XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Demon Girl]

More flame

This is one of those pieces that you could really use more flame more burning more fire and of course more shine just a very nice piece of art work you have here but needs that extra shine of fire and flame and nice burning sensation that would really push this to the next level of detail so try it out

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More flame more fire

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[Muffin Style: Trip Jutsu]

Cute

Lol this was something cute and funny it's a quick one and the animated part was notbad I think you can ad some sort of improvments like when the sprite falls down have more of an effect and some background effect would be nice too aswell as some lighting in backround but a nice effort here so keep that up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small lighting and backround effects

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[2017 Jinx BE]

Very good

So first of all props to you on a great use of color you really know what colors to use and you push them hard so nice job there it was a pleasure reviewing this I also like the drawing from all the little details to the backround scene so all around you have pushed some detail and a nice amount of color the stocking seems to need some shine tho and maybe more shine in the hair as well but overall a nice piece all around and was pretty pleased with your amount of color and detail so anyways before I do leave this piece I will say it's been a pleasure and look forward to even more of your fine works

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine here and there and such

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[Just lookin' at the stars]

Awesome

Well here was something awesome I really like what you did with the blue here and the stars wish you had a much larger canvus here to showcase more of the detail of the painting the stars close up could show more detail and maybe some light up effects on those stars as well but other then that this was pretty good stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A bigger canvus and lightning up the stars more would be nice

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Zaccura responds:

Thanks so much for the review! I definitely plan on doing more illustrations like this and on bigger canvases. I used a tiny piece here because I thought I was just testing stuff but then it ended up turning into a little illustration lol. And I'll look into giving more life into them stars. Thanks again!

[Blue getting high]

Very artistic

Very nice work here. I like the artistic value you bring to this entry and the portal itself you have some nice color used here and the bright vibrant colors is very nice and overall a nice touch to make things stand out more so nice job there anyways hope to see more of your stuff real soon as it's an interesting style

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing here as this brings it's own style aboard

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AMSG responds:

Thanks, I'm glad you like it!

[Nuclear Fallout Game]

Interesting game here

Looks like some interesting stuff here and a nice design that is also interesting tobad you couldnt have show more progress on how it works and stuff, rules etc stuff like that to show the game play, but the graphics are pretty impressive, very sleek and fresh design. Decent flash here, would like to see this go even further with more detail, more effort and more of this unique style, just keep up the great work, and keep making these awsome art pieces. you have an interesting style that I have come to enjoy, so keep at it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
tobad you couldnt have show more progress on how it works and stuff, rules etc stuff like that to show the game play.

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[Chun Li-Steampunk]

Very nice

So this was pretty good nice shine and the head was notbad I am thinking the head could be somewhat larger seemed abit off from something else but you have a very nice piece of work here and the shine is great, maybe more shine and bigger head, but still a great piece of work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe more shine and bigger head.

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[till the next year.]

Wow beautiful

This is absolutely beautiful the city the lights the clouds this has so much structure about it I think you can have more lighting come from the back roads more to really light up the back of the city in it's dim own way you have a beautiful painting here though with a beautiful view of a city that is rising or ready to collapse but it's anyone's imagination but I have to say what you did here was amazing so yes you can still paint and you have some style this one from my point of view just needs more sunlight from the back end of the city comming up but anyways nice work here keep up the fantastic painting

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Fantastic piece just needs some more sun light from the back

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[Monos]

Cool

We'll have to say that this was pretty cool very subtle and just simplistic the light background is actually a pretty nice touch I think a busrt of sunlight behind the character would be a nice lil touch but also possibly not needed but anyways overall a decent piece of simplistic style here that worked out well

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just a tad bit of burst of sunlight

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[happy machine]

Very cool

So I really love purple and this was pretty nifty some more sparkle crosses could be added in different places and such the deep purple here was pretty cool and you have a nice deep balance in there and it shows off pretty well and I like the piece as a whole so nice job all the way around so once again nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes needed except more sparkle crosses

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