XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Potatoman Begins: Page 1]

Oh wow

And this was nice this is how it all started and the artwork is pale and light Wich makes it fitting to a simpler time and you have really pushed these stories to the next level so nice effort there I like the direction that this takes and you have done well with it and this reviewer is pleased with the outcome of it all

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This story and piece strives on it's own

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[Asriel's ThroneRoom]

Really beautiful

This is really beautiful with the deep purples here and the luminating colors like the lights and crystal mountain tops alot of purple uses and I can see you putting much more light effect on the lights and those Mount tops just a thought in to making this a lil better so nice job on that and great idea here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added luminating lights and purple efffects

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[The Cherub Brothers: Chapter 2.23]

Looks pretty good

So this looks pretty good I can see you adding a bit of color in here but maybe just parts I will explain that in a bit, but I do like this comic style and hope you keep making more. just like this its pretty nice stuff. Now I was really liking the work you put out here today it was something that put some nice effects and elements together, so it was a good piece of art, And I do look forward to more of your work here soon enough. there are some things that could have a more Polish to it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding a touch of color to your art here wouldnt take away from the black and white style, but adding just a touch of red or blue, so dont fill the whole drawing with color, im just saying adding a touch here and there will ad abit to it without taking away from the main drawing. anyways try it out.

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[Wanish]

Awsome

This was very awsome I love these black and white style, I do think you could ad some color though like the black deep streaks could be a deep red and show some focus here, its just an idea but would really show some nice detail about this, anyways nice work here.

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a little bit of color would be great here.

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[Yeti]

Nice job

Not sure what to think of this one, its kind of neat though you seem to have a way with colors and all the colors in this one meshed in just right with some good mixture, so for this one no changes needed but was pretty impressive in its own creative style.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes for this piece.

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[Jason]

Nice

And here was another nice one, and again I think if you have a little animation of dripping blood would be a big addition and nice effect here you could have it dripping off the sword or something but these little characters are pretty good if you ask me.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some dripping blood.

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[The Churn Wurm]

Wow I love it

Wow this is great stuff here the line work and eye for detail is really good I could see you having a really nice colored version of this or even a colored backround to accent off the drawing itself, but anyways very nice detail here. Alrigh you have something good here like the artwork that you have presented here now i wouldnt mind seeing some more efforts but sofar you have done a decent job here and I do look forward to more soon. Yould extend some parts in this art, and ofcourse some more polish is always good, but anyways I have enjoyed this piece very much.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some backround base color, or a colored drawing would be nice.

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ConstipatedNugget responds:

I’m glad that you like it! I definitely agree with you, though, this could use some more polish.

[Bulltastic]

Nice

This was cool, and yes it is a bull I really like what you do with the "BACKROUNDS" the glowing stars makes for a nice back setting you should have those dots glow even more thogh, the actual bull itself is done very nice with some nice textute so nice work all the way around.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More sparkle from the stars in the backround.

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[Wondering]

Very nice detail

So I am one with love for lighting efects and shine and sparkle, you did very well with the backrounds here and the robot itself but I am thinking abit more shine on the metal and more glow from the eyes, but besides that this was pretty good stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more shine, more sparkly armour even if he is in battle the armour might have some shine too it, so more sparkles, more shine, on the metal parts. also have some glow in the eyes.

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[Zombie]

Interesting

Well this was interesting not sure what this creature is but I like it, and like the color maybe some darker "GREENS" in there and I would even go with some animation of dripping blood might be something nice and different, would be a great lil piece of work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small animation, and darker shades.

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