XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Open Adopts : Rabbit (Update)]

WOW

This is really very detailed and drawn in such a beautiful way. The face has such good detail it looks as if it is based on a video game still or maybe off an anime. The colors you have used are great and the rabbit ears and cute and realistic for dressup. The subtle mirror background fits in with your overall theme and character. And what can I say more about this interesting and unqique piece of art, ofcourse there could be improvments but from what I have seen on this creation you have impressed this reviewer. You have Extended your efforts in this one and pushed the desire to create a fantastic piece. I think that maybe you just need to lower your prices in the description as most artists aren't going to charge that high on an adopt like this, but I could be wrong.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe lower the price you are asking by 10% but otherwise a great cute piece here

~X~

[Not a chicken!]

Very colorfull

Wow I like this for alot of things you did very nice on the shine and polish, but the color alone is very impressive and brings the whole piece out much more, the green bike is beautifull maybe adding a bit of sparkle and shine on bike would be a nice touch aswell, overall a great piece of colorful art here, I look forward to more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small extra shine here and there.

~X~

[Lifter]

Beautiful piece

I would love to see more shine on this and more glow on the light up parts but its very impressive with what you have already a very shiny and sleek design I can see the energy and time must have been put in on this and the end results are absolutly beatifull and mezmerising. so nice work here indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe more sparkle and shine even some glow effects on the digital lights.

~X~

[untitled 2]

Deep

So this one was pretty deep and intense from the visual this almost looks like its underwater maybe because everything is green, I would suggest lighten up the "SKY" a darker blue would be a nice touch even, but besides that this was a very nice painting and lots of talent has come out of this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A lighter sky color would be a plus.

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[Succubus]

Wow

Very nice indeed, this has a very dark element and thats probably the intent here you really have pushed the darkness allthough I think you should ad some burst of light from behind her but looks like you had some of that but could be pushed abit brighter, besides that this was a nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think you should ad some burst of light from behind her but looks like you had some of that but could be pushed abit brighter.

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[My Meltdown At Midnight]

Wow nice

And here is something really nice I love the "GREEN" you have going on here and the dark backround you really allow the lighting effects to take place allthough the green could push a glow and more brighter to make that lighting effects even better, just an idea you may want to try out, but besides that a nice piece of work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting and glow effects on the green.

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[Showtime]

Beautiful

Very hot and nicely done art here. The bodies and blending of colors with details, textures, and shadows all work out very nicely. It looks like a painting from digital art. I think the head to neck aspect is a bit off in their bodies but that may just be the way these girls are designed based on your fanart. Overall pretty nice detailed fanart girls here. And on the ending note here some good visual here with this art piece, some things could be better as stated, but overall this was actually notbad at all, and I do look forward to seeing more of your work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing to really change maybe just the way the heads meet the body in positioning, and maybe even more shine from the sparkls in the backround let it really light up.

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TreC101 responds:

Wow! Thanks for the feedback, I'll take the things you said in consideration with my future art. Hopefully they'll get better :D Thanks again!

[Aisling]

Very well done

This here was a well done piece I love the "CIRCLE" visual here and border, I honestly would only suggest one thing to upgrade and change up and that would be to ad some "SHINE" to the hair maybe a streak a long streak of shine on the hair would be great, but anyways nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the hair maybe a streak a long streak of shine on the hair would be great.

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DarqueBasylisk responds:

Thx! :) I will think of it.

[banana]

Very realistic

Wow I must say this is pretty realistic a nice style of art onlything at all on this piece would be that you could have added a backround maybe a table or a basket of other fruit just something to give it a whole filling. But really nice work this is as realistic as it gets.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
you could have added a backround maybe a table or a basket of other fruit just something to give it a whole filling.

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[Cym the Imp [Gift]]

Interesting

I think this is a very intereting piece of art, almost like a painting the way you colored it. The background of a simple shape turned was very cool and had a good use of lighting effects for it. The hands and feet seem a bit off in size but that might be intentional. The glow on her nipples doesn't fit well for some reason so I'd work on making that flow better next time. The ab work and body art was great. I think you have a talent here. Not sure what else today you have brought everything here today and made a decent piece for everyone to enjoy, there might be some improvments but not much at all. I love to Critique art and whatnot, but you do have a nice polish of quality on this and thats what I noticed, so keep up the decent arts.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Fix the glow effect on her nipples to make it more consistent.

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PajamaMcHam responds:

Hey, thanks much. I appreciate critiques like this. The deconstruction of my arts helps out a lot. I'll have to agree with you there on the nips, they were kind of a last minute addition... I didn't put as much work on them as the other glowing bits. I feel I haven't quite nailed glowing in general, I'll do some more studies. Anyway, thanks again for the review, keep it up.