XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[An Error]

Nice

So first off I love purple it's one of my fave pieces of art color and this was a beautiful drawing with the color very nice drawing not sure where we can improve on to this because it's pretty solid as is and only thing at all I see you changing up would be adding some frames and or borders for an almost poertrait

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some frames and or borders along the edges

~X~

Delicake responds:

Thank you so much! I will look into spicing things up by adding borders and such :') really appreciate the feedback ^_^

[Marilyn Monroe Portrait]

Lovely piece

And here is a lovely piece the drawing is great very good detail nice drawing and the pencil work is iconic just like the character herself so you did very nice work here on a great idea maybe adding a color backround would be the end result here but besides that this was a top notch piece of work so keep that work ethic up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Awesome piece maybe a bit of color

~X~

[5]

Wow nice

Wow this was very nice the sketch and drawing itself here is very impressive very nice detail the colortone mesh so well with the sketch style work and it's all meshed just right. In all the right places and comes out in a sleek look of results so very nice work indeed and you need no changes on this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes for a sleek design

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Captain-Slow responds:

yes thanks for your ironic review =_=

[Las Vegas Collage]

Awsome

And a first look of this sums up a strong willed and styleful piece, Nice piece indeed, appropriately and classy brings light to a wonderful piece of art. And as for the art here this was awsome I made it my fave and you really braught out the color, I use to live in vegas for a bit so this was kinda nifty very nice work here. My thaughts on this are that its a slick and beautiful piece and on my ending thaughts you really did bring out the creative mind though otherwise feels it might have looked nicer with less, but you have a great piece of work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glow effects would be nice but looks like not really needed.

~X~

UltimoGames responds:

thanks!

[Knuckles and Tikal]

Notbad

Well I will say this was notbad at all, love the bright colors and well designed characters, even the backround was pretty cool, my thinking is that a burst of light should becoming from behind them and allow for some nice lighting effects to come fourth.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A burst of lighting effects from backround.

~X~

DJaxsNG responds:

I evolved. I appreciate the critique though. Definitely will keep that in mind.

[Pikachu: Reach Upon the Light]

Very nice

This was pretty good I live the moon and stars the character itself was pretty awsome, I believe you need more "GLOW" effect here like the moon and some stars could sparkle a little more then others, would great show more realistic styles here, but anyways nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More glow effects on moon and some stars.

~X~

[Byakuren Hijiri (Touhou)]

Really nice

This was really beautiful, love the backround but you should put some realistic stuff and props in the backround like a beach ball some other people swimming a sail boat just random beach stuff, but besides that you did very well on the creation of this piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you should put some realistic stuff and props in the backround like a beach ball some other people swimming a sail boat just random beach stuff.

~X~

[BOOBIES! :D]

Interesting

Well I will say this was an interesting piece, the skin tone was very well meshed, the hair had some nice shine onlything I could see you upgrading here would be making a larger canvus to show more of those fine details but other then that you did pretty good on this character.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I could see you upgrading here would be making a larger canvus to show more of those fine details.

~X~

[Twirly]

Artistic

This was some artistic style I cant understand it much but love the use of color here and seems like you could have filled in the bland spots and theres some nice art here and maybe even adding some shine to it would be a positive thing and good results.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Fill in the bland and blank spots, aswell as adding some nifty shine.

~X~

[The Bad Banditt]

Notbad

You should show your comic that this character is related too, looks like a good main character, would have loved more backround detail like more props and such, just some ideas that could help improve on this wonderful piece, but anyways nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround detail.

~X~