XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Potatoman Begins: Page 14]

Lol

And once again here we are with another piece to the story and it's getting ready to really unform all together I like the stories you put out but most of all I love the color and detail that you push forward in alot of this this is a top quality comic series you have going and glad I have the chance to review them hope you keep making beautiful funny and well detailed stuff like this as they are just so impressive and I have taken a liking to them very much

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I wouldn't mind seeing these go a tad bit longer in each comic

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[Dave's Secret Weapon]

Haha funny

So like I said previously these are really growing on me and what I love mostly about this one is all the detail like in the lighted up Ray or the humor you really bring it alive and all this color I really love it very nice work here indeed can't wait to see more of these in there entirely full greatness so nice job you have done here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More little details and more humor are always a huge plus

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[Naming Dispute]

Lol funny

Well I will admit the humor of these are growing on me and the funky looking characters are growing on me too so I was pretty happy with this and the action that you bring out even if it's just in frame it's always a plus and here you show the skills of humor and art so nice job there keep up the good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I like all that you do here so no need for changes

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[Grids of Gradient]

Different

Well I will say this was pretty different and I guess you could call that abstrack but I honestly felt like you could have added much more to this with more gradient more mesh and more blending bringing out an even more enhanced detail in this as a whole but does take more time and more effort of course

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More meshing more texture more detail

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[Buu]

Nice

So this one had a nice glow on it I like glow effects and stuff like that and the character was cool but maybe it was too dark around the edges so I would suggest lighten that up just a tad but the rest was fine if you ask me

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lighten up the outter edges just a bit

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[Cold Coffee]

I see alot here

So for me this is much more then a cup of coffee you bring a lot of emotion into this just the expression on her face is a story in itself, and you bring all that out and very welldone, the texture and mesh details are very well done, I could even see you going farther into this and adding a tear on her face. You have some amazing ideas and that shows here, the effortsof your labor come through and it shows strong with detail, so I for sure am excited for more of your work. I became Accustomed to this style allthough I was not at first, You put a nice little twist on this. but anyways nice job here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding more emotion even a tear or two.

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[Smexy Tron Cosplay Lavandra]

Very beautiful piece

And this was wonderfull and a beautifuly presented peice at that you even bring some nice detail and lighting effects with the sage, her expressions are perfect and match the elements the form of her is just beautifull, a very nice art piece you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would brighten up the lighting effects on the stage just a tad bit more.

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[Green Eyes]

Wow

What a good use of color in those eyes, the eyes remind me of my girl...the saturated deep bright green. The hair color and line work is good and the shades and shadows in the hair work well..i like the body position and slight head tilt. I would maybe give a background here since the white is a good focus for the girl but the background would add a more scenic element

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just maybe a background and less white for a scene

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[Destroyer of that World]

Beautiful

And here is a beautifull piece, the color is just amazing and the fire and flames really stand out, one thing I would polish up would be more brighter lighting effects and glows since your work is based on flames and such, and would give off a very nice polished look.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More brighter lighting effects.

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[Two point perspective]

I love this view

You really captured the view shot here that corner spot is very impressive and brings out those old city views, I would love to see a more clear and sharper view of this including dragging some color into this, but for what it is its a great city view, the kind of city I would love to live in.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color and a clearer more sharper quality would be nice.

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