XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inktober Day 5 Sad]

Nice art

So here I like the art was nice was stylish was entertaining and had it's own idea to tell here but you did have some cool stuff even if some of this was pretty basic the ice cream alone was interesting could have a better effect there

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Ice cream could be done better

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[My first Cyanide & Happiness comic strip]

Nice

Cheese is good as explained by this art piece it's actually kind of amusing and you showed some amusing and positive examples I like your style here you should make more stuff like this I look forward to seeing what else you can do

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I couldn't find anything to really improve on since this was more story based maybe more color

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[Hallo-Weiner]

Very nice

Now this was one of those black and white styles that you could really push some color on part of this fine drawing. What I got from this is a nice drawing I think you should have the head colored in and the rest black and white

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Color the head

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[Yoji]

Nice work

Here was a nice drawing of someone. Nice detail nice shading and there is some realistic style here you did good with this. It shows off your talent of course and the artwork all seems to come together I would think about adding some backrounds

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround detail could be added

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[Inktober Day 24]

Funny

This here was actually funny. And makes me wonder what he did eat but the drawings are good and you made some humor here so a nice piece I liked it keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Fill in the background a bit more

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[Potatoman Begins: Page 8]

Notbad

And another part of the story comes to light some good parts here actually and the whole radio activity was a good idea here. As always characters good. Storyline nice and art always on que so this was a good comic nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More radioactivity would be good more Bazar creations

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[Noire]

Love it

Now here was a nice piece of art work I love that little pink diamond or crystal. I think that should have much more of a sparkle or streak of light from it or at least a glow brighter then what you have it as now

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More brightness from diamond more streaks of lightning from it

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[Hallween shenanigans]

Nice

This was nice I like the stars. I like the backround and the comic style this represents. And great characters here. Good style and amusing. I would think about making the stars brighter it would be kinda neat

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the stars brighter

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[JoJovember 2 - King Nothing]

Different but creative

A nice and creative piece here and I say piece as it submission lol but anyways I do think you can have one or two puzzle pieces missing just like in real puzzle pieces are and as for others maybe have one or two colored even numbered lol anyways nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Get creative with some random pieces

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[Dancing Stars]

Fantastic

You have some nice skills this was a fantastic piece of art and very different the detail alone is pretty impressive I like this style and I think all this needs is maybe some borders but in the same style as the rest of your art so it matches up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some enticing borders would be a nice touch to this

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Jenny-Jinya responds:

Thank you so much, I'll be trying my best to improve! :)