XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[a beast]

Wow

Wow this was beautiful a very nice creature or something here the white background but maybe having more of a scene backround would represent the creature a bit better and I think you should as much more sparkle on the characters eyes just a tad bit more. Love the purple color though it's pretty good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More sparkle on the eyes and something more in the background

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[:D]

Nice

This was a nice piece of work the background I don't know maybe that needs more of a base backround this one was notbad but just seemed off from the character itself I like all the colors used though and made this look pretty good though so nice work here I like your style here so keep it up

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe a different background

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[Chōchin-obake]

Notbad

This was notbad it was a nice little piece of art here the main portion of the body seems like it could use more deeper color tones on it or something the background could also use some detail or some type of pattern but regardless it could use some nice work here. I like your effort and the energy you put forward here so nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround work and body skin tones

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[Nude Charcoal Statuette]

Very nice art

So nice artwork here and I like the structure you are working with it's a pretty decent piece you have here and a lovely piece of what you made of it so I was pretty impressed with this whole piece here the only thing I would add here would be some frames and or borders to make it like a gallery piece but it's nice work indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some frames and borders to reflect that of a gallery piece

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[Cross Contour Hand]

I like it

It's very artistic and has a style all on it's own. Love they greytone also on this and normally I would suggest some type of background but to be honest this was pretty nifty and an overall great piece of art here and hope to see more from you

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on this piece

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[Disposable People ID Matte]

Different

Well this one was very different and it could have a whole other meaning and maybe it does in it's own way but I do want to see you have more focus on the main text of it all maybe that part could be more light up with some shine and some glow just to have more focus on it the outter part could still be dark so that the light area still has that focus these are just some small ideas that you may want to try out in the end it may get you some better results for your art piece just something to think about and it is all a positive vibe either way you decide to go

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting and darkening effects

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VicariousE responds:

Thanks for the review! Was kinda meant to be darkish, the trash can in the background was an old royalty-free piece of clip art, run thru some filters and effects. The logo was printed and colored by hand, then turned into a gif. I ran a transparency of some clouds, but, as you say, didn't quite fit the bill. If I had continued the show, I would've made something similar again, only higher res and framed as an actual title card... although even then, they were on their way out in favor of all digital 'super-overs'

[Samus vs Terra]

Very nice work here

Well I was really pleased with this piece the Samus character was nice to see again after all these years the body armor is really good but seems it's lacking some sparkle and shine especially on the roundish shoulder parts right there you could give much more shine and a sparkle. But anyways nice job on this great legendary character from the past

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and sparkle

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GrahamDrawsButts responds:

Always down with sparkles! Thanks for the feedback :)

Graham

[Platformer Concept Piece]

This was cool

I like this and I like the idea here the creatures are cool and you show there detail well the yellowish eyes are cool but I think you should have the yellow glow more brighter it would show more creepy and scary feel to it all but that's just one idea you could try and see how it comes out and if not that's ok too

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Brighter eyes more glow

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[Peridot the Bat]

Different

So this was pretty different I can see a few changes for the better I'll start with the background it could use some work maybe some texture or something and the green element on her head could be more neon green more bright more illuminating but those could be some small changes that would really push this piece over the edge

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested a few changes that could work

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[Fights over....color]

Awsome

So much better with color, and the colors are so deep too, I love the dark outer feel also and you really made this deep with the deep backround and the rain was perfect, the character color was very nice aswell, so all in all a great piece of artwork on all your pieces, incuding this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe just a border or frame might go well wityh this one.

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