Beautiful
Very hot and nicely done art here. The bodies and blending of colors with details, textures, and shadows all work out very nicely. It looks like a painting from digital art. I think the head to neck aspect is a bit off in their bodies but that may just be the way these girls are designed based on your fanart. Overall pretty nice detailed fanart girls here. And on the ending note here some good visual here with this art piece, some things could be better as stated, but overall this was actually notbad at all, and I do look forward to seeing more of your work.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing to really change maybe just the way the heads meet the body in positioning, and maybe even more shine from the sparkls in the backround let it really light up.
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