XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Volter's New Weapon Pt.1]

Nice

And another in the series love the color here you really know how to put all the right color in all the right places and you have really made this into a successful comic series so nice job there you have some great talents hope they go farther then this and beyond anyways nice work here keep at it I look forward to seeing a bit more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just keep making these

~X~

[Artist Kirby]

Really beautiful

This one here is really a beautiful piece the color alone is nice I like the color I think you could brighten up the color somewhat more have it really shine and as for the blank backround I think you could do something with that seemed bland maybe it could be some town painted up in paint already a few streaks here or there painted regardless of what you do you could really touch up some stuff in here with tid bits of more color and even more brighter as well but anyways I won't drag this on anymore very nice stuff here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More color and fill in blank spots

~X~

[Volter's New Weapon Pt.3]

This is cool

Well here was something different you have some animation in there and that is different then before but still a nice result the toon itself is good love all the color love the results and outcome and looks just as good as any of your other great comic themes so nice job here keep at it and keep making stuff like this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More animation would be a huge plus

~X~

[Night Owl]

Wow

Wow this was very beautiful I love this gold feel and touch about it it's that gold color you should really sparkle up and let all that owl glow especially with a dark backround it will show better and be something magical and mystical so just something to try out but overall this was a nice piece here keep up the great work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More gold glow more gold sparkle

~X~

[Imari from B.B.]

Cute

And here is a cute piece the girl is beautiful the ball up in her hair I can see you doing something with that like much more shine then you have on it even a sparkle the rest of the character is well done nicley drawn and good use of color

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine or sparkle on the ball holding her hair

~X~

[Red Demon 1]

Awesome

This was pretty awesome especially with red being my fave color the sketch itself is very deep in detail lots of line work or brush detail regardless this was very intense as are your other ones that are similar you really pulled it out on this one so very nice job as for improvement I think it's just

~X~

[Fushi]

Very beautiful

Now this one here was very beautiful the white hair alone with all the different color tones was so impressive even with the snow falling you had a lot of white falling it still seemed to work well with the skyline very realistic style too the wolf also played another white point but none of this changed anything and the whole piece came out so beautiful designed so for you this was a brilliant and beautiful npiece and fine line work lived up to your name so nice work on this and I don't see any changes needed on this at all. But anyways before I end here by on this review props to you on a wonderful piece of art

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned above everything worked well together and no changes needed

~X~

Cipcal responds:

I've actually been struggling with my lineart, so I'm glad that my work paid off. Thank you for your review!

[Luxray Artwork]

Notbad

Notbad at all at first this was more simple then anything else but the line brush work is subtle and paints in detail and makes for a detailed story here I'm just not fond of the colors here especially the backround you could probably put some reds and greens in there for extra measure on this piece but regardless nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding some color would be very nice indeed

~X~

[Nuclear Mushroom]

Now this is beautifully

This here is a beautiful piece indeed the texture is really good and makes it feel like you are really in a Forrest somewhere the green grass is very realistic too I do think that the only thing this needs is maybe some more sunlight beaming down on this more with some nice lighting effects working some light on this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More of a beam of sunlight

~X~

[The last one out of Beach City]

Nice work

Well I must say this one here is a very nice enrgy of work and you really tell a story within your creation with everything from characters to the brick wall or even there imagination it all comes alive an I am thinking you should put some shine and sparkle into this like some on the wall with a corner of the bricks sprakling and maybe more light effect shinning down on them maybe even a tinted light on them it would bring more focus on to an already decent design and art piece but I like what you have done here with this and I have come to enjoy your subtle style here it creates a story within the artwork so for that nice job indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and sparkle here and there with some more lighting also

~X~

PedroTorres responds:

Thanks for this more than helpful critic. I'm glad you liked the work and I will try some changes on this to see how I can give more life to it