XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Marcy Nickles]

Cute and crazy

And here we have a cute and crazy character nice name too you gave her tons of character and that brings her to life with all the fancy props and color she really stands out and she could be used in many flash series so very nice character design here no changes at this time it's almost perfect

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned no changes here you know character design very well

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[Noir]

Love this

Well here was something really nice I love the reds and oranges I wish there was more light effects used especially common from behind that window or curtain it would really make this art piece as a whole standout even more the character was very good too maybe more shadows under the character too I would even put in a candle that lights up room as well but this was a nice piece you have here and really nice use of color that comes out well other then what I have already suggested you have outdone yourself with a beautiful piece of artwork here today

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More light coming from behind the window or curtain even adding a candle for more lighting effect could be nice too

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DocLew responds:

Thanks a lot!! I'll certainly think about your tips! I'll do better next time :)

[Space]

Very cool

I love stuff like this there's always a nice look into what the world could be or is and I love the texture on the planets the stars are nice too you should have the brighter stars sparkle even more just for the cool effect that it brings off but overall a nice backround scene here and some nice planets and stars

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A brighter star or stars would be better

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[Dr.Night (OC)]

Cool detail

And here was some nice detail I also like the story you had on your character so everything was looking pretty sharp I even like that red sparkle but I think changing it to a bright white sparkle would be more fitting but make it bright white to be a real sparkle

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A bright white sparkle would be fitting

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[Robot]

Cool robot

Very cool robot here and just from the dark and light drawing tones here you can see that you really put your time in and each sketch was a work of art lots of energy in this piece. Two things I can see you adding ofcourse some color and even just parts of him colored not the whole thing. Then there's the case of adding a background something of his world and where his story is at like a broken down city landscape or maybe even a beautiful ocean behind him you can even work my two suggestions together by adding a colored backround and leaving him as is but anyways just a few ideas that maybor may not interest you but nice work here and I look forward to much more of your works in the near future

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color. And some background as suggested

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InkRex responds:

Thank you so much! I will definitely consider this for future works.(:

[Stay Cool!!]

Cute drawing

And this was a cute little drawing and or sketch you going on here. It seemed a bit plain at times like mainly in the backround but maybe you can fill that backround with a palm tree or plants maybe a beach with an ocean even adding color would be a huge upgrade to this piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Pic is Abit bland needs a backing and even color

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[Arena Online Character Avatars]

Very nice

Very nice work here I love the deep colors too especially the purple it really has a deep texture and the gold frame is nice I would actually try and improve on the gold frame by making it more gold more shiny and ad a sparkle in the corner or corners will show more focus to the main point of view.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Frames could be more shiny and more golden

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[Dva dumpling figurine]

Nice sculpture

Here was a nice sculpture and clay too the detail in the face and body are very good. I could see you possibly making these somewhat larger and taller in scale that way you can carve in much more detail but besides that this was a night little character and you made it come to life with some nice detail

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make them larger scale for more amount of detail

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[Neon Glow]

Intense

Now here was a very intense piece I am loving the dark sense here but with the subtle light effects is notbad I think you can make those small areas more light up like the eyes and the light stretching around him from the back side light them up more and even more glow it will reflect off the dark tone and make for a really nice outcome in effects of course. This was a nice drawing you have and I bet your son just loves it it's a beautiful piece actually and shows a smooth feel and detail about it other then that I can't say much more other then that this is pretty good work and you should really show us much more of your works hope you bring out great stuff such as this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Awesome stuff maybe increase the glow effect of the lighted areas

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Skimlet responds:

Ah, thank you so much, and thanks so much for the feedback, it was very detailed witch is so incredibly helpful in showing me the areas I need to work on. I'll be sure to keep that in mind on my future works :D

[Inktober Day 2]

Notbad

And so here's number two. This one did have a good perspective the big hand while not fully perfect you still gave off that view shot very nicely so that was a plus and this one was more simple but it was an amusing piece. The backround is kind of bland I can see you improving on details there but all is good

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small backround etails or even color

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