XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tachikawa Mimi]

Really nice work

Well here was really nice work i like the water touchs here but as her leg is up why not allow for some water circles just to give that more real effect of it all, very nice job other then that, and hope to see more of your work soon here on the portal.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
so some extra water circles as she has her leg up would be nice.

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[Fruity Toot Toot]

Nice

And this was a nice piece of work great sprite would have been nice to see it with some sort of backround but overall this was a pleasure and nice detail love the color tone on this aswell, anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Would love some "BACKROUND" to this just to see how it matches up.

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[Portrait of a man I never met.]

I like this style

A nice style of art here very lovely colors and interested view you have going for it it was just all around. Artistic and pleased with it some brighter colors would be nice even a frame of sorts would be a plus here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Brighter points more focus on color

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[Klodia (OC)]

Very nice work

Now here was some very nice work love this style everything was crisp and sharp even the background was pretty solid I think the only thing here should be a light from behind her that glares out nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A beaming light from behind her would be a nice effect

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nakatan-the-seer responds:

Thank you for a good advice! :)

[Teachers]

Cute

This was pretty cute very sexy infact body was portionate and the face features we're spot on this whole piece was notbad I don't think there is need for any changes but still nice work

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No changes or improvements as this was really good from start to finish a good piece of art

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[Somewhere Other Chapter 12-13]

A good series

A good series here I love how these characters are just lovble characters and they have some funny moments and just good comic all the way around this is a series I will check out more in the future very entertaining stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe as a small colored border

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cecameron responds:

Hey, thanks so much!

[Soul Evans]

Very good

A nice art piece great character and you added expression and emotion. Very nice work that red flame ball is pretty nifty I could see you making that brighter and much more flames just an idea that could improve on this piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More flame on the flame ball

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[The Dude!]

Lol

Lol well this one was amusing and funny it just kind of jumps out at you and has some good style about it it the art is nice the shock value is thru the roof and overall it is a entertaining piece of art work I like it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Not much as this was different but you can ad some backround effects maybe lighting or specks and fancy lines just for the extra touch

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[Pumpkin Juice]

Nice work

And here this comic series I really like not because of the color even though I like color lol but you just know how to bring together a comic and even some humore to make it all work so nice job there I will look forward to more stuff like this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Would love for these to go a lil longer like more frames but it's just an idea

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ChazDude responds:

These comics are already pretty long for something that comes out 3 times a week in case you didn't realise.

[Inktober Day 22]

Decent

Ok I know you don't like color on sketches but just an idea would to have some time bits of color not everything like in this case the spiky points on the hooded thing or you could even go as a border or frame it just makes it look interesting. You have some good work though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color would be a nice idea

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