XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Katara]

I like it

So this was actually notbad at all, I dont know what the paper one looked like but maybe if you showcased it with this piece that could show the difference. I do like the soft touches here and its subtle but still a pleasent and artistic piece that you have presented here for us.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Showcase the paper version along with the new version.

~X~

[Outside it's raining]

Lovely piece

This here was a lovely piece with an almost perfect touch I absolutly love the "SOFT" touch about it this could be just a painting or just an art piece I wouldnt mind more lighting come in from that window and beam down more but other then that this was a very beautiful piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I wouldnt mind more lighting come in from that window and beam down more, maybe also put some borders on this like if its a painting in its own painting.

~X~

[Stop growling at me]

Interesting

And with this one not sure what to say or how to review this as its an interesting piece it is unique in its own way, has a style of its own and seems to tell a story, I do however think you could ad a backround here something light and distant that reflects the world more. anyways nice work and artistic.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I do however think you could ad a backround here something light and distant that reflects the world more.

~X~

[Tree house]

Love this

So what you have done here today is bring something artistic to the portal not everyone can do that, but thats what I see here on this day. and this is one of those backround types that is so welldone, you have put in some nice texture here, The onlything this is missing is some little people or villfers walking and doing life things to suvive and such, would be a nice addition. I have really enjoyed the outcome here, I think there could be more to it but then again it also stands alone on its own, so a nice art piece here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
adding civilisation would be nifty.

~X~

dragonofthewest responds:

Thank you so much! This is actually just a small private area of a forest village that belongs to the main character of my story. That's why I didn't add any people, but for a stand alone piece I can see your point. Thank you for the like and critique.

[the Conscious Explorer]

Artistic

And here was something very artistic, I like the "COLOR" aswell, but it lacks more color like even in the backround could use a design or patteren of some sort with some color in line work, and more color all the way around as it really brings out the drawing more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More use of color and more use of the backround.

~X~

[Alone In Space]

Space

space can be an alone place but you made it very nice to visit, love the stars and the brighter ones you could improve on this with some more brighter stars but some that are colored or rainbow ish style, but you do have a nice idea here, nice artwork here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some colored stars, more brighter colored ones aswell.

~X~

BoRKman responds:

I didn't expect a comment on an old sucky 3d art from 2012. But thanks you! And I'll improve if I'll begin with 3d art again.

[My first head drawing]

Very interesting

Wow I must say you have done something interesting here you have gave this a very realistic feal about it all from skin texture to hair, the eyes though seem off a bit maybe its just the direction they looking in, but anyways this was still a nice piece of work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe have the eyes straight looking.

~X~

[Apple 2]

Oh nice

Now see this was what I was talking about, the whole piece looks a lot better then the other version but with a border like you have here and a better backround you really make the apple look better now ofcourse you have gave more texture wich is nice, the "BORDER" part should be a different color though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the border part a deeper color not just white.

~X~