XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Aisling]

Very well done

This here was a well done piece I love the "CIRCLE" visual here and border, I honestly would only suggest one thing to upgrade and change up and that would be to ad some "SHINE" to the hair maybe a streak a long streak of shine on the hair would be great, but anyways nice job here.

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the hair maybe a streak a long streak of shine on the hair would be great.

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DarqueBasylisk responds:

Thx! :) I will think of it.

[banana]

Very realistic

Wow I must say this is pretty realistic a nice style of art onlything at all on this piece would be that you could have added a backround maybe a table or a basket of other fruit just something to give it a whole filling. But really nice work this is as realistic as it gets.

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you could have added a backround maybe a table or a basket of other fruit just something to give it a whole filling.

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[Cym the Imp [Gift]]

Interesting

I think this is a very intereting piece of art, almost like a painting the way you colored it. The background of a simple shape turned was very cool and had a good use of lighting effects for it. The hands and feet seem a bit off in size but that might be intentional. The glow on her nipples doesn't fit well for some reason so I'd work on making that flow better next time. The ab work and body art was great. I think you have a talent here. Not sure what else today you have brought everything here today and made a decent piece for everyone to enjoy, there might be some improvments but not much at all. I love to Critique art and whatnot, but you do have a nice polish of quality on this and thats what I noticed, so keep up the decent arts.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Fix the glow effect on her nipples to make it more consistent.

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PajamaHam responds:

Hey, thanks much. I appreciate critiques like this. The deconstruction of my arts helps out a lot. I'll have to agree with you there on the nips, they were kind of a last minute addition... I didn't put as much work on them as the other glowing bits. I feel I haven't quite nailed glowing in general, I'll do some more studies. Anyway, thanks again for the review, keep it up.

[Giantess ButtCrush / Látex]

Cute and nice

Well here was something very cute and nice indeed, not just because shes cute but that shine is great My opinion is that the shine itself needs more sparkle aswell, maybe even some sparkle on the backround glass of the windows, but a nice piece of art work here it was very pleasent.

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My opinion is that the shine itself needs more sparkle aswell, maybe even some sparkle on the backround glass of the windows.

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[Oh...Fionna]

Cute

A cute visual here both the girl and the little creature, I think more skin tone and some shine on the hair are needed here but besides that, it was a nice character design maybe even adding something more to the backround aswell, but besides that it was a pretty good art piece here.

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think more skin tone and some shine on the hair are needed here.

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[Rolly Rose tango page 1]

Nice work

Well this was pretty cool, I like the comic style of this and you have some nice character work and very colorful, the pink text is ok but I think you should have all the text in a bubble not just some, anyways nice work here with this comic style and I look forward to more soon.

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the pink text is ok but I think you should have all the text in a bubble not just some

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[0v0]

Another beautiful piece

And here is another beautifull piece the pixel is great and cant be easy at all, but you bring more to the table with this style here and the animation is great adds to the unique style here this is another one of my faves, you have made this reviewer an instant fan overnight.

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Maybe a bit brighter on the moon but not by much.

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[Illunis]

WOW

When I thaught I saw everything then you grace us with this one the setting is so realistic and has such a beatiful and realistic view, this is by far your best work well from my opinion I mean, Onlything I would suggest here was more lighting effect on some parts that are lighted up. anyways keep up the great artistic styles.

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onlything I would suggest here was more lighting effect on some parts that are lighted up.

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[Psychomancer]

Pixel art never gets old

Wow another beautiful piece and you really make this one come alive, even that backround is so deep in texture, onlything I would change here with the backround would have layers of different colors but you seem to have it down regardless, so nice job here, I look forward to even more of this creative style.

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onlything I would change here with the backround would have layers of different colors

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[Lightmares]

Beautiful

Very beautifull, another piece I have come to love and added as my fave, this shows off some world of creation and you created it so perfectly with such great looks and creative ideas here, I am in love with your work and style, so keep up the great art and great pixel stuff, I look forward to even more the comming future.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some birds or distant trees in the backrounds.

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