XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ebbi and Mika]

Oh I like

I like this and love the use of the teal color you can really use that as an advantage especially with the dark background and the hlowing parts you should really have that butt end really glow and beam out the teal color with Sparks of teal spikes comming out would be great here a nice touch indeed anyways nice idea here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glow and Sparks effects

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[Wicked Evil Eye Blinks]

Very nice

Now this was pretty cool I like the blinking of the eye I think thing could be a bit better with a dripping pussy leak as he blinks the eye that would give off a more creepy and dark feel to the whole piece and while that's just an idea it could improve on this lovely piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested a nice idea for you to try

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[M Gun]

Nice gun

So this was a cool gun and a nice design, the green is perfect but I would like to see some stains and such on the gun as a whole making it more realistic with some good style about it, and have some shine on the metal parts aswell, would give off that realistic feel about it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine, more stains, more realistic.

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[Balloon]

Beautifull

And here was a beautifull piece that baloon is amazing I love the glow and shine on it you really made it reflect off her face very well and made for some good results, love the stars and the darkness behind, I am thinking more reflection of light beaming down though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More light effects off the baloon.

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[my Character And Powers]

Different

Well this was different but the character itself was pretty good very pixlated but I guess thats the idea here, I think you could have worked on the backround board a tad bit more maybe some mesh of colors and such, but a few extra things that would make it stand out a bit more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround work and detail.

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[my favorite brand]

Interesting

This was a nice design seen it many places and you present it well and looks like the real thing so I was somewhat impressed with this as it was sleek and fresh and very realistic to its view so nice work here on this one, not sure what else to say or suggest here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some different color version.

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[eye don't know]

wow so beautiful

This was nice and gentle and beautiful, very soft colors and textures that really come alive its so beautifull words cant describe this a very soft view and I just really love this piece, you are pretty good at this its amazing work keep this kind of artwork going.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing as this was very good as it is now.

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[Sombra]

Very smooth

So here was some smooth looking art very shiny and smooth and you can't get more detailed then that as this was just pretty impressive even the backround had a a nice backround sparkle I honestly can't find anything to improve on this as it's so well done it's perfect as is and no changes that I can see so very nice work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This is very polished and well done it's a perfect piece

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[The Evil One]

Dark

And here is one that is pretty dark I like the blood and the light up eyes I could see you improving on some stuff here like more glow on the eyes a bright teal glow and more red blood dripping longer drips of blood maybe even a small shine on the blood just a small idea there to improve on this and make it stand out even more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more dripping blood and more glow in the eyes

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[Potatoman Begins: Page 14]

Lol

And once again here we are with another piece to the story and it's getting ready to really unform all together I like the stories you put out but most of all I love the color and detail that you push forward in alot of this this is a top quality comic series you have going and glad I have the chance to review them hope you keep making beautiful funny and well detailed stuff like this as they are just so impressive and I have taken a liking to them very much

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I wouldn't mind seeing these go a tad bit longer in each comic

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