Very nice
Very impressive with this piece here there seems to be lots going on in this piece, I think theres only one real issue that you can do here, and that was build up on the "SHINE" and sparkle, make the armour really shine off, but other then that this was pretty impressive stuff.
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So since this is a metal and armour type of stuff you can really make that aspect of things shine, or even sparkle just an idea that would show off the metal a bit.
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