XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Drawing]

Nice one

And once again a nice comic series with lots to see great color and good ending as well these stories get better and better the characters are great relationship to the writing so you have done well here on this one and I was highly pleased with the outcome of this particular comic you should bring in more characters

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Would love to see more characters

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[Jet Fuel]

Nice

Well this was nice this one is more brighter more whites used and the ending scene is really a climax to this whole piece so you did build it up from first frame to last frame so that was a plus all thogether nice piece of comic here I look forward to much more of this comic series you really have a lot of these

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Nothing here cause it was perfect

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[Jedi Leonardo]

Very nice

Very nice work here the lighting effects are great but I think you need much more shadows to be more focused like in front of him some light and shadow should be focused the artwork itself is brilliant with detail great lines and awesome color just needs more focus on shadow and light reflection

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More light direction and shadow focus

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[Non-Drunk Talk]

Cool

And here was another part of the story and you always seem to bring out the action scenes for the best of what they can do along with the color and style this all seems to make for some great scenes I do love your sense of color and story writing also bringing humor into it is always a plus so nice job on this one

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Cool stuff doesn't need changes

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[Potatoman Begins: Page 1]

Oh wow

And this was nice this is how it all started and the artwork is pale and light Wich makes it fitting to a simpler time and you have really pushed these stories to the next level so nice effort there I like the direction that this takes and you have done well with it and this reviewer is pleased with the outcome of it all

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This story and piece strives on it's own

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[Asriel's ThroneRoom]

Really beautiful

This is really beautiful with the deep purples here and the luminating colors like the lights and crystal mountain tops alot of purple uses and I can see you putting much more light effect on the lights and those Mount tops just a thought in to making this a lil better so nice job on that and great idea here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added luminating lights and purple efffects

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[The Cherub Brothers: Chapter 2.23]

Looks pretty good

So this looks pretty good I can see you adding a bit of color in here but maybe just parts I will explain that in a bit, but I do like this comic style and hope you keep making more. just like this its pretty nice stuff. Now I was really liking the work you put out here today it was something that put some nice effects and elements together, so it was a good piece of art, And I do look forward to more of your work here soon enough. there are some things that could have a more Polish to it.

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Adding a touch of color to your art here wouldnt take away from the black and white style, but adding just a touch of red or blue, so dont fill the whole drawing with color, im just saying adding a touch here and there will ad abit to it without taking away from the main drawing. anyways try it out.

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[Wanish]

Awsome

This was very awsome I love these black and white style, I do think you could ad some color though like the black deep streaks could be a deep red and show some focus here, its just an idea but would really show some nice detail about this, anyways nice work here.

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a little bit of color would be great here.

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[Yeti]

Nice job

Not sure what to think of this one, its kind of neat though you seem to have a way with colors and all the colors in this one meshed in just right with some good mixture, so for this one no changes needed but was pretty impressive in its own creative style.

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No changes for this piece.

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[Jason]

Nice

And here was another nice one, and again I think if you have a little animation of dripping blood would be a big addition and nice effect here you could have it dripping off the sword or something but these little characters are pretty good if you ask me.

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Ad some dripping blood.

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