XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ivory]

Nice variaty of work

Now you have a nice variaty of work here very "COLORFUL" stuff from the sun to the running elephants, atleast i think they are running, but you have really filled the "CANVAS" from top to bottom with alot to see, and you have a pretty good creative side which is always nice, i think the onlything lacking here is probably that it doesnt have any "BORDERS/FRAMES" along the edges which i think if you had some maybe even a colored up one since thats kinda your style, it would workout perfectly, but with all that said you have some fantastic work here and cant wait to see more soon

As explained some borders would fit i think.

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UnderARock responds:

yeah I see what you mean, borders are nice

[Alien Chicks]

Lime green

Well this was notbad i like it to be honest, its a really light feel as is the color, the backround, has really nothing to the visual view, but as for your main drawing here its very "FRESH" looking probably mostly from the light color, now this can still work with some sorta backround you dont have to go all out with some crazy dark stuff but maybe a darker mint green would sufice on the lime green of the drawing, or even a grey backround but even if you didnt go that way you could alsways go with a scenery or backdrop something along them lines

My improving suggestions would be add some sorta backround even if its a solid color that reflects with the main drawing

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PixelCake responds:

I think you missed the part where I said it was for the MONOCHROME ART COLLAB IN THE ARTIST'S COMMENT.
It's not supposed to have a background because I was limited to just those colors. Sometimes not having a bg makes the subject pop more.

Why is the bulk of NG so dead-set against a fucking bit of simplicity?

[AW pup]

haha that is cute

haha now this is cute, the pink really stands out though and that hat with the rainbow colors is also cute, now why he is pink not sure but its still neat i think, the creature also has some muscles and you high lighted them with some shine which i thought was pretty good, im thinking if he is gonna have a silly hat you should add on maybe some silly shorts and some silly shoes aswell, im thinking some yellow shoes would workout just fine if your going for the silly style, and as for the backrounds it was neat and reflected more of your main character so notbad at all

To improve i suggest adding some silly yellow shoes maybe even some shorts or something. it will show more of that colorfull and silly style

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TheMastermario22 responds:

Haha thank you VERY much for your input. I'll try my best to improve ;]

[Reanimation]

Wow intense

~~REVIEW~~
wow now this is really intense with alot of detail, lots of texture and you gave this little art piece some sorta story to itm it has some really deep and dark colors but for the character type that only seems normal, but somehow it seems missing something more on the upper area kinda like if this was a poster it would have a big slogan across or something, but anyways you do some good work, i will be glad to review more of your stuff soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe add some borders/frames around the edges for the "POSTER" look

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[The Elegant Parasite Black]

More basic then the rest

~~REVIEW~~
Now this was not your best, more basic and simple then the rest but still has a neat design or character not sure there, but it can be improved on such as adding some backround or some landscape in the distance, also giving the character more detail and ofcourse use of more color all around, as for the "SIGNATURE" i think you can either lose that or give it a more fancy feel as its abit on the sloppy side so could work either way, anyways its notbad for what it is

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Remove or make the signature more fancy maybe blend it with the backround more, also more details needed for the characters face

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Celx-Requin responds:

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[Tyrannical Boss]

nice work here

~~REVIEW~~
Now here is another nice piece of art from you with lots to seem the pink creature being whipped seems like he is suffering so in that aspect of things you might want to show more emotion in that area, now your best work in this art piece is the Tyrannical boss now ofcourse thats your focus of art right there, his "WHIP" atleast i think its a whip seems lacking in design it needs abit of two tone color to it, and maybe a small design in it, as for the "TY" it was your best work here as i said awsome detail, lots of props and great skin texture to make it like it was really there, so nice work all around.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some design to the whip, and maybe show some emotion from the pink creature like he is in pain

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Celx-Requin responds:

I agree...

Thanks,
- Celx

[Shark: Shattered Guns Poster]

a poster you say

~~REVIEW~~
Now i love posters and this one actually does look like a poster, i love your sense of "COLOR" you use it at the right times which i think really brings out your stuff such as this one with the red and black and have the colors intertwine at times, its a nice style that notmany use so props to you on this style, so as this is a poster i think, in my opinion that posters need, "BORDERS/FRAMES" or if not that like "PINS" in the corners of the poster, just an odea though, so this was pretty neat with the swords and guy but i would like to see more then one guy in there, maybe there was a fight or something, you could have one guy standing and one guy dead well something along them lines, anyways it was a pleasure reviewing this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more characters to the scene, maybe add some borders / frames along the edges or pins as explained above

~X~

Celx-Requin responds:

Yeah a border would have been a good idea, I'll keep it in mind for any other posters I may decide to do!

Thanks,
- Celx

[CoolJaw Comic Preview]

Nice

~~REVIEW~~
ok now this was neat, i really like the "WHITE" over the "BLACK" backing it gives it a unique viewing of the art, and this is also kinda neat because of the touch of blood coming from your characters mouth, makes you wonder what else is in this lil story or behind it anyways, i think this could be better like make some blood drops and or stains in the distance, like if the guy just came from that type of chaos and or madness, and i think it wouldnt hurt to add some color in the eyes it wont take focus away from anything but probably give more detail to this character

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add some color into the eyes aswell as some backround history of the maddness he just came from

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Celx-Requin responds:

I read it too tired to respond to it coherently.

Thanks,
- Celx

[CoolJaw Comic Cover]

This was interesting

~~REVIEW~~
Hmm well this was interesting and as a logo type of thing its notbad, however i think there needs to be more to it you have a few designs and stuff in there but what i think it needs is more of that maybe even larger images as to see the "DETAIL" of the whole logo, the "FONT" could be changed to something more fancy and stylish maybe something more on the "WAVY" style the red blood spatter is pretty neat i thought but you should add some "TEXTURE" to it, its just kinda there and remember if this is your logo design everyone sees, then you want it to really jump out at them so they can checkout your flash or art, anyways nice entry i look forward to reviewing more of your stuff

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make some images larger and or add more of them, make some fancy font besides the one you have, and add some detail and texture to the blood splatter

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Celx-Requin responds:

I don't know, it was a cover so I didn't want to go overboard you know.

I've always liked "simple" covers to films, like the "red line" in the French "kill bill" dvd cover looks better to me than the picture of "Uma Thurman" on the American dvd cover.

Thanks,
- Celx

[Tuky]

This was interesting

I like your sense of "CREATIVITY" especially with this one and the great mixture of animals and such you listed that sure is alot, and you put it all in this little creature very nice indeed, i would like to see some more creativity on this or others but with less amount of mixtures that way you can add more detail on just the few rather then just a ton of em

make another but with much less creatures

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bloominglove responds:

Thank you for a good critique. :)