XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Feed the Masses!]

Lots of color

So sometimes its kind of hard to judge someones art, but sometimes you have too, i think you have a wonderfull piece here but again could use some more efforts and better details, maybe a few changes but not much, anyways notbad. Alright so there was some nice things about this one, there was some nice things about the color allthough i thought that there could have been some brighter and even more "VIBRANT" areas of color, like the part of the stuff comming out of the mouth, and the "BACKROUND" was too simular as the main drawing so it all was too blended in, so maybe a differant backround would be key. Alrigh you have something good here i like the artwork that you have presented here now i wouldnt mind seeing some more efforts but sofar you have done a decent job here and i do look forward to more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some slight improvments are always a plus especially with artworks, i may not be a pro at art but i do know a few things so hope you may look into some of the ideas and advice i may post up here, but besides that good luck. There was some issues with the backround and color that could be changed and or worked on.

Erbmaster responds:

Thanks for the tips!

[Fat demon]

Very interesting

Nice demon you have here the "TEXTURE" and detail is very welldone and i like the feel of it, as it looks like its looking at something and so thats good and you showed the emotion with the eyes, very impressive, the texture is impressive as is the line and shade work. so here was something very impressive and glad i had a chance to check this out, great work great detail, and most of all greatpiece of art.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think the "EYES" ould use some glow or color shine possibly.

[Faster, Dynamite! Kill! p.05]

Nice effects

Alright so this was even better then all the rest, i especially like the first "FRAME" because it had some nice effects with some good glare that was some nice detail you should do more etails like that throughout the series or other stuff you have, but anyways its a good comic series and would love to see more of this, anyways nice work here and hope there is much success from it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing much except some better detail and such.

[Faster, Dynamite! Kill! p.04]

Very nice again

And once again we have another great rendition to the story, i actually do love this story and like to see whats going on, and i must say in this particular one you gave the comic some more pazazz so it all kind of worked out for the best, The larger frame boxes are nice and seem to work aswell, so nice job there, maybe if the "CORDER-FRAMES" were colored it would be even better just an idea though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
My only suggestion this time is to have the frames colored, but even if not its pretty good as is.

[Faster, Dynamite! Kill! p.03]

Very nice

So the story continues on and the action gets started and such, i like how you give a big shot here at first then go into more detail frames afterwards, a good change in events here in the comic, and im starting to really get into this, one thing i really love about this whole piece is that its has that whole old style and such, anyways nice job. hope to continue to see how everything turns out.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Hmm not sure i like what you have here, maybe more artwork out and over the "FRAMES" would be a nice change.

[Faster, Dynamite! Kill! p.02]

Like a great Splash

This was like a great splash, and you put it up like a splash of fun and entertaining view shots, allthough again i wouldnt mind seeing some more of that mix of new and old ideas from the comic world but you have done an awsome job here, some deeper colors wouldnt hurt either, but regardless you have a nice comic going on here, so keep up the good efforts and i do look forward to seeing more of what you come up with.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Alright good stuff as all theother comics, a mix of new and old would be nice, some deeper colors and shades aswell.

[Faster, Dynamite! Kill! p.01]

These are always cute

Cute and sexy is what these are, good old style characters, and old style comic phase aswell, you have really, made it feel like it was and is a comic, now i wouldnt mind seeing some new style comics mixed in with the old here, now thats just an idea, but you do have something good here, and i was pleased with the outcome.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add some more in your face scnes kinda like they do withnew comics now.

[Elk's Deathwing]

Awsome piece here

well awsome piece here and i see that this one was "FRONT-PAGED" congrats on that and that was very well-deserving of a front page award, the fire like dragon is pretty awsome, nice detail nice form and love the design on this, this really does look like a flame dragon and you putup top quality with this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well to be honest i think you have outdone yourself and have an awsome piece here so no changes are really made, maybe some more fire like texture on hid "FLAME" but thats about it.