XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Aftergold]

Very nice

I love this there's a lot of detail in the mask and character itself love the use of color you had in here with that mask or painting you have an eye for detail for sure you only really need to take some of that eye for detail and ad some into the backround as it was a bit bland maybe even just a lighted area or a backdrop scene or even pattern back there would be good

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround work

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[Lithium]

Love the color here

Some really nice color here the shirt the background the little detail it just all comes out pretty good very nice work here you could also ad a nice shine and or glare on the sun glasses would be a nice little touch here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A glare on the sunglasses a nice effect goes a long ways

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[All Hanz]

He looks cool

He looks cool a few changes I would recommend would be darker skin tone more texture in the background and a more expression in his face but other then that it's basic but does show off your skill in drawing so nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More texture in places

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[Yumi Kioko (MJ)]

Nice

And this was nice I liked it the expression on the face was pretty good a scared look but was realistic the background of the whole piece could represent why such an expression so that's something you could present better like some backdrop scene or something there just to show more of that expression

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[Character Designs]

The squad

And once again the squad at a far distance the one thing it does need is some background it would be a much better piece with colorful backdrop a big city at Forrest even a beach but it does need a background of some sorts the characters are very good and I like your style and detail so just ad some background detail

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A backround mainly I suggested a few ideas

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[Squad]

Your best one

Your best squad pic yet nice use of color nice eyes and just a good art piece I love the use of color I think all this needs is some sort of slogan about your squad or something but for the most part this is a great pic of the squad I don't know the squad but they look like a wildly and fun bunch and you have presented them well so nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some sort of sign or slogan representing your squad

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[Fite Us]

Cool

Well the colors are notbad I think you could have used some sort of borders and frames and whatnot and maybe some deeper colors of course but the characters are pretty good very well drawn but anyways it was a nice piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some frames and borders

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[Tom with a Hairband]

Notbad

Well not bad on this one nice pose too the background could use some work like a pattern or some scene backdrop. I would put some depth in his eyes too so that there's some deep caves or something but a nice piece here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned a background maybe even some work deep in his eyes

~X~

[Leia]

Very good detail

You have some nice detail here I even like the backround here it was so fitting and perfect the gun could use some more shine and sparkle as would her legs use some good shine too. Just a few ideas that could improve on this beautiful piece of a beautiful princess I'll ad this as my fave but anyways nice work here just ad some shine and sparkle here and there but besides that it was an awesome piece so keep up the great work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine on the gun and sparkles and shine on her body maybe even her hair

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