XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[School]

Very nice

And here you show off your skills on color because you use some nice blues here and lightning effects really come off well with the effect this seems to have a blue effect about it and theme and you pulled it off just perfectly so nice job indeed so nice work and can't wait to see more of what you bring to the portal

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nice lighting I think you did awesome and no changes are needed at this time

~X~

[heartbroken]

Oh wow

Wow this was absolutely stunning piece with lots to see I like the little animation of the snow dropping also that's a plus right there the lighting and just everything that comes with this was very pleasent a very well rounded piece if you ask me I like what you have done here so nice job indeed anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think it's perfect as is no changes needed

~X~

radshoe responds:

why thank you! ;D

[Sewer Team]

Awesome work

And you have some awesome detail here you went all out with shadows and shine and little things like that. That really showed off well so nice job there. I do however think that you should have shown much more light effect and shine on this whole piece. Even from the lantern there should be some sunburst or sparkles of light reflection outwards and then some shine on the shield and armour would also be nice aswell just an idea to reflect more of that light and shine all in the right place but you have really outdone yourself here with some nice effects nice artistic drawing and a good style all around.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More lighting effects and bursts of light effects

~X~

[Girl face]

Very cool

Well this was pretty cool and nice idea here I like the vibrant pink you have added here like with the eyes I am thinking as an idea maybe use that pink for the border frame as well as the signature it will just something that will really bring out things more the rest will be fine as is though and gives it some small depth

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more use of the violet or pink on other areas

~X~

[Dave Commission]

Notbad

Well notbad the art is smooth and it's good that you both are very happy with the results. I myself wish you could do more with the hair but it's all still good. It's nice but maybe a few curls so it don't look too painted on and such. A very nice piece of work though and nice cool colors as well so you did good

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small changes with the hair would be interesting

~X~

[Untitled 128]

Very nice work

And here we have some very nice art work love that eye as afocus point but I do like the darkness in this and that may be your focus but that eye could be some light up area with some tint of color but you do have a nice idea here and it's always cool to see stuff like this anyways nice job on all fronts here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some tint of color or even some light

~X~

[Trench Patrol]

Nice detail

Well lots of detail in here the backrounds the effort shows alot of detail here very nice style. But the amount of detail is very good it's just the little things that really jump out and honestly that's what I liked here so nice job on this piece here anyways good work and hope to see more soon. It was a pleasure

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I don't know seems pretty good as is

~X~

foamymuffin responds:

thanks, appreciate all types of feedback. ye i see what you mean with trying to get things to pop out more.

[Piggy Bank]

wow

Now this is just crawling with appeal all across the board. the greens and yellows and reds all "JUMP" out at you with a vibrant foam of color so very nice work there and I was very impressed with the outcome here and really do look forward to more of your stuff here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So with this piece no changes are needed and I will tell you why because its perfect in its own unique way. So while this is an improvements section no changes needed.

~X~

[Purgatory Game]

Cool

And here is another table game you have outdone yourself once again and I have seen you do these before this was with out a doubt a beautiful piece and a fantastic idea that works well and would love to see you present this with some real stats, but nice idea.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More larger canvus with more statistics on the games itself.

~X~

[Warhammer]

Wow

These are pretty impressive I have wanted to do something like this for awhile now but you have a nice idea here the paint doesn't show too well but maybe some silver or greys you can give it a shine or something some kind of light color that could represent some shine and with the already dark paints you could probably pull it off just something to think about but great idea here with painting these would love to see more of these figures painted and such. So besides the light paint for shine maybe even do a set or series of them with blood and such to also give off that war feel to it all so just give a few ideas there to see what works and what doesn't

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some other paints for blood and shine etc

~X~