XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Happy Holidays! (2017)]

Notbad

Kind of like an animated card with some soft and appealing artwork. A nice little animation I actually think there should have been two bulbs dropping one drop and break and the second drop and bounce off like you had it there already just something nice to do a little extra there anyways nice art

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested a small improvment

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[Forest Monster]

Very intense

Well with this one you were very intense the texture and skin tones alone we're pretty impressive stuff the backround with the fog was even better and really made this look like you have created a world and such I could see you adding some eyes in the fog looking on just as there might be other hidden creatures and such but it was a great piece well defined with some nice little details and all the elements that come with this so nice piece so anyways hope you keep making mysterious stuff such as this one because it was a pleasent suprise anyways untill next time

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some eyes in the backround lurking on would be one idea

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[Advent: Day 21]

Wow very impressive

This was very impressive the in your face style was very effective I love all the little detail you have put into this piece the sketching the shading the detail the style just all around good stuff here very intense stuff and I was pleased to have check this out. So nice work indeed hope you keep making stuff like this just as good

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I could totally see the eyes just the eyes colored here

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[Sketchbook 06]

Very nice

I love how you did this and the black and white is nice I am thinking that the frames here should have a solid base color or something it allows for more focus but I do like your style here and the black and white really stands out so nice work there

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some colored frames would be a nice addition here

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[Zoinks Season]

Nice work

Scooby would be proud but anyways the pose she is in seems off like where her left hand is it almost seems like she's holding on to a wall or something. And you could work more on the shine on the hair it could be better in that aspect of things and back to the hand maybe you should make the backround a wall or some leverage point so it doesn't just look like there was a wall or something these are all little things that could greatly improved on an already fine piece of art work here so I hope some of these suggestions and ideas help in this or future projects

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I have suggested a few ideas in the initial review

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[Shiro NGNL]

Nice lighting

I like the lighting beaming off this. With the purples and such it really radiates the color well so you did well in that aspect of things it's a picture that tells a story of fear but that could just be me other then that I think this came out well

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I don't see any changes that really need to be made here on this lovely piece

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[Catgirl]

Very nice

This was nice. A nice burst of light comming through and presenting on the character there's something about her arms and hands that could be missing some texture or tone maybe too light there but over all a nice piece here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe too much light beating down on skin tones

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[Crock]

Love this

Now this is a beautiful piece must have tooken you a long time to get this just right but there is some detailed stuff here I like the detailed points and the pink eyes. Seems like this can be a tattoo for some one or even a shirt design

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nice design maybe some more small points of color like you did with the eyes

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[Halloween Daily monster #17]

Impressive detail

And here was some very impressive detail the darkness shadows some of it but you still can represent some sharp little details that really come out and really show how dark this truly is I'm a fan of dark stuff like this so it's a huge plus for me but I would go ahead and say brighten up the eyes so they have more of a glow effect hell I would even brighten up the lightbulb would show some focus point there but all in all this was a nifty little art piece that many will enjoy. I know I have come to enjoy the detail and your efforts here so nice job indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Brighten up the light bulb and glow the eyes somewhat

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[Lady light]

Notbad

This was notbad at all it's pretty basic and simple some nice brush strokes there seems to be so much more you could have done with this like maybe some grey strokes in the backround. And the white sketch here you have could be brightened

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Brighter lines and some background grey detail

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