XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

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Different

This was different almost seems like its missing something like a border or something, the eyes could use some work more depth, and the canvus could be much larger so that you can ad more detail more little things can be more visual so make it a larger canvus or view screen size.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
the canvus could be much larger so that you can ad more detail more little things can be more visual so make it a larger canvus or view screen size.

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[Halo Reach Wallpaper]

Halo

Well halo has always been cool this was pretty cool I like the character design I just wish the whole art piece was a bit larger though, and adding some borders or frames to this would sufice and make for a better visual look on it as a whole, So nice work here I have enjoyed it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
adding some borders or frames to this would sufice and make for a better visual look on it as a whole, so you should think about adding some borders or frames. and a larger canvus would be a plus also.

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[Khalida of Lybaras, from Warhammer]

Very nice

And I have really come to enjoy art pieces like this, Its art pieces like this that truly amaze me because they bring on so much detail and quality. with a style and unique creativity of there own. Here was something that I liked alot I love the whole egyption style stuff here I can see a few improvements come from this such as the gold stuff face chest even some of the teal stuff need a shine and sparkle especially being out in the sand and open mountains with the sun blazing down, your character design is great very well detailed. So while theres always clustard arts in the portal, Its always nice to find a gem like this one here today as it brings a certain quality about it so nice job indeed on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some shine to jewlry and armour even a sparkle here and there.

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[Angels and Stallion Ducks]

Funny

Lol well this is a funny piece, it sort of tells a small story of a scary duck maybe? lol this character kind of reminds me of beevus and butthead character designs so you have that aspect going around, but besides all that it was colorfull and a crazy story can be told here so nice effort on this for sure.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more expression on the duck lol

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[Mystic EXPLOSION!!!!!!!]

Very nice work here

So this was very nice, the center could be brighter and with more of star like shine, the outer red circle could have more dark tones and a texture that mixes reds and darks, but besides all that said you have a really nice piece here, could be great for a nice sun setting backround.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting effects on center and texture effects on outter shell.

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[Bethany Rhodes]

Very nice

I wish you did backrounds for these each one of your character designs incuding this one could have a backround setting showing there world and a lil about them, but anyways good design here I think she should have a flower in her hair though, anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad a lilly or daisy flower in her hair.

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[UF - Helena Van Helsing]

Really nice

So this was really nice you give her sex apeal and the glasses are very cute my suggestion for improvments on this piece are that the glasses have a sparkle or two on them give them that shine, but besides that great character design nice set of colors on clothing and such.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
my suggestion for improvments on this piece are that the glasses have a sparkle or two on them give them that shine

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[Necromage]

Necro wow

I like what you have done here with the pixels for pixel day. Id use more lightning in this image so it seems more sinister. the necromancer is very good and the effects coming from his hands or "SPELL" looks really great, a good use of simple hues and shades with blues. I love the fact it is a skull face, those are my fave. Now As I wind down on this piece of art I just want to say this was actually a decent piece, some extra added effects would be nice but overall its decent.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more lightning in that background but otherwise very nice

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Chibazato responds:

Hey thanks so much for the kind words and the criticism! I agree about the lighting. I definitely could have done more with it and to be honest it was kind of a last minute idea to even add the lighting effects it has. So it wasn't really planned out too well. I mostly just had the skeleton mage doing his spell... and that was the whole animation. So I added the cliff and clouds and the lighting effects all kind of last minute and without planning. I actually had a lot of funky issues with this animation as well. It was kind of a pain and by the end i just wanted to be done with it! Lol

Thanks again for your opinion and I really appreciate your support! Im glad you enjoyed my art!

[UF - Fujiko Kamigawa]

Cool dress

I really like the colors of the dress it meshes well with the actual character, but again I think there lacks some shine in the "HAIR" and just a lil streak or two of shine can go a long way and show some great improvment, so just try it out and let it shine well lol, anyways untill next time keep up the great work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Hair needs a few streaks of shine.

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[UF - Asumi Juichi]

Very nice

So I decided to checkout more of your work and this one was different yet still unique, you like big top heavy girls I take it lol, no but really great texture in the har it lacks some "SHINE" though so adding a streak of shine in the hair would be a plus.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine in the hair a streak or two.

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