XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Smokey Serpent]

Nice detail

Looks like some nice detail here especially all the little scales here on the outter coat of things seems like you could have some deeper colors on this and bring the texture out or shades but besides that looks like you could have added to the backround too adding something more then what you had there so nice work all the way around I love the detail

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more detail on the scales and also backround

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[Doom Toad Wallpaper]

Beautiful piece

And here was a beautiful piece filled with lots of color and lots of devotion into this world and it made it all a fun place love the use of color and all the happenings with characters and so on lots going on a very good piece of artwork here keep up the fantastic piece I like everything about this and don't have a negative thing to say at all

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes needed you have outdone yourself here

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[Yelsa Noodom]

Cute

Well this was cute I like the pose and the smirky look and all seems like the colors are a bit off like the green pants are don't seem to fit all that well with the other colors and those are something you could ad some texture into just an opinion but the green just doesn't fit well it seems maybe something different

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some texture and meshed pants might be nice

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[VW Golf - Turnaround]

Nice car

This was pretty cool and I love the animation on this aswell almost like if its in a show room of some sorts, but the car was cool the glass on the windows seem like they could have more of a sparkle and shine to it, but besides that its a nice car you have here and nice design. So that was a good art piece, some areas could be more creative but I do understand the direction with this, it was a pretty good presentation and something differant, so nice work here. and I look forward to more of what you may have.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine and sparkle on the window glass of the car.

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devilsgarage responds:

Thanks for the commends and feedback - yeah the show room camera perspective definitely help sell that feeling.
The intended direction was to make it look like it lost all the luster and shine - but still a well-maintained classic veedub . Those sparkles would definitely work on brand spanking new piece like this baby - https://twitter.com/devilsgarage/status/840630668631527424
I would love to expand on this servies - all in due time, check back and thanks for dropping by

[Flying is fun!]

Nice

So Im not familuar with this story but the artwork you have here is pretty good very nice and smooth lines love the addition of the birds onlything this may need may be a sun burst of light or even sun shining somewhere in the backround Just some ideas that may enhance this beautiful piece already.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
onlything this may need may be a sun burst of light or even sun shining somewhere in the backround.

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[YOSHI]

Cute

Yoshi at his best a cute version of him, I wouldnt mind seeing more "SHINE" on his shell and nose and maybe even adding some type of patteren in the backround something different from that base color, but its a great design of a classic character, so nice effort here indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine and, even adding some type of patteren in the backround something different from that base color.

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[ikeda asaemon]

Nice character

A nice character you have here the red and blacks work well together that yellow flowers she has on in the middle could have more of a shine and would set off more of the rest of the color but honestly besides that this is actually a really good character design and I was pretty happy with the design as a whole

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have some shine here or there

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[Beth skirt lift]

A cute piece

And here was a cute piece the one thing I think this could use would be some more shine like in the hair and also the back side and even down the legs would make for a great piece and the sine would come off well. Just an idea but an idea that will work well so try it out and let it shine deep from the light

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine would be nice on hair and legs

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[Kenku]

Very artistic

This was very artistic, the shades the meshes of the birds feathers etc was very deep, and those eyes are so neat you could really make them light up and hlow and would create an even better effect, so overall a nice piece of artwork here. Your creative styles have comeout for sure today, cant wait to see whatelse you do come up with, and I will be looking forward to seeing more of your efforts in art and creativity. And so this Concludes my little review hope you have enjoyed it as much as I have. anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the eyes light up more and even glow.

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[Agent 47]

Nice

I like this piece for its subtle elegance, the white backrounds are ok with this one and you bring out some nice features here, I would have more blood dripping maybe even throw in a dripping frame or border. just an idea or two that may help or not help.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More dripping blood more like a dripping border even.

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