XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Jason]

Nice

And here was another nice one, and again I think if you have a little animation of dripping blood would be a big addition and nice effect here you could have it dripping off the sword or something but these little characters are pretty good if you ask me.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some dripping blood.

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[The Churn Wurm]

Wow I love it

Wow this is great stuff here the line work and eye for detail is really good I could see you having a really nice colored version of this or even a colored backround to accent off the drawing itself, but anyways very nice detail here. Alrigh you have something good here like the artwork that you have presented here now i wouldnt mind seeing some more efforts but sofar you have done a decent job here and I do look forward to more soon. Yould extend some parts in this art, and ofcourse some more polish is always good, but anyways I have enjoyed this piece very much.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some backround base color, or a colored drawing would be nice.

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ConstipatedNugget responds:

I’m glad that you like it! I definitely agree with you, though, this could use some more polish.

[Bulltastic]

Nice

This was cool, and yes it is a bull I really like what you do with the "BACKROUNDS" the glowing stars makes for a nice back setting you should have those dots glow even more thogh, the actual bull itself is done very nice with some nice textute so nice work all the way around.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More sparkle from the stars in the backround.

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[Wondering]

Very nice detail

So I am one with love for lighting efects and shine and sparkle, you did very well with the backrounds here and the robot itself but I am thinking abit more shine on the metal and more glow from the eyes, but besides that this was pretty good stuff.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more shine, more sparkly armour even if he is in battle the armour might have some shine too it, so more sparkles, more shine, on the metal parts. also have some glow in the eyes.

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[Zombie]

Interesting

Well this was interesting not sure what this creature is but I like it, and like the color maybe some darker "GREENS" in there and I would even go with some animation of dripping blood might be something nice and different, would be a great lil piece of work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small animation, and darker shades.

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[At the end of it all]

Mystic

I really like this, it has a mystic feeling and you bring that out i love what you did with the eyes and have them glow, the lighting effect behind them could be brighter but for what it is its pretty nice as is so nice job on this wonderfull piece its beautiful.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more lighting brighter from the back.

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[Mr. Bo]

Awesome

Well here was something very awesome love the texture you really put some energy into the texture and the deep purples really show off well. The yellow eyes are another story they really pull you in deep and make you see a real cat here now for the eyes I think you need to have them glow yellow over purple really works well together and as for the backround a beautiful piece that could use more texture and such but all of it was such a great piece of work and I can't wait to see more of your work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the eyes glow

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[Volter's New Weapon Pt.2]

Awesome

And this was pretty awesome as usual great looking characters. Nice outcomes with the dialogs and the story goes on love the US of color and you really bring out a story here I think only thing I would change I ad a different color border or frame but that's about it everything else looks pretty solid

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Change up the borders now and then

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[Volter's New Weapon Pt.1]

Nice

And another in the series love the color here you really know how to put all the right color in all the right places and you have really made this into a successful comic series so nice job there you have some great talents hope they go farther then this and beyond anyways nice work here keep at it I look forward to seeing a bit more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just keep making these

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[Artist Kirby]

Really beautiful

This one here is really a beautiful piece the color alone is nice I like the color I think you could brighten up the color somewhat more have it really shine and as for the blank backround I think you could do something with that seemed bland maybe it could be some town painted up in paint already a few streaks here or there painted regardless of what you do you could really touch up some stuff in here with tid bits of more color and even more brighter as well but anyways I won't drag this on anymore very nice stuff here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More color and fill in blank spots

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