XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Lucario for 2Mickennxtre68]

Good Paint

This is a good colored up sketch but iit needs more of a background... the character itself is drawn out well and has a good use of shadows and shines to it. The position of the Lucario is a standard one so it is good you were able to work with that...id use less black lines in the future to give a more blended look..you mentioned this as a speed paint so i am not sure how much you contributed but more details next time is best

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Give this a nice background and maybe limit your use of the black lines to blend things better

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RainbowDogma responds:

Thanks for the critique. The reason there's no BG is cause the person who requested it is planning to have it appear in a game they're making, so i left the bg transparent (this version just has a plain white background so the watermark is visible) to give them an easier time of placing it wherever they like; similar reasoning was why i wanted the lines very deliberate and clear, since i'm unsure how exactly it will fit into the world. If the requester asks me to make it colored lineart or simply more painterly around the edges, that is easily fixed.

[Charm]

Wow

Wow This is beautifull I am loving the "PINK" on this one and those eyes wow to die for the pink hair is really mezmerizing though, and love the paint style on this a very pasty style, this one will be one of my new faves I love your artistic style and hope to see much more of your work sometime soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have the pink hair or portions of it glow or have some sort of glow effects like if theres a magic element in there

~X~

[Miss tia pinup]

Very nice

Wow I must say this was very nice work it has a subtle approach to it and such, the colors are light, and theres a lot of shine on her and thats ok, I do think you should ad more of a mesh feel to her lingerie clothing to give it that more real effect and all. A nice piece of work you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think you should ad more of a mesh feel to her lingerie clothing to give it that more real effect and all

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HOLIMOUNT2 responds:

I fully agree , im not entirely proud of how this piece came out.

[Valentine's day.]

Nice

Haha this was pretty interesting, I like all the different variations and change in stuff, also congrats on frontpaged on this that was pretty cool, I think you should actually ad some borders on this a nice colored one would be great, but a nice art piece if I say so myself.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you should actually ad some borders on this a nice colored one would be great

~X~

[Taehyung]

Wonderful

Well this guy seems familiar. Is this V, the South Korean singer? The use of blending the skin colors brings out a realistic touch the depth of the eyes and proportions of the lips are realistic. The colors in the bandana are very vibrant and bring a wonderful touch to a common portrait..his expression in the face and facial features are very well drawn almost looks like a photograph..

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe a bit of changes around the eyes more shine in them but it is pretty good as is

~X~

fireferreto responds:

Hiii! Yes, this is, indeed, BTS's V!
This is literally the most helpful and descriptive comment I've received in social media so far, so thanks a lot! I will work on this for sure!
xoxo

[The Red Arremer]

Nice work

So this was some nice work I can see a few changes one being that backround something even a pattern or design of some sort but also have the eyes glow a bright green or red would be a big change but a very nice effect and that would get better results but besides all that this was pretty good

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Glow in the eyes and some work on the background

~X~

[Smokey Serpent]

Nice detail

Looks like some nice detail here especially all the little scales here on the outter coat of things seems like you could have some deeper colors on this and bring the texture out or shades but besides that looks like you could have added to the backround too adding something more then what you had there so nice work all the way around I love the detail

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more detail on the scales and also backround

~X~

[Doom Toad Wallpaper]

Beautiful piece

And here was a beautiful piece filled with lots of color and lots of devotion into this world and it made it all a fun place love the use of color and all the happenings with characters and so on lots going on a very good piece of artwork here keep up the fantastic piece I like everything about this and don't have a negative thing to say at all

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes needed you have outdone yourself here

~X~

[Yelsa Noodom]

Cute

Well this was cute I like the pose and the smirky look and all seems like the colors are a bit off like the green pants are don't seem to fit all that well with the other colors and those are something you could ad some texture into just an opinion but the green just doesn't fit well it seems maybe something different

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some texture and meshed pants might be nice

~X~

[VW Golf - Turnaround]

Nice car

This was pretty cool and I love the animation on this aswell almost like if its in a show room of some sorts, but the car was cool the glass on the windows seem like they could have more of a sparkle and shine to it, but besides that its a nice car you have here and nice design. So that was a good art piece, some areas could be more creative but I do understand the direction with this, it was a pretty good presentation and something differant, so nice work here. and I look forward to more of what you may have.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine and sparkle on the window glass of the car.

~X~

devilsgarage responds:

Thanks for the commends and feedback - yeah the show room camera perspective definitely help sell that feeling.
The intended direction was to make it look like it lost all the luster and shine - but still a well-maintained classic veedub . Those sparkles would definitely work on brand spanking new piece like this baby - https://twitter.com/devilsgarage/status/840630668631527424
I would love to expand on this servies - all in due time, check back and thanks for dropping by