XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Coming of Cthulhu]

Really nice art

And here you have some really nice and smooth artwork don't think I have seen some of your stuff before but I really like the smoothness of it all how can we Improve on something so good maybe we can't but if anything the tip of the Arrowhead could have a sparkle

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Nice art here I could only come up with a sparkle on the Arrowhead

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[Inktober Day 26]

Nice

Nice display of the different characters some nice designs here and some good creations here love what you do with the eyes really puts focus on the characters but anyways another nice piece here and I look forward to the next ones

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe put little frames around each character to have focus

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[PokeMashupChallenge]

Good mash up

Now here was something unique and stylish. I love how there's just a few colors to offset each other and the lightning is pretty amazing I do however think the lightning should be much brighter and glowing harder just an idea though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have the lightning glow and be more radiant

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[Avocado Sunrise]

Fresh

This was some fresh art here very clean sharp and fresh looking colors and shapes and it all came together to make a nice outcome very peaceful that's the feeling this one gives off and this won't need any changes at all it's a positive piece

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No changes as this was an amazing piece as is

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[Arcatales Ninetales+Arcanine]

Beautiful

Now this was beautiful I like the gold color here and even some nice work on the shadow of your creature here I think you can have more shadow on that as well more darker and a bit deeper. And maybe mesh more yellows together give off a texture of a golden feel very nice work though. You have imprressed me with this as the drawing came out very well indeed now work on that gold texture and deeper shadow to really make this jump out at you. Just an idea or two for the most part it's pretty good as is

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more texture and more shadow

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[Inktober Day 19]

Notbad

Well another piece of art in the ink fest the drawings are not bad at all there is some color so I guess you do believe in color or some of it. The fries should have some shading in it or just a few lines in it but other then that this was a nice piece of work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra lines or shading in the fries would be a plus on detail

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[Elise Concept Art]

Very nice and red

So one of my fave colors are red and you have outdone yourself here with pushing the red saw some gold parts in here too so with all the red you should make the gold parts really shine and glare for that extra shock value

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the gold shine and glare off more

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[Time Machine]

Nice

And once again you bring us another fun story or part of it anyways it has some funny moments and of course you know me I love that color but it's the humor that really worked well on this and you executed it well so nice job on this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Honestly no changes needed on these comic ones

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[Earth Chan]

Really nice drawing

And here we have a nice drawing and coloerd well and a nice sloagan as well all a nice piece of work that you have here I thaught you could have done a little more with backrounds and such and even more shine on the hair. Those are just a few ideas that might run thru your head but overall this was a pretty decent piece. I like the line work here and the overall design of this it seemed to all work out for the best though and I enjoyed reviewing it so nice job indeed anyways untill next time keep up the great wor

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine on the hair and something more to do with the backgrounds

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TreC101 responds:

Thanks for the feedback :) I agree with what you said about the hair, but I didn't draw any backgrounds because this piece was just a quick lil thing to get over with. I do get where you're coming from though and really appreciate your suggestions :D

Also, Merry Christmas!

[Togaa]

Wow sexy

Now this was a pretty sexy piece it's so subtle and simple with the soft colors you don't see the sexyness about it but stare into this beautiful price for a bit and you will see what I mean. It's a nice piece of work you have here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think just some pink or brown borders would fit in perfectly

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