XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tanja's Gunshop]

Wow so much detail

This must have taken you a long time the amount of detail alone is pretty impressive I like all the wood work in here you really pushed the detail as a sort of improvment have the wood old and maybe falling apart from water damage and or other time changes but that's just one idea for the most part this was a well designed and beautiful into your world so very nice indeed on such a creative world you have shown us here today

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make some of the wood work damged maybe over time or water damage just to give it that real effect

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[Lonesome Warrior (My 2016 Sketchbook Nr. 1)]

Cool

Now this was nice it's almost like. A statue but you have added so much detail here and this is missing some color because this one could be so much better in color also adding some polish to it like some shine and sparkles on it as well like the sheild could really sparkle then there's the idea of adding something to the backround and don't just leave it bland but maybe even a pattern and or design back there or maybe a base color but not white

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I have suggested a few ideas here

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[Patreon: A christmas hug]

Nice work

And here was some really nice work the fish or dragon tail was very good it could use more of a shine and the girl herself was very beautiful and well designed with some nice visuals nice red theme here also the only thing I could see you adding here would be something to the backround of sorts

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine on the tail and something in the backrounds

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[drugs are bad for Gustav]

Very creative with this

You went all out on this one and designed something very creative with a nice style about things the cigs was nifty of an idea the white lettering and numbers in the backround was also a cool thing going on so very nice and we'll done here I really like this and will ad it to my faves keep making creative stuff like this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This is creative and artistic in it's own way

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MisticFish responds:

Hello XwaynecoltX,
Thank you for your comment, if you want to see more of my art and from my friend Joel because we paint together, we make painting from the year 2014. In my page arancioneverde in facebook you can see all of our content, and if you want to see metaphysical videos of me and my friends, you can see it on youtube in the page Metadone produzioni theres english subtitles so you can see! ( because I speak italian and portuguese, and in the videos we speak italian ehehe)..https://www.facebook.com/arancione-verde-1051040371613658/
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UC3kpsLZCS83n-cfQjcuSYIA

[Il ciclo della vita]

Creative

Wow I must say this was pretty creative and a nice style you have going on here I like the painting in a bushle of plants and grass almost like the wild actually in the wild and the painting itself also has it' has it's own style of a wild creatures so this was like a painting within a painting so very nice creative work you have here and I was very impressed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just some light beaming down on the painting itself

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MisticFish responds:

Thank you very much!
Its the microcosm and the macrocosm thing ahah, everything its connected! :)

[Beach Girl]

Beautiful

So this here was a beautiful piece the shine on her backside was really good as a reflection from the sun I think you should have shown more of the background and the sand and some palm trees and just more of that the girl you did a fantastic job on though just would have loved to see more of the beach world and such

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Show more of the beach world

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[Kylo Ren]

Awesome

Wow this was pretty awesome a great likeness to the character and I really love that dark and sketchy backround I do think there should be some red eyes hlowing from the mask though and the sabre you could have that more red glow effect and lighting effect on back wall to show it's dominance but those are just a few ideas you may want to push

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small effects as suggested

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[scrub]

Wow

Wow I was not expecting this. You really have that green popping out pretty good and the shine on her body really jumps out at you as well the only thing this one needs is some background scene maybe a beach scene of some sort but I have really come to enjoy this like art piece you have here and presented well for us all

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround scene like a beach scene would be nice

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[Rabbit]

Very nice

This was cool alot like the real thing, love the backround and border aswell, I do think the border should be thicker and bolder, but everything else you have here is perfect, maybe even adding a shine on the backround like some sort of streak or somethings.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A streak of shine in the backround and some thicker borders aswell.

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[Young Pussy ... cat]

Awsome work

This was some awsome work and some nice detail, Now dont get me wrong I love black and white but would love some color in this piece I think if you added just some color in the kitties and left everything else black and white it would be perfect, and as I suggested in another piece adding borders would also sufice.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some color in just parts or portions.

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