XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Improvement!!]

Very nice

Very nice work here this is a good character portrait of someone you seem to like the theme of green and make it work. You have a nice blended backround including some blended textures on the clothing the character itself is well drawn and the lines are smooth and the colors are even fresher so a very well done piece with some nice choices of blends and textures. I'm not sure what you can really improve on here but if anything at all maybe a base frame or border just to accent the character design much more. And that's just an idea I could see you doing nothing and this still being a fine piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested a border. But maybe not needed as much

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RynoMountain responds:

Tnx for ur compliment and honesty and what do u mean by "base frame or border", could u explain or show an exemple.

[Grim reaper daughter]

Awesome detail

This was very interesting stuff here you have added lots of detail and a unique design of little stuff that really stood out and in nice gesture so this was very good it's those little things that drew me into this I do think the scyth needs some shading and texture and shine so something to think about next time

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Scyth could use some detail

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RynoMountain responds:

To be frank I got bored drawing it, was impatient so I left it that.

[yellowducky]

Alright

Well not sure what to think on this it's kind of amusing if anything at all I do like the simplistically of it and the ducky is cool I do however think you need to ad much more depth to the backround and at least ad some sort of textured backround or a dark mustard base backround to reflect off the main focus

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround work would suffice

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[BFF - Pg 006]

Very nice

So what can I say that I have not already as this was very good love the larger frames in this one and as for the actual comic you bring a certain element about it that really thrusts the story forward and showing the detail in the artwork with great shades and detail and even the textures of some areas that really standout and I like the results you are a talented artist and I'm glad you made this and showed us some nice art details now as for improvments I'm not sure as you have covered alot and already thinking outside the box I know I would love to see more tid bits of color not all of it but just a piece here and there a hat a TV etc kinda like you did in one of your other comics

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some tid bits of color on props or just some random item

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[BFF - Pg 002]

Very unique

And once again you have amazed me with a brilliant piece here nice frames and thinking outside of the box with some of these great ideas the comic itself was pretty impressive with a style on it's own I love the color did bits you added as well makes for a nice little toon here keep up the fancy fancy work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra color would be nice but not everything

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[BFF - Pg 004]

Wow

Wow I have to say you are really thinking outside of the box here it's just blows my mind how you can make a comic but make it so unique and stylish the toon doesn't need to stay with in the frame and you have changed that element here maybe add some color to the frames and etc but it's a great piece if comic work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Color in the frames

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[Sketch of a girl]

Nice sketch

Very nice work here I noticed you don't have too much showcasing work you should make more but as for this piece this was very nice work I especially like what you have going on with the hair here it's very realistic and the curls are nice and great color as well an overall nice sketch you have here hope to see more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
It's a natrual piece no changes needed

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[Submission01]

Very nice work

And here was some nice work and some really nice effects and such just like with the hair being transparent that was a nice touch and never seen that done before. Would be nice if more artists did that more but anyways it was a nice effect. I love that you put two different colored eyes that was different I think you can have these eyes really glow cause that would really make this piece unique and different ofcourse but as for that it will take some updates and I hope it's something you can pull off cause it's a really nice effect but anyways nice job once again gotta check out more of your work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glow on the eyes would be a very nice touch

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[Dangers in the Deep]

Awesome

Awsome work here you can see all the talents you bring to the table with this fine artwork and you show the deep dangers of the ocean I really like the light from sun beaming down inward from the sun. I believe that should be somewhat brighter and more depth to it just an idea though but you have some nice talents here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The sun light Ray's could be brightened

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