XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[johnny utah's tankmen!]

Notbad

And so we have another art piece here filled with some entertaining value aswell as some interesting art creativity and thats what i really look for so nice effort on bringing the differant elements together with this one. This actually works so its notbad and the idea of this is even better, kinda fits the whole concept just perfectly so you did do a nice job here and it was pretty good i thought, wouldnt mind some extra color here and there though, but i understand the idea, just wish there was also a way to add some more details and color. And so my ending note with this piece is that it has some good value to it, it has some artistice style to it, and i pretty much enjoyed what you have presented here, hope that you make many more great stuff as this one, it was top notch in my book.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And while my reviews do seem very positive i thought i would take the time to suggest some ideas, tips and some little advice for some sort of improvment and if not then it was all in good pleasure viewing your work. So as mentioned some more ways to add some extra details more shades and linework showing would be nice, and maybe a touch of color aswell.

dommi-fresh responds:

good review wayne

[Hot Dog]

Hot dogy

You have some good talant on here and it shows with this piece, i like the work you have done here the quality showsand you bring out the detail well, so very nice work here. Hot dogs today haha, no but really it is waht it is, i thought you did a good job on giving it a more simpleistic look, and it was very good on the details, looks so good to be eaten to so you have impressed me this time, I also like the glow you gave it, the green "BACKROUND" i thought could have used more effort though it was a lil just too simple, maybe adding some design to it would be nice. So we are here at the end of the review, but i just would like to say it was a pleasure reviewing and seeing your artwork, wish we had more artists like this on here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
There could still be some options on how to improve on things so ill try and suggest some areas and suggestions where it needs it, maybe you will look into the suggestions here. The backround could use some work, like a pattern of some sorts, or more gradient in shades in the backround would be nice.

[jack in trouble]

A grand picture

And here we have another fine art piece, of creativity and design, i love the effort you have put into this to create something with good detail and quality, you cant ask for any better, so props to you on a wonderfull piece of creativity. Wow you really have to look for the details, because there is so much to see, just wish this had "COLOR" to it or maybe just some parts had little color here and there hehe, but the detail of this is very high quality and was pretty impressive on me, so i was glad to have reviewed this. And what can i say more about this interesting and unqique piece of art, ofcourse there could be improvments but from what i have seen on this creation you have impressed this reviewer.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And there it is anawsome creation that shows the efforts, and i wouldnt mind seeing a tad more improvment points as its never a dull time for improvments even just the little ones, so here are a few improvment option s and choices to chose from. Try adding some color or maybe just a part here and there.

[Illuminate my soul]

Very nice

And once again i have found a nice art piece here, its a goodpiece that shows your effort, and you really went out of your way, i may have a few ideas for some slight change later though. Well i have to say this was pretty fantastic, it had a realistic feel, and the "DARK" feel of it really seemed to work out in that aspect of things aswell, so nice job all around here, I think a close up shot of some soldier would be nice like hiding in the fields, or something to show more battle situations. and so-on And to end this review, i will comment that i was pleased with all you did here, you created something good here and it was a unique and something differant wich i liked.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So some slight changes could go here but not to take away from your direction either but once in awhile its nice to change a few things if needed ofcourse so i have a few possible ideas that you should think about. So some more characters more people running and maybe even a close up shot of someone hiding in the fields of some sort.

[Hulk vs Vegeta]

Nice versus

A nice piece of art you have here, its kind of differant yet its got its own vibe and seems to work well with all the elements thats surround it, nice job. So this would be a good battle, i think the hulk would win, goku works off fake power while hulk works off of raw power, but anyways as for a drawing itselff you did well, and the texture and coloring seemed to comeout well also, the backround could be slightly better, more backround effects may be in order. but anyways it was pretty good. So after seing that piece of art i am glad i did, allthough it could use some little details it was a pretty nifty piece and i was pretty excited wit it overall.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So here are some tidbits of improvment ideas and tips here and there for you to do with they may help or you may want to go into a whole new direction just something to try though. So my advice on this one might be that you could add some more effects on the backround somehow.

[Huntress]

Decent

So its only once in awhile that we find something thats interesting and unique on the portal, and thats what i have randomly found here today, you have outdone yourself with this unique piece. Fabtastic piece of fantasy art here kind reminds me a lil bit of a diablo barbarian, the girl is cute but maybe if she is a warior of some sort she should have some battle scars and even some more grungy looking skin and hair, just a thought, but overall this was still a pretty good piece, just needs some battle mark ups. And as i end thin i will say that it was a pleasure finding this piece, the portal has many amazing art pieces including what you have created today.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And as for some type of improvments, Well ill suggest a few ideas, but for themostpart you seemed to have the right idea and direction down, but here is something that may or may not help in that direction of improvment. So as mentioned some battle scars and more grunjy look would be nice.

[I.V. 7]

Very cool

Another good find, of some decent art we have here, now im no expert but this is pretty good if you ask me, and its clearly nice visually, you have some good ideas here and i like what you have done here today. I absolutly love this one, the "COLORS" are all differant and work well with one another making something interesting so this was notbad at al, i especially like the yellow that works over the black with a red glow, so maybe some more glow on the red and something in the backround like some distant back scene or something. Not sure what else today you have brought everything here today and made a decent piece for everyone to enjoy, there might be some improvments but not much at all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So someimprovments would make this a tad better but then again i dont want to take away from anything of your creation and design. but here are some posibilities. The backround could use a faint but distant scene, maybe some dead people or a city drop, and some more "GLOW" on the red around the character would be another nice touchup.

[General Buford Alexander]

This was neat

A good piece of artwork here you have, it has some nice elements its unique and differant, so you have the skills and you just outdid yourself with this piece, would love to see more of this aswell. Alright this was neat, it was differant, i like the characters, I like the backrounds even, imthinking maybe you should even have some sort of "BORDERS" here some green military style might give it more focus and such, just some ideas that could excell this into some better detailed work, but i like what you have sofar, keep up the decent work. And so I was pretty pleased with everything, I liked your ideas and concept with this piece, There could be be some extra details, but i will get into that later.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This is where i like to suggest some improvments, not everything actually needs them but i like to post them anyways, so here are some poosible ideas that may work. Some more details that could show up. on a bigger scale might be a possiblity.

[Greatest Golden Starserpent]

Nifty

A fantastic piece you have here, there are some points i may get to later that you could improve on but for the mostpart it was pretty nifty i thought So this ws nifty, you can see all the little detail here and there, and the backround was notbad either, allthough i thought some more and extra detail would have been nice aswell, It had some decent creativity, maybe as a point of some improvment you could make a larger canvus making the detail larger somehow. So i was pretty pleased with this you have outdone yourself, on this and this one has all the great elements in the right places, you do good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some ideas i may have for improvment here i may suggest a few i may not suggest anything but ill go ahead and post something or some possible ideas, so try and look into them. Larger canvus larger detail for more visual effects of the detail would be nice.