XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Platformer Concept Piece]

This was cool

I like this and I like the idea here the creatures are cool and you show there detail well the yellowish eyes are cool but I think you should have the yellow glow more brighter it would show more creepy and scary feel to it all but that's just one idea you could try and see how it comes out and if not that's ok too

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Brighter eyes more glow

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[Peridot the Bat]

Different

So this was pretty different I can see a few changes for the better I'll start with the background it could use some work maybe some texture or something and the green element on her head could be more neon green more bright more illuminating but those could be some small changes that would really push this piece over the edge

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested a few changes that could work

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[Fights over....color]

Awsome

So much better with color, and the colors are so deep too, I love the dark outer feel also and you really made this deep with the deep backround and the rain was perfect, the character color was very nice aswell, so all in all a great piece of artwork on all your pieces, incuding this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe just a border or frame might go well wityh this one.

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[Fight was over before it began]

Very nice work here

You just have a nact for this work and I am glad I had the chance to review some of your work here here because its been a real pleasure to checkout some of this stuff and see the beautifull line work I know you have a colored version for this and ill review that next.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A great before piece doesnt need changes.

~X~

[Test Subject]

Cool

This was pretty cool I am really loving the color in this one, the red could use a bit of texture more different reds to use in there, but as it looks like a cover of things it really looks great and some nice detail you have here very good work and I have enjoyed all the detail here in this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More red colors in the red with texture.

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[Washing the pain away]

Really beautiful piece

Now this was beautifull the lines the emotion on the characters face and the color, I do think its too dark on the right side of things but for the mostpart it was a great peice that shows off the detail and ofcourse the emotion of the characters and alot of people cant really pull that off.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Lighten up the right side it seemed too dark.

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[Project for some dude]

Love the line work

The best thing about your work here is the linework not just this piece but all of your drawings the linework really comes a live and you do have the comic style so thats something you should really persu at some point, but anyways another great piece that with some added color will be a blast.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color.

~X~

[Kingdom Come Super-man VS DDZ]

Very nice work here

This is some beautiful linework and you have put in some very nice detail here and there bringing in all these characters in an action scene, so nice work here its really good talent, and you have shown us that talent with awsome detail, now all you need to do is ad some color to this fine piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some color would be nice.

~X~

[Under The Hunter's Moon]

Very nice work here

And wow yes this gets the wow factor the colorful outfit on the character was cool the shine on the hair and the details you added though out you made a great detailed and quality character that moon in the backround was notbad either and with that I think you can make more of a glow and shine on everything else so just another idea to try out

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have the moon shine more down and brighter so it brings reflection and light onto the character

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