XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[At the end of it all]

Mystic

I really like this, it has a mystic feeling and you bring that out i love what you did with the eyes and have them glow, the lighting effect behind them could be brighter but for what it is its pretty nice as is so nice job on this wonderfull piece its beautiful.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more lighting brighter from the back.

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[Mr. Bo]

Awesome

Well here was something very awesome love the texture you really put some energy into the texture and the deep purples really show off well. The yellow eyes are another story they really pull you in deep and make you see a real cat here now for the eyes I think you need to have them glow yellow over purple really works well together and as for the backround a beautiful piece that could use more texture and such but all of it was such a great piece of work and I can't wait to see more of your work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the eyes glow

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[Volter's New Weapon Pt.2]

Awesome

And this was pretty awesome as usual great looking characters. Nice outcomes with the dialogs and the story goes on love the US of color and you really bring out a story here I think only thing I would change I ad a different color border or frame but that's about it everything else looks pretty solid

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Change up the borders now and then

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[Volter's New Weapon Pt.1]

Nice

And another in the series love the color here you really know how to put all the right color in all the right places and you have really made this into a successful comic series so nice job there you have some great talents hope they go farther then this and beyond anyways nice work here keep at it I look forward to seeing a bit more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just keep making these

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[Artist Kirby]

Really beautiful

This one here is really a beautiful piece the color alone is nice I like the color I think you could brighten up the color somewhat more have it really shine and as for the blank backround I think you could do something with that seemed bland maybe it could be some town painted up in paint already a few streaks here or there painted regardless of what you do you could really touch up some stuff in here with tid bits of more color and even more brighter as well but anyways I won't drag this on anymore very nice stuff here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More color and fill in blank spots

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[Volter's New Weapon Pt.3]

This is cool

Well here was something different you have some animation in there and that is different then before but still a nice result the toon itself is good love all the color love the results and outcome and looks just as good as any of your other great comic themes so nice job here keep at it and keep making stuff like this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More animation would be a huge plus

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[Night Owl]

Wow

Wow this was very beautiful I love this gold feel and touch about it it's that gold color you should really sparkle up and let all that owl glow especially with a dark backround it will show better and be something magical and mystical so just something to try out but overall this was a nice piece here keep up the great work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More gold glow more gold sparkle

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[Imari from B.B.]

Cute

And here is a cute piece the girl is beautiful the ball up in her hair I can see you doing something with that like much more shine then you have on it even a sparkle the rest of the character is well done nicley drawn and good use of color

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine or sparkle on the ball holding her hair

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[Red Demon 1]

Awesome

This was pretty awesome especially with red being my fave color the sketch itself is very deep in detail lots of line work or brush detail regardless this was very intense as are your other ones that are similar you really pulled it out on this one so very nice job as for improvement I think it's just

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[Fushi]

Very beautiful

Now this one here was very beautiful the white hair alone with all the different color tones was so impressive even with the snow falling you had a lot of white falling it still seemed to work well with the skyline very realistic style too the wolf also played another white point but none of this changed anything and the whole piece came out so beautiful designed so for you this was a brilliant and beautiful npiece and fine line work lived up to your name so nice work on this and I don't see any changes needed on this at all. But anyways before I end here by on this review props to you on a wonderful piece of art

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned above everything worked well together and no changes needed

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Cipcal responds:

I've actually been struggling with my lineart, so I'm glad that my work paid off. Thank you for your review!