XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sketchbook 06]

Very nice

I love how you did this and the black and white is nice I am thinking that the frames here should have a solid base color or something it allows for more focus but I do like your style here and the black and white really stands out so nice work there

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some colored frames would be a nice addition here

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[Zoinks Season]

Nice work

Scooby would be proud but anyways the pose she is in seems off like where her left hand is it almost seems like she's holding on to a wall or something. And you could work more on the shine on the hair it could be better in that aspect of things and back to the hand maybe you should make the backround a wall or some leverage point so it doesn't just look like there was a wall or something these are all little things that could greatly improved on an already fine piece of art work here so I hope some of these suggestions and ideas help in this or future projects

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I have suggested a few ideas in the initial review

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[Shiro NGNL]

Nice lighting

I like the lighting beaming off this. With the purples and such it really radiates the color well so you did well in that aspect of things it's a picture that tells a story of fear but that could just be me other then that I think this came out well

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I don't see any changes that really need to be made here on this lovely piece

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[Catgirl]

Very nice

This was nice. A nice burst of light comming through and presenting on the character there's something about her arms and hands that could be missing some texture or tone maybe too light there but over all a nice piece here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe too much light beating down on skin tones

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[Crock]

Love this

Now this is a beautiful piece must have tooken you a long time to get this just right but there is some detailed stuff here I like the detailed points and the pink eyes. Seems like this can be a tattoo for some one or even a shirt design

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nice design maybe some more small points of color like you did with the eyes

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[Halloween Daily monster #17]

Impressive detail

And here was some very impressive detail the darkness shadows some of it but you still can represent some sharp little details that really come out and really show how dark this truly is I'm a fan of dark stuff like this so it's a huge plus for me but I would go ahead and say brighten up the eyes so they have more of a glow effect hell I would even brighten up the lightbulb would show some focus point there but all in all this was a nifty little art piece that many will enjoy. I know I have come to enjoy the detail and your efforts here so nice job indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Brighten up the light bulb and glow the eyes somewhat

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[Lady light]

Notbad

This was notbad at all it's pretty basic and simple some nice brush strokes there seems to be so much more you could have done with this like maybe some grey strokes in the backround. And the white sketch here you have could be brightened

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Brighter lines and some background grey detail

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[The Coming of Cthulhu]

Really nice art

And here you have some really nice and smooth artwork don't think I have seen some of your stuff before but I really like the smoothness of it all how can we Improve on something so good maybe we can't but if anything the tip of the Arrowhead could have a sparkle

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nice art here I could only come up with a sparkle on the Arrowhead

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[Inktober Day 26]

Nice

Nice display of the different characters some nice designs here and some good creations here love what you do with the eyes really puts focus on the characters but anyways another nice piece here and I look forward to the next ones

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe put little frames around each character to have focus

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[PokeMashupChallenge]

Good mash up

Now here was something unique and stylish. I love how there's just a few colors to offset each other and the lightning is pretty amazing I do however think the lightning should be much brighter and glowing harder just an idea though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have the lightning glow and be more radiant

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