XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Imari from B.B.]

Cute

And here is a cute piece the girl is beautiful the ball up in her hair I can see you doing something with that like much more shine then you have on it even a sparkle the rest of the character is well done nicley drawn and good use of color

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine or sparkle on the ball holding her hair

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[Red Demon 1]

Awesome

This was pretty awesome especially with red being my fave color the sketch itself is very deep in detail lots of line work or brush detail regardless this was very intense as are your other ones that are similar you really pulled it out on this one so very nice job as for improvement I think it's just

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[Fushi]

Very beautiful

Now this one here was very beautiful the white hair alone with all the different color tones was so impressive even with the snow falling you had a lot of white falling it still seemed to work well with the skyline very realistic style too the wolf also played another white point but none of this changed anything and the whole piece came out so beautiful designed so for you this was a brilliant and beautiful npiece and fine line work lived up to your name so nice work on this and I don't see any changes needed on this at all. But anyways before I end here by on this review props to you on a wonderful piece of art

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned above everything worked well together and no changes needed

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Cipcal responds:

I've actually been struggling with my lineart, so I'm glad that my work paid off. Thank you for your review!

[Luxray Artwork]

Notbad

Notbad at all at first this was more simple then anything else but the line brush work is subtle and paints in detail and makes for a detailed story here I'm just not fond of the colors here especially the backround you could probably put some reds and greens in there for extra measure on this piece but regardless nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding some color would be very nice indeed

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[Nuclear Mushroom]

Now this is beautifully

This here is a beautiful piece indeed the texture is really good and makes it feel like you are really in a Forrest somewhere the green grass is very realistic too I do think that the only thing this needs is maybe some more sunlight beaming down on this more with some nice lighting effects working some light on this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More of a beam of sunlight

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[The last one out of Beach City]

Nice work

Well I must say this one here is a very nice enrgy of work and you really tell a story within your creation with everything from characters to the brick wall or even there imagination it all comes alive an I am thinking you should put some shine and sparkle into this like some on the wall with a corner of the bricks sprakling and maybe more light effect shinning down on them maybe even a tinted light on them it would bring more focus on to an already decent design and art piece but I like what you have done here with this and I have come to enjoy your subtle style here it creates a story within the artwork so for that nice job indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and sparkle here and there with some more lighting also

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PedroTorres responds:

Thanks for this more than helpful critic. I'm glad you liked the work and I will try some changes on this to see how I can give more life to it

[Heroes never die...]

Nice detail

So in this one you bring some nice dtail in this sketch I like the yellowish paper too but I am thinking you should run some color through this with have bright colors to really bring out the full fliud energy of this whole piece you really have some nice talent here keep up the great efforts and sketch's

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding some color would be a plus here

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[My childhood dream]

Nice work

Really like the light shades on this one with the pencil I think it is the drawing itself could be ran thru Photoshop for some light effects with lighting and such just a few little things that could really make this pop out a little more but I do like what you have here very nice work on this one so nice efforts here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Run this thru Photoshop for some light effects

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[Blue-Eyed Portrait]

Awesome

I am loving the color in this and while it is just a greyscale the blue is a perfect touch on the eyes I would go one step farther and try and suggest doing the lips a light tint of red it would bring more focus to the whole piece here and still at same time keep the whole idea of a black and white style portrait that you have going on here but with all that said you have some really amazing skills and details of work here very fluid in texture and detail making this just a beautiful piece of art that I welcome with open arms so now as I end this here props to you on such a beautiful piece and I hope you keep gracing us with more fine works

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more tints in areas for more focus

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[Fear the Titans]

Nice

And this was pretty cool with the helmet and the scruff of it all I think two things you could work on here though one being that adding some shine to top of help would be nifty and some backround color tone as well but these are just idea that you maybor may not try out all at your discretion of course

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I have suggested some ideas about shine on helmet and backround detail

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