XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Succubus]

Wow

Very nice indeed, this has a very dark element and thats probably the intent here you really have pushed the darkness allthough I think you should ad some burst of light from behind her but looks like you had some of that but could be pushed abit brighter, besides that this was a nice job.

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I think you should ad some burst of light from behind her but looks like you had some of that but could be pushed abit brighter.

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[My Meltdown At Midnight]

Wow nice

And here is something really nice I love the "GREEN" you have going on here and the dark backround you really allow the lighting effects to take place allthough the green could push a glow and more brighter to make that lighting effects even better, just an idea you may want to try out, but besides that a nice piece of work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting and glow effects on the green.

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[Showtime]

Beautiful

Very hot and nicely done art here. The bodies and blending of colors with details, textures, and shadows all work out very nicely. It looks like a painting from digital art. I think the head to neck aspect is a bit off in their bodies but that may just be the way these girls are designed based on your fanart. Overall pretty nice detailed fanart girls here. And on the ending note here some good visual here with this art piece, some things could be better as stated, but overall this was actually notbad at all, and I do look forward to seeing more of your work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing to really change maybe just the way the heads meet the body in positioning, and maybe even more shine from the sparkls in the backround let it really light up.

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TreC101 responds:

Wow! Thanks for the feedback, I'll take the things you said in consideration with my future art. Hopefully they'll get better :D Thanks again!

[Aisling]

Very well done

This here was a well done piece I love the "CIRCLE" visual here and border, I honestly would only suggest one thing to upgrade and change up and that would be to ad some "SHINE" to the hair maybe a streak a long streak of shine on the hair would be great, but anyways nice job here.

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the hair maybe a streak a long streak of shine on the hair would be great.

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DarqueBasylisk responds:

Thx! :) I will think of it.

[banana]

Very realistic

Wow I must say this is pretty realistic a nice style of art onlything at all on this piece would be that you could have added a backround maybe a table or a basket of other fruit just something to give it a whole filling. But really nice work this is as realistic as it gets.

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you could have added a backround maybe a table or a basket of other fruit just something to give it a whole filling.

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[Cym the Imp [Gift]]

Interesting

I think this is a very intereting piece of art, almost like a painting the way you colored it. The background of a simple shape turned was very cool and had a good use of lighting effects for it. The hands and feet seem a bit off in size but that might be intentional. The glow on her nipples doesn't fit well for some reason so I'd work on making that flow better next time. The ab work and body art was great. I think you have a talent here. Not sure what else today you have brought everything here today and made a decent piece for everyone to enjoy, there might be some improvments but not much at all. I love to Critique art and whatnot, but you do have a nice polish of quality on this and thats what I noticed, so keep up the decent arts.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Fix the glow effect on her nipples to make it more consistent.

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PajamaMcHam responds:

Hey, thanks much. I appreciate critiques like this. The deconstruction of my arts helps out a lot. I'll have to agree with you there on the nips, they were kind of a last minute addition... I didn't put as much work on them as the other glowing bits. I feel I haven't quite nailed glowing in general, I'll do some more studies. Anyway, thanks again for the review, keep it up.

[Giantess ButtCrush / Látex]

Cute and nice

Well here was something very cute and nice indeed, not just because shes cute but that shine is great My opinion is that the shine itself needs more sparkle aswell, maybe even some sparkle on the backround glass of the windows, but a nice piece of art work here it was very pleasent.

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My opinion is that the shine itself needs more sparkle aswell, maybe even some sparkle on the backround glass of the windows.

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[Oh...Fionna]

Cute

A cute visual here both the girl and the little creature, I think more skin tone and some shine on the hair are needed here but besides that, it was a nice character design maybe even adding something more to the backround aswell, but besides that it was a pretty good art piece here.

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think more skin tone and some shine on the hair are needed here.

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[Rolly Rose tango page 1]

Nice work

Well this was pretty cool, I like the comic style of this and you have some nice character work and very colorful, the pink text is ok but I think you should have all the text in a bubble not just some, anyways nice work here with this comic style and I look forward to more soon.

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the pink text is ok but I think you should have all the text in a bubble not just some

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[0v0]

Another beautiful piece

And here is another beautifull piece the pixel is great and cant be easy at all, but you bring more to the table with this style here and the animation is great adds to the unique style here this is another one of my faves, you have made this reviewer an instant fan overnight.

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Maybe a bit brighter on the moon but not by much.

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