XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Regina]

Fine detail

Fine detail here and smooth lines the color tone was just wow I think the only issue I really had here was the. Shine on the hair it was all over I think it would have been better if it was just on the top forhead area. That would be a spot to really focus on it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine issues that could be reworked

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[Space Cowboy Start Screen]

Fun logo idea

So here was a nice entrance to a game nice visuals the don't was notbad I think you could have put much more shine in the font so it even sparkles with a glare it would be a good visual effects for this game entrance the rest of the art work was really good too

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine on the font of things

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[Adoration of the Monsters]

Very rich in detail

The detail is very rich here lots of detail lots of little and big characters the environment is just so rich and beautiful with detail and a stylish effect about it all I can't see improving on such a beautiful price already

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This alone is as perfect as it gets so no improvment changes needed

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Fluff-Copter responds:

Thank you kindly! I worked hard on this and sure learned alot from it :3

[Cloud Flow]

Nice this was nice it's simple not overly complicated and I can see that you can improve on this with some more wind gusts for that extra effect maybe even a bird or flock of birds in the distant. But other then that this was a pretty cool piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More winds gusts and even birds

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Fluff-Copter responds:

I actually forgot I made this! I think I was testing brushes at the time but maybe I'll get around to drawing more clouds in the future! Thank you very much for all the feedback <3

[Fluff-Copter]

This was decent

Well this was simple and decent I like this design I do however think the propelled flippers need more shine and show more turn on them via the wind also the backround could use more depth in that there's stuff out there

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine more depth in backround etc

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Fluff-Copter responds:

This was the very first thing I made in Photoshop ^^ I was very new at this but this little fella stuck around, I usually draw it with legs these days

[Journey [redraw]]

Very nice

I like this world you have created and you did go all out and is stylish but I think there needs to be more sun burst beating down on the sand. At least more heat and beams just an idea to think about now and then

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More heat wave more sun burst on the sand

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Fluff-Copter responds:

Thank you for the feedback! I definitely agree with you maybe I'll redraw this again next year ;)
Have a great Christmas!

[Kanga]

Decent

A decent character and art entry some texture and shades are much needed here even adding something in the backround like it's element would also be a plus as well nice character design though it was interesting

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some textures and skin or furr tones would be a plus of an idea here

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[Sounds of animals fighting]

Something different here

And this was different but makes you think what's going on the character is good the art such as the pink backround and the clothing was really artistic maybe adding more splatter of blood would be a positive key in making this even better

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More blood splatter

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[Inktober Day 17]

Color is good

So see you did do some color in a sketch it's all good and made for a more enjoyable piece would have enjoyed more of it but what you had here was pretty good and I like these your style is growing on me also enjoyed what you did with the background as well

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[Shotgun!]

Good story

This here on this one the story gets really good love your color tone and the story is not only funny but you bring some nice style. It has captured my interest for sure. And I look forward to more new stuff as well

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe having the story go to space was a great idea I would love to see more like that

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