XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Albedo- Overlord]

Beautiful angel

Now here was a beautiful angel over a blank slate the blank slate is what I don't like but you could all ways dress up the background with some sort of palish off color but not white since the angel is white to start off with and even a red or deep red would make this whole piece look very good and sharp

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A base color backround is needed

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[Bulletproof Vest]

Nice action

Nice action in this series of comics I love the action that you go from a to be and make it like a real story and movie here I think the only changes here would be in the blacked rooms have that light bulb beam a light or burst of light would make a nice effect for that ending scene and whatnot nice series though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting effects in blacked out room

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[Spiders]

Color

Love the color here not just on the characters but on the backround too when you use full color the whole comic just comes alive and brings light to the story even more with lots of focus and that's what you have done here no changes needed as always because you have great talent in all of these works

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And once again more changes needed

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[Potatoman Begins: Page 2]

Cool

I should really follow these in order I was a tad confused on this part but as for the effort and style you did pretty good and you braught some nice detail to light with the nice color and detail to focus o work here but anyways as always a nice balance of comic here and enjoyed it for what it is any way

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Not sure with these as you have the comic style down pretty solid

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[Dishes...]

Very nice

Wow this is beautiful but to answer the question about comic there are lots of comic series on here even one that's about 700 comics long so it's a pretty good place I would think as for your comic yes this is a nice piece love your use of color and theme and your character design is very nice I think the frame work could be more dazzling then just the plain type and style but maybe adding a color or spiky waves or something but regardless of all that this here is a fantastic comic and I look forward to seeing much more of your work come through but anyways untill next time keep up the brilliant work

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Frame work could be different just a tad

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Caustic-Imp responds:

Thanks for the kind words!

I’m not really using a good program for panels, bubbles, and lettering so that definitely an area I need to figure out. Thanks for clearing up the comic thing, I haven’t seen any on here but I am not super active here so that’s more on my end.

[Government]

Really great stuff

Haha this one made me chuckle these characters sure do go thru alot of stuff the ending frame on this one was a real gobgetter and really made my day. But as always it's the art story and outcome that make these great longer stories might be a good thing too

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Longer stories would be nice

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[Drawing]

Nice one

And once again a nice comic series with lots to see great color and good ending as well these stories get better and better the characters are great relationship to the writing so you have done well here on this one and I was highly pleased with the outcome of this particular comic you should bring in more characters

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Would love to see more characters

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[Jet Fuel]

Nice

Well this was nice this one is more brighter more whites used and the ending scene is really a climax to this whole piece so you did build it up from first frame to last frame so that was a plus all thogether nice piece of comic here I look forward to much more of this comic series you really have a lot of these

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Nothing here cause it was perfect

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[Jedi Leonardo]

Very nice

Very nice work here the lighting effects are great but I think you need much more shadows to be more focused like in front of him some light and shadow should be focused the artwork itself is brilliant with detail great lines and awesome color just needs more focus on shadow and light reflection

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More light direction and shadow focus

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[Non-Drunk Talk]

Cool

And here was another part of the story and you always seem to bring out the action scenes for the best of what they can do along with the color and style this all seems to make for some great scenes I do love your sense of color and story writing also bringing humor into it is always a plus so nice job on this one

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Cool stuff doesn't need changes

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