XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Halloween Daily monster #14]

Very detailed

And here was something detailed a nice creature that came from some distant planet I could see you having more dripping comming down and then the backround color is the same as the creature maybe have the backround a base solid color different from the actual creature just something different

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Different color backing

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[A hope]

The art is nice

The art is good here very good rich in detail nice comic style aswell not too many frames here but I'm thinking so things stand out even more maybe we could get the frames or borders as some like to call them make them more thicker even adding some color to them would be a plus on things. Just something

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Possibly but maybe not. The borders frames could be thicker

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DaveRooder responds:

Page 2 : https://mavruda.deviantart.com/art/A-Hope-page-2-640791711

There's page 3, but things at that time went somehow bad to me and never made to finish it.

[Scorpion lady]

Love the design here

I like what you have here the line work is beautiful and you have a good pose here now I'm not gonna lie here this could use some colors to really radiant this into some deeper visuals and color can ad that detail but as the drawing itself it's a nice piece you can see how it all comes together I would put more line detail on the tree like if it was an old tree just something to think about I would even suggest more effort on the background as well more little detail all around etc but most of all this just needs some color but anyways it was a pleasure to review this fine piece of art work I had a good time

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra detail in the backround and some color would be great

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[BOOM!]

Very impressive

Now here was something really impressive with some sunny feel good feeling a beautiful star moving thru the clouds with joy and speed now I believe you can make the star shine and what I mean by that is have it glow with a radient gold but anyways you have outdone yourself with a beautiful art star here and suggested glow maybor may not help but it's an idea that may work anyways nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try more glow and shine on the star

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[Take My Hand]

Beautiful piece

There's so much about this that is beautiful I like all the elements in place and that moon I don't know feel like it could be bigger maybe brighter more luminated but maybe that's just me you have some nice color and everything meshed well together and overall this is a nice art piece and glad I reviewed it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting or larging up the moon

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Xiolee responds:

thank you :D

[Russel]

Nice

Nice work here the skin tones are absolutely beautiful and we'll textured into just the right tone that was a very nice touch the detail of this whole piece was beautiful and I really liked what you did here some nice design great backround and just overall great stuff here so keep up the great artistic stulish stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Great creation no changes needed

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flurohead responds:

Thank you so much for the feedback XwaynecoltX! I really appreciate the compliments and will strive for the best in upcoming works :)

[Christmas 2017]

Very sharp looking

Wow I must say you really outdid yourself here with this beautiful piece a very nice piece the reds really stand out and everything has come to light and the shine is very impressive as well some nice points here and you even made it to be funny and amusing as for improving on things I would say maybe more shine but you really covers it all in this absolutely beautiful creation very cute as well nice job all the way around here so other then the shine on some points like lips it doesn't need much more if even that so anyways it was a pleasure to review this it's a positive piece all the way around

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine would be nice on lips maybe but probably not needed

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kyllaandotto responds:

Wow!!!
Thank you very much for this review!!!!
It is always nice to read comments like this :D
Thank you so much!!!

[Adult Tav / RP gift]

Nice design

And here was a nice characters I do think you should work on some backrounds here it was nifty with everything else though the wings the horns all came out pretty well and nice design over all so in a magical sense the wings should glow a bit and the horns could be light up a bit more maybe even have some more sparkle and shine to them just something to think about. But anyways hope that helps

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting effects and shine ideas

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[Drowning]

Very deep

I sometimes find that depression hightens my ideas and thoughts on writing for me but as for your art work here it has a few meanings it seems very nice use of colors and it tells a small story here those lights at the bottom of the ocean or lake should be light up even more and maybe go as far as have the skyline light up as well but overall this was a nice bunch here of artistic style and deep thaught

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting up of some spots

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[Happy Holidays! (2017)]

Notbad

Kind of like an animated card with some soft and appealing artwork. A nice little animation I actually think there should have been two bulbs dropping one drop and break and the second drop and bounce off like you had it there already just something nice to do a little extra there anyways nice art

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested a small improvment

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