XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Buu]

Nice

So this one had a nice glow on it I like glow effects and stuff like that and the character was cool but maybe it was too dark around the edges so I would suggest lighten that up just a tad but the rest was fine if you ask me

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lighten up the outter edges just a bit

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[Cold Coffee]

I see alot here

So for me this is much more then a cup of coffee you bring a lot of emotion into this just the expression on her face is a story in itself, and you bring all that out and very welldone, the texture and mesh details are very well done, I could even see you going farther into this and adding a tear on her face. You have some amazing ideas and that shows here, the effortsof your labor come through and it shows strong with detail, so I for sure am excited for more of your work. I became Accustomed to this style allthough I was not at first, You put a nice little twist on this. but anyways nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding more emotion even a tear or two.

~X~

[Smexy Tron Cosplay Lavandra]

Very beautiful piece

And this was wonderfull and a beautifuly presented peice at that you even bring some nice detail and lighting effects with the sage, her expressions are perfect and match the elements the form of her is just beautifull, a very nice art piece you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would brighten up the lighting effects on the stage just a tad bit more.

~X~

[Green Eyes]

Wow

What a good use of color in those eyes, the eyes remind me of my girl...the saturated deep bright green. The hair color and line work is good and the shades and shadows in the hair work well..i like the body position and slight head tilt. I would maybe give a background here since the white is a good focus for the girl but the background would add a more scenic element

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just maybe a background and less white for a scene

~X~

[Destroyer of that World]

Beautiful

And here is a beautifull piece, the color is just amazing and the fire and flames really stand out, one thing I would polish up would be more brighter lighting effects and glows since your work is based on flames and such, and would give off a very nice polished look.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More brighter lighting effects.

~X~

[Two point perspective]

I love this view

You really captured the view shot here that corner spot is very impressive and brings out those old city views, I would love to see a more clear and sharper view of this including dragging some color into this, but for what it is its a great city view, the kind of city I would love to live in.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color and a clearer more sharper quality would be nice.

~X~

[ATARI 2600 3-D Model]

Cool

This is very cool and realistic I remember having this control many fun times as a teen you did a real nice job on it giving that realistic feel and look to it, I am pretty impressed with this, Really wish you would make more stuff like this they are most impressive.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I wouldnt mind putting a lil shine on it.

~X~

[Miss Pauling]

Interesting

this one here is a nice view on a teacher cartoon. Good background, simple.. but gets a point. Her smile and glasses are cute and drawn out well. The details in the hair is good...the texture, shines, shadows, and overall color is great but the girl needs a bit more work in her hand the hand just seems off psychicaly so id try to focus on that aspect of your characters more. gotta love a teacher with a kill list...

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just work on the way you draw hands and that is really all i can say

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[The Fleet to the Rescue]

Very nice

This was pretty cool, and nice effects I like the lighting effects you have going on already I do think you could expand on those effects more brightness more glares and more shine it would greatly improve onto this delightfull piece, so nice work on this one indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting and shine effects.

~X~

[Ryu (Street Fighter)]

Notbad

Well notbad here it is a little "BLAND" especially with no backround, but you could also take the extra step and put more meshing of shades in the skin and clothing for that extra effect. But the drawing itself is notbad at all, could use some more effort though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you could also take the extra step and put more meshing of shades in the skin and clothing for that extra effect. Also adding some form of backround detail would be nice.

~X~