember 2 - King Nothing]

Different but creative

A nice and creative piece here and I say piece as it submission lol but anyways I do think you can have one or two puzzle pieces missing just like in real puzzle pieces are and as for others maybe have one or two colored even numbered lol anyways nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Get creative with some random pieces

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[Dancing Stars]

Fantastic

You have some nice skills this was a fantastic piece of art and very different the detail alone is pretty impressive I like this style and I think all this needs is maybe some borders but in the same style as the rest of your art so it matches up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some enticing borders would be a nice touch to this

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Jenny-Jinya responds:

Thank you so much, I'll be trying my best to improve! :)

[Giga Mermaid Wip]

Really nice work here

Now that was very nice you have some good skills and represented some nice use of color I think with the jewelry you should have them shine and sparkle much more. That would show more detail but what you do have here was pretty good stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine and sparkle in the jewelry

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[Skeleton Practice]

Very nice

I like what you have done here I think there's alot you can do here also by adding some color not the whole thing but just some parts like the horn one one the hat band on one and the flame on the other that it makes it all standout more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color would be great here

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[Getting Ghostly Twyla]

Beautiful piece

I like this I love how the texture meshes well and the stars in the background are nifty but they should glow a bit more so make the stars glow more gives off more mysterious and mystical feel about them

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More glow on the strars in the back

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ROGUEKELSEY responds:

Thank you very much for your feedback, I'll note to play with the background lighting more in the future!

[Snowy Owl Ana]

Very fresh

This was very fresh and sharp looking the colors meshed well as well love the sharpness of this whole piece though. You have some good skills I don't think you need to change anything on this it's pretty solid if you ask me

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes with this brilliant piece

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