XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Potatoman Begins: Page 2]

Cool

I should really follow these in order I was a tad confused on this part but as for the effort and style you did pretty good and you braught some nice detail to light with the nice color and detail to focus o work here but anyways as always a nice balance of comic here and enjoyed it for what it is any way

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not sure with these as you have the comic style down pretty solid

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[Dishes...]

Very nice

Wow this is beautiful but to answer the question about comic there are lots of comic series on here even one that's about 700 comics long so it's a pretty good place I would think as for your comic yes this is a nice piece love your use of color and theme and your character design is very nice I think the frame work could be more dazzling then just the plain type and style but maybe adding a color or spiky waves or something but regardless of all that this here is a fantastic comic and I look forward to seeing much more of your work come through but anyways untill next time keep up the brilliant work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Frame work could be different just a tad

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Caustic-Imp responds:

Thanks for the kind words!

I’m not really using a good program for panels, bubbles, and lettering so that definitely an area I need to figure out. Thanks for clearing up the comic thing, I haven’t seen any on here but I am not super active here so that’s more on my end.

[Government]

Really great stuff

Haha this one made me chuckle these characters sure do go thru alot of stuff the ending frame on this one was a real gobgetter and really made my day. But as always it's the art story and outcome that make these great longer stories might be a good thing too

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Longer stories would be nice

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[Drawing]

Nice one

And once again a nice comic series with lots to see great color and good ending as well these stories get better and better the characters are great relationship to the writing so you have done well here on this one and I was highly pleased with the outcome of this particular comic you should bring in more characters

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Would love to see more characters

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[Jet Fuel]

Nice

Well this was nice this one is more brighter more whites used and the ending scene is really a climax to this whole piece so you did build it up from first frame to last frame so that was a plus all thogether nice piece of comic here I look forward to much more of this comic series you really have a lot of these

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Nothing here cause it was perfect

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[Jedi Leonardo]

Very nice

Very nice work here the lighting effects are great but I think you need much more shadows to be more focused like in front of him some light and shadow should be focused the artwork itself is brilliant with detail great lines and awesome color just needs more focus on shadow and light reflection

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More light direction and shadow focus

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[Non-Drunk Talk]

Cool

And here was another part of the story and you always seem to bring out the action scenes for the best of what they can do along with the color and style this all seems to make for some great scenes I do love your sense of color and story writing also bringing humor into it is always a plus so nice job on this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Cool stuff doesn't need changes

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[Potatoman Begins: Page 1]

Oh wow

And this was nice this is how it all started and the artwork is pale and light Wich makes it fitting to a simpler time and you have really pushed these stories to the next level so nice effort there I like the direction that this takes and you have done well with it and this reviewer is pleased with the outcome of it all

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This story and piece strives on it's own

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[Asriel's ThroneRoom]

Really beautiful

This is really beautiful with the deep purples here and the luminating colors like the lights and crystal mountain tops alot of purple uses and I can see you putting much more light effect on the lights and those Mount tops just a thought in to making this a lil better so nice job on that and great idea here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added luminating lights and purple efffects

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[The Cherub Brothers: Chapter 2.23]

Looks pretty good

So this looks pretty good I can see you adding a bit of color in here but maybe just parts I will explain that in a bit, but I do like this comic style and hope you keep making more. just like this its pretty nice stuff. Now I was really liking the work you put out here today it was something that put some nice effects and elements together, so it was a good piece of art, And I do look forward to more of your work here soon enough. there are some things that could have a more Polish to it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding a touch of color to your art here wouldnt take away from the black and white style, but adding just a touch of red or blue, so dont fill the whole drawing with color, im just saying adding a touch here and there will ad abit to it without taking away from the main drawing. anyways try it out.

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