XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Reaper OW fanwork]

Wow

I love this piece love what you did with this the darkness and the "EYES" I do think you should have added more glare and shine to the eyes but you have some nice work here very well designed and created. great shades and depth all the way around, This style was pretty interesting, it could be better with a few more details and effort, just take your time and keep at it, and dont take light to the improvment points suggested. because they will help of course and bring some better resluts all around.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more glare and glow on the eyes would be nice but maybe not your direction.

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JessxJess responds:

Thank you so much for the thoughtful response! Good eye too, near an end of a personal piece I always think about another and want to move onto the next xD Criticism is always welcome!

[Yearning for An Other]

Dark

I like the dark theme here the dress was well done as was the character she is very dark and is alluring to the viewer and the darkness of her really makes you wonder if she can be real so you did give off that effect so nice job there

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe to keep up the darkness some mystic clouds floating around

~X~

[Are you determined to give us candy?]

Nice job here

And here was a nice work of little tid bits of characters and they look pretty good very fresh looking and something that would be nice if newgrounds pushed them forward so nice efforts all the way around love them

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe more color additions but they are pretty good as is

~X~

ScepterDPinoy responds:

Thanks for the feedback. Each sprite only has one color in vein of Undertale fyi. I've seen some people attempt to color the battle sprites for their fan game.

[Just a renamon]

Notbad

Well this is notbad at all I think the flames could use some work though as it seemed nice but more of a flare with some radiant reflections could be added into this with a nice style about it anyways just an idea but it all seems great though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More fire focus more reflection of the fire and more flame

~X~

[A History of Aliens on Earth]

Awesome

Here's an awesome piece of work a lot to see here and so much detail love how the color purple is focused here some extra flashy effects like lighting and such would be a huge plus like back lit stuff but still an amazing piece you have here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting effects would be great here

~X~

[Subway fight]

Awsome

This was an awesome scene very dark and it's almost like a matrix battle a slow motion feel so this was some nice art and style I could see some more darkness to the subway like more gerfiti or stained walls and pillars more used over time and dark place

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the room more griddy and dark put some Ware and tare on it

~X~

[Draw me like one of your monster girls]

Different

Well this is different for sure it's something good though and you have a nice style the shape of the body could be a tad bit better more shapely but the face and hair was very nicely done maybe even put more shine in the hair

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So more shape on the body and more shine in the hair as explained

~X~

[Kitty]

Wow very nice

Wow this was very nice and the kitty came out well very cute like all cats are this was an interesting and unique piece something different and I like what you showed us here your skills have showed off well

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think the only thing this needs is a frame

~X~

[Durotan]

Wow

Wow that's very intense and very impressive the amount of detail is wild and very well done love the amount of detail and effort would like some added color but for the most part this was very well done work and hope you keep this kind of efforts going strong

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A touch of color would be a plus but not needed

~X~

[fargikarp]

Nice

This was nice and colorful. Love the orange color on this fish I could see you making some changes like adding texture to the orange and a shine on the beak and some blue ocean in backround so there could be some small improvments

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A shine to the beak. Some blue ocean backrounds and more texture on skin

~X~