XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Air Elemental Lady]

Nice work

And once again I come onto your beautiful art work here this was a good character design her face seems a little flat maybe there's some emotion that could be put on her face and the blue squrly lines could have more of a glow about them. Besides those improvement points you have impressive ideas here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glow suggestion and more emotion in face

~X~

ToxicMaiden responds:

Thank you for your input! More emotion in her face would definitely help.

[Voh-Om-Em-Tu #2]

Very good detail

You have an eye for detail and you have shown that here today I love the black and white with some tid bits of color I think with the blood you can take it one step further and have blood dripping out would be a nice focus point on things here very nice piece of work though I like your style so keep at it

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some dripping blood would be nice

~X~

[Booty Beatrice]

This is cute

And here was something cute I am loving the white and pale color use the blank backround could use some detail though. And I would suggest have her hair pink color and the rest leave as is so that it all stands out with focus but that's just one idea there's alot. You could do to improve onto this nice piece of artwork

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try some pink hair

~X~

[Marcy Nickles]

Cute and crazy

And here we have a cute and crazy character nice name too you gave her tons of character and that brings her to life with all the fancy props and color she really stands out and she could be used in many flash series so very nice character design here no changes at this time it's almost perfect

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned no changes here you know character design very well

~X~

[Noir]

Love this

Well here was something really nice I love the reds and oranges I wish there was more light effects used especially common from behind that window or curtain it would really make this art piece as a whole standout even more the character was very good too maybe more shadows under the character too I would even put in a candle that lights up room as well but this was a nice piece you have here and really nice use of color that comes out well other then what I have already suggested you have outdone yourself with a beautiful piece of artwork here today

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More light coming from behind the window or curtain even adding a candle for more lighting effect could be nice too

~X~

DocLew responds:

Thanks a lot!! I'll certainly think about your tips! I'll do better next time :)

[Space]

Very cool

I love stuff like this there's always a nice look into what the world could be or is and I love the texture on the planets the stars are nice too you should have the brighter stars sparkle even more just for the cool effect that it brings off but overall a nice backround scene here and some nice planets and stars

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A brighter star or stars would be better

~X~

[Dr.Night (OC)]

Cool detail

And here was some nice detail I also like the story you had on your character so everything was looking pretty sharp I even like that red sparkle but I think changing it to a bright white sparkle would be more fitting but make it bright white to be a real sparkle

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A bright white sparkle would be fitting

~X~

[Robot]

Cool robot

Very cool robot here and just from the dark and light drawing tones here you can see that you really put your time in and each sketch was a work of art lots of energy in this piece. Two things I can see you adding ofcourse some color and even just parts of him colored not the whole thing. Then there's the case of adding a background something of his world and where his story is at like a broken down city landscape or maybe even a beautiful ocean behind him you can even work my two suggestions together by adding a colored backround and leaving him as is but anyways just a few ideas that maybor may not interest you but nice work here and I look forward to much more of your works in the near future

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color. And some background as suggested

~X~

InkRex responds:

Thank you so much! I will definitely consider this for future works.(:

[Stay Cool!!]

Cute drawing

And this was a cute little drawing and or sketch you going on here. It seemed a bit plain at times like mainly in the backround but maybe you can fill that backround with a palm tree or plants maybe a beach with an ocean even adding color would be a huge upgrade to this piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Pic is Abit bland needs a backing and even color

~X~

[Arena Online Character Avatars]

Very nice

Very nice work here I love the deep colors too especially the purple it really has a deep texture and the gold frame is nice I would actually try and improve on the gold frame by making it more gold more shiny and ad a sparkle in the corner or corners will show more focus to the main point of view.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Frames could be more shiny and more golden

~X~