XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Miss Pauling]

Interesting

this one here is a nice view on a teacher cartoon. Good background, simple.. but gets a point. Her smile and glasses are cute and drawn out well. The details in the hair is good...the texture, shines, shadows, and overall color is great but the girl needs a bit more work in her hand the hand just seems off psychicaly so id try to focus on that aspect of your characters more. gotta love a teacher with a kill list...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just work on the way you draw hands and that is really all i can say

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[The Fleet to the Rescue]

Very nice

This was pretty cool, and nice effects I like the lighting effects you have going on already I do think you could expand on those effects more brightness more glares and more shine it would greatly improve onto this delightfull piece, so nice work on this one indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting and shine effects.

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[Ryu (Street Fighter)]

Notbad

Well notbad here it is a little "BLAND" especially with no backround, but you could also take the extra step and put more meshing of shades in the skin and clothing for that extra effect. But the drawing itself is notbad at all, could use some more effort though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you could also take the extra step and put more meshing of shades in the skin and clothing for that extra effect. Also adding some form of backround detail would be nice.

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[innocent mink]

Nifty

A nifty piece of art here and character and you gave it some humor too, I think you could improve on this like the canvus could be much larger and I would think about going with a different backround even, but the rest was pretty good even funny, so nice effort here but could use a few upgrades.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a few upgrades such as larger canvus, a different backround.

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[I Think We're Lost This Time.]

Very beautiful piece

Wow This was delightfull, a beautiful piece you have here, the "PIXLE" format is always interesting and you went beyond on this pice making it somewhat different and the color theme on this is very deep and textured so very nice work here, I would love to see more stuff like this from you its beautifull.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make more unique pixle stuff like this.

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[Male Munchskin]

Really nice

I like this I want to see some added color into this or atleast parts of it, like the backround or little tid bits here and there of the actual sketch and character itself, it is actually pretty good drawing and you have some nice shading skills aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color on parts or all of this.

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[Hello Daft Eva]

Nice piece here

I love these robot designs some nice use of color in there aswell, and decent backround, I think you could brighten up some of the rainbow colors and brighter stuff have them glow a bit, and that was the onlything I can really see here but you have done a fantastic job here really nice work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some brightening up of some colors.

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[Lucario for 2Mickennxtre68]

Good Paint

This is a good colored up sketch but iit needs more of a background... the character itself is drawn out well and has a good use of shadows and shines to it. The position of the Lucario is a standard one so it is good you were able to work with that...id use less black lines in the future to give a more blended look..you mentioned this as a speed paint so i am not sure how much you contributed but more details next time is best

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Give this a nice background and maybe limit your use of the black lines to blend things better

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RainbowDogma responds:

Thanks for the critique. The reason there's no BG is cause the person who requested it is planning to have it appear in a game they're making, so i left the bg transparent (this version just has a plain white background so the watermark is visible) to give them an easier time of placing it wherever they like; similar reasoning was why i wanted the lines very deliberate and clear, since i'm unsure how exactly it will fit into the world. If the requester asks me to make it colored lineart or simply more painterly around the edges, that is easily fixed.

[Charm]

Wow

Wow This is beautifull I am loving the "PINK" on this one and those eyes wow to die for the pink hair is really mezmerizing though, and love the paint style on this a very pasty style, this one will be one of my new faves I love your artistic style and hope to see much more of your work sometime soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have the pink hair or portions of it glow or have some sort of glow effects like if theres a magic element in there

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[Miss tia pinup]

Very nice

Wow I must say this was very nice work it has a subtle approach to it and such, the colors are light, and theres a lot of shine on her and thats ok, I do think you should ad more of a mesh feel to her lingerie clothing to give it that more real effect and all. A nice piece of work you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do think you should ad more of a mesh feel to her lingerie clothing to give it that more real effect and all

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HOLIMOUNT2 responds:

I fully agree , im not entirely proud of how this piece came out.