XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Flying is fun!]

Nice

So Im not familuar with this story but the artwork you have here is pretty good very nice and smooth lines love the addition of the birds onlything this may need may be a sun burst of light or even sun shining somewhere in the backround Just some ideas that may enhance this beautiful piece already.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
onlything this may need may be a sun burst of light or even sun shining somewhere in the backround.

~X~

[YOSHI]

Cute

Yoshi at his best a cute version of him, I wouldnt mind seeing more "SHINE" on his shell and nose and maybe even adding some type of patteren in the backround something different from that base color, but its a great design of a classic character, so nice effort here indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine and, even adding some type of patteren in the backround something different from that base color.

~X~

[ikeda asaemon]

Nice character

A nice character you have here the red and blacks work well together that yellow flowers she has on in the middle could have more of a shine and would set off more of the rest of the color but honestly besides that this is actually a really good character design and I was pretty happy with the design as a whole

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have some shine here or there

~X~

[Beth skirt lift]

A cute piece

And here was a cute piece the one thing I think this could use would be some more shine like in the hair and also the back side and even down the legs would make for a great piece and the sine would come off well. Just an idea but an idea that will work well so try it out and let it shine deep from the light

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine would be nice on hair and legs

~X~

[Kenku]

Very artistic

This was very artistic, the shades the meshes of the birds feathers etc was very deep, and those eyes are so neat you could really make them light up and hlow and would create an even better effect, so overall a nice piece of artwork here. Your creative styles have comeout for sure today, cant wait to see whatelse you do come up with, and I will be looking forward to seeing more of your efforts in art and creativity. And so this Concludes my little review hope you have enjoyed it as much as I have. anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the eyes light up more and even glow.

~X~

[Agent 47]

Nice

I like this piece for its subtle elegance, the white backrounds are ok with this one and you bring out some nice features here, I would have more blood dripping maybe even throw in a dripping frame or border. just an idea or two that may help or not help.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More dripping blood more like a dripping border even.

~X~

[An Error]

Nice

So first off I love purple it's one of my fave pieces of art color and this was a beautiful drawing with the color very nice drawing not sure where we can improve on to this because it's pretty solid as is and only thing at all I see you changing up would be adding some frames and or borders for an almost poertrait

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some frames and or borders along the edges

~X~

Delicake responds:

Thank you so much! I will look into spicing things up by adding borders and such :') really appreciate the feedback ^_^

[Marilyn Monroe Portrait]

Lovely piece

And here is a lovely piece the drawing is great very good detail nice drawing and the pencil work is iconic just like the character herself so you did very nice work here on a great idea maybe adding a color backround would be the end result here but besides that this was a top notch piece of work so keep that work ethic up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Awesome piece maybe a bit of color

~X~

[5]

Wow nice

Wow this was very nice the sketch and drawing itself here is very impressive very nice detail the colortone mesh so well with the sketch style work and it's all meshed just right. In all the right places and comes out in a sleek look of results so very nice work indeed and you need no changes on this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes for a sleek design

~X~

Captain-Slow responds:

yes thanks for your ironic review =_=

[Las Vegas Collage]

Awsome

And a first look of this sums up a strong willed and styleful piece, Nice piece indeed, appropriately and classy brings light to a wonderful piece of art. And as for the art here this was awsome I made it my fave and you really braught out the color, I use to live in vegas for a bit so this was kinda nifty very nice work here. My thaughts on this are that its a slick and beautiful piece and on my ending thaughts you really did bring out the creative mind though otherwise feels it might have looked nicer with less, but you have a great piece of work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glow effects would be nice but looks like not really needed.

~X~

UltimoGames responds:

thanks!