XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dva dumpling figurine]

Nice sculpture

Here was a nice sculpture and clay too the detail in the face and body are very good. I could see you possibly making these somewhat larger and taller in scale that way you can carve in much more detail but besides that this was a night little character and you made it come to life with some nice detail

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make them larger scale for more amount of detail

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[Neon Glow]

Intense

Now here was a very intense piece I am loving the dark sense here but with the subtle light effects is notbad I think you can make those small areas more light up like the eyes and the light stretching around him from the back side light them up more and even more glow it will reflect off the dark tone and make for a really nice outcome in effects of course. This was a nice drawing you have and I bet your son just loves it it's a beautiful piece actually and shows a smooth feel and detail about it other then that I can't say much more other then that this is pretty good work and you should really show us much more of your works hope you bring out great stuff such as this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Awesome stuff maybe increase the glow effect of the lighted areas

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Skimlet responds:

Ah, thank you so much, and thanks so much for the feedback, it was very detailed witch is so incredibly helpful in showing me the areas I need to work on. I'll be sure to keep that in mind on my future works :D

[Inktober Day 2]

Notbad

And so here's number two. This one did have a good perspective the big hand while not fully perfect you still gave off that view shot very nicely so that was a plus and this one was more simple but it was an amusing piece. The backround is kind of bland I can see you improving on details there but all is good

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small backround etails or even color

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[Inktober Day 1]

Nice

And this is how it started well first of all nice snow one I like it now you know me I love color so could have been nice if you had added white color that would have kept it still black and white but being snow give it a nice colored version too anyways nice job and kinda funny too characters always great looking

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some white colored snow would have been perfect

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[My 92 year old grandfathers workshop! Back to work!]

Nice work

So the visual was a tad bit hard to view maybe a bit more close up on this and darker lines on each drawing item and I would even try and use some Photoshop to really enhance this with some effects and or even some color like some stuff can be in color while some can be in black and white. But I will say welcome to newgrounds and hope you stick around cause you have some nice talents here and I look forward to much more from your library of art works but besides all that this was a fantastic piece that I want to see much improved

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color. Some better visual

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griguette responds:

Thanks! :) the tips are appreciated and i will try to take them into account. Check out the rest of my artworks and please give me some tips on those as well! :)

[Chibi Demon Lady]

Nice drawing here

Now this was cool and you have added some sleek and sharp colors and some beautiful line work that makes it even more smooth the backround is cool too that red circle is nice but I'm thinking make a pattern with it then shine a light from it might be a cool little effect off of the main character.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting and a pattern in the background for more effect

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VaporNinja responds:

Thanks! Funny enough I was actually doing a re-draw of this character except she wasn't gonna be in a chibi form.

[NSFW Butterfly Girl]

Notbad

Well this was notbad I think it's a good sketch and I like the tint here the little bandage x on her nips was nifty but I think making those color like a bright red would be a cute little idea and small improvement

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Make the x tapes colored

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[Girl Bust/Portrait]

Nice

So this was nice and your painting style is very good I really like what you did with her hair it's real deep color texture and deep in color it seems to work well and you know how to present it very well also like all the extra stuff props and such a nice job indeed you have some good skills here keep that up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe a border with this piece just seems fitting with how you have it

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[Deep Sea Axolotls]

Nice

So it's an under water goddess I'm thinking the paint on this seems pale I'm wondering if taking some of it into Photoshop and enhancing some of the colors would be a good idea but I think you could have the hall glow bright and that would be a good change so besides that another nice art piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glow in the hall and maybe better enriched colors

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[DOTA Fanart]

Very nice

And here was some nice use of color you really do have some talent on character design and I like how you put that in effect here. I do want to see what you can do with some more lighting effects though you did with the last one on end do that with the others it would be pretty nifty and make this a lot better

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More lighting effects on all characters

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