XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inktober Day 1]

Nice

And this is how it started well first of all nice snow one I like it now you know me I love color so could have been nice if you had added white color that would have kept it still black and white but being snow give it a nice colored version too anyways nice job and kinda funny too characters always great looking

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some white colored snow would have been perfect

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[My 92 year old grandfathers workshop! Back to work!]

Nice work

So the visual was a tad bit hard to view maybe a bit more close up on this and darker lines on each drawing item and I would even try and use some Photoshop to really enhance this with some effects and or even some color like some stuff can be in color while some can be in black and white. But I will say welcome to newgrounds and hope you stick around cause you have some nice talents here and I look forward to much more from your library of art works but besides all that this was a fantastic piece that I want to see much improved

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color. Some better visual

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griguette responds:

Thanks! :) the tips are appreciated and i will try to take them into account. Check out the rest of my artworks and please give me some tips on those as well! :)

[Chibi Demon Lady]

Nice drawing here

Now this was cool and you have added some sleek and sharp colors and some beautiful line work that makes it even more smooth the backround is cool too that red circle is nice but I'm thinking make a pattern with it then shine a light from it might be a cool little effect off of the main character.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting and a pattern in the background for more effect

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VaporNinja responds:

Thanks! Funny enough I was actually doing a re-draw of this character except she wasn't gonna be in a chibi form.

[NSFW Butterfly Girl]

Notbad

Well this was notbad I think it's a good sketch and I like the tint here the little bandage x on her nips was nifty but I think making those color like a bright red would be a cute little idea and small improvement

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the x tapes colored

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[Girl Bust/Portrait]

Nice

So this was nice and your painting style is very good I really like what you did with her hair it's real deep color texture and deep in color it seems to work well and you know how to present it very well also like all the extra stuff props and such a nice job indeed you have some good skills here keep that up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe a border with this piece just seems fitting with how you have it

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[Deep Sea Axolotls]

Nice

So it's an under water goddess I'm thinking the paint on this seems pale I'm wondering if taking some of it into Photoshop and enhancing some of the colors would be a good idea but I think you could have the hall glow bright and that would be a good change so besides that another nice art piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glow in the hall and maybe better enriched colors

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[DOTA Fanart]

Very nice

And here was some nice use of color you really do have some talent on character design and I like how you put that in effect here. I do want to see what you can do with some more lighting effects though you did with the last one on end do that with the others it would be pretty nifty and make this a lot better

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More lighting effects on all characters

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[Strawberry Voodoo]

Awesome

Wow this was awesome and your best work yet this one will be a fave of mine but I will rate this high and that's rare for me. But your artistic ideas are beyond high level the color and small detail really come alive in this one you bring some nice details out and that's what I have really enjoyed on your works

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I could see you putting a border or some kind of wacky frame on the edges here that will reflect of the art itself

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[Undeep Dip]

Very nice once again

And as always very nice once again the soft paint on this really gives it that old feel and you made some nice details here. I think as an improvement point here you should have more reflection in the water even a colored water but still just an idea you did pretty good work here regardless

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some colored water and some reflection in the water

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[H-armless]

Very nice

Oh very nice work yeah that's always a nice one as for the rest like the dress that deep red burgandy was a nice touch the facial features also a nice emotion so in that sense you have done very well and I am pretty impressed with the paining itself so nice efforts here can't seem to find any improvement points as this was great as is

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No improvement points found you did great

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