XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Madness.jpg]

Wow

Wow very nice work here I love how everything just jumps out at you in a dynamic form of things with the style and the wording comes out at you that should have some streaks in it as well. Colors were just right too and some nice textures as well so nice job here just ad some streaks to the bottom wording

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some streaks added to wording would be nice

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[Inktober #3]

Very nice

Wow I must say the fine line work here is pretty powerful very detailed and every fine point reaches another and comes together in a very detailed way you have also created something that is pretty interesting and tells a story here wish there was some color in this as it would present more to this and even tell the story of what's going on but for everything done here you have done a fantastic piece and all the talent shines high on this one very nice indeed but again adding some color would be a plus even if it's just parts of your drawings like the flag or the helmet or just small focus points that will focus it as a whole better

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color here and there would be a huge plus

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[Diidarikia - Battle Mother of the Lupinossai]

Very nice

This here was a very nice design. The amount of time seems like it has took forever to etch all these little pieces here and there and pushing forward all the fine line work now this could be so much improved with some color or even parts of color within the detailed work you already have here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color here would be a big plus here

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[April and Carp]

Fantastic piece

And here was a fantastic piece it really jumps out at you and you added some really nice shine in all the right places especially the hair very well done there and props to you. I think with the eyes and how shiny you have them you could really sparkle them up have them really glow and shine and just sparkle off that green one can really stand out your character design is really good and you show some nice detail here so just want say nice work nice eddort and just overall a really good design here so I'll end this here but keep making more great stuff like this so nice job all the way around

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some.more sparkle in the eyes

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Namenloose responds:

Thank you so much for the critique!
yeah, the way other artists can make the eyes very reflective and colorful at the same time is always really nice to look at. I'll definitely try and experiment with a way to get that in my illustrations.

[Stan]

Awesome

Well this was pretty awesome nice detail and nice artwork here the crystal that the flower is growing from should have some type of light effect or something like that but you have a very nice piece of art here great character design as well so nice efforts here just a little touch up here or there

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Crystal needs sparkle and shine

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[MinecraftSkin]

Nice

Very nice work here. I love the shine effect and the green eyes really come out well here and it is kind of it's own Minecraft character so you did well here only thing missing here is that there should be a mincraft world in the background that would be super sweet and work that just right for this character

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
All it needs is a Minecraft background

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KaDargoDaFluffy responds:

Awe thanks ^^ and I know about the background :/ but this was back when I didn't do my one backgrounds lol. If i still have the file I should add one

[Robo-Hand]

Nice work

Now here was a really nice looking character actually the whole piece has come together very well with some nice detail even the background was spot on with detail the armory hand could have a shine and sparkle to it and the hair could use some more texture as well but for what it is you have done a fantastic piece here with lots to admire I like this style and you have a faded look and that's cool too but won't hurt to ad a lil more texture and shine all the way around so nice job all the way around here I have enjoyed it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More texture and shine

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[Tracer]

Really nice work

I can see all the nice detail here some good detail and some very nice drawing here you really made something cool here now of course you could use some colors in this piece even if it's just a piece here or there even the background could use a little color. It will ad to the focus of the whole piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color or parts of color would be nice

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[Inktober Day 7 Lost]

Cool

Now this was cool I like the style here the fresh look and faded feel of it all guess this was a contest of some sorts but you went beyond that and made it something special a good piece here with a story to tell and that's exactly what I liked about this and don't think this needs any changes as you have a nice piece here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A solid piece with some nice story behind it

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[BFF - Pg 001]

Cool

Another in the comic series you really bring it out and show the world that it doesn't have to be simple and mainstream you have nice characters nice frames and you mix color and black and white all together and make it work just right the story is not half bad either but I will suggest more color not all but props and pieces here or there that can really stand out and make this different from other pieces honestly you have already done that and that was pretty cool but anyways nice job here it looks fantastic and overall great job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra added color would be my suggestion

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