XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dave's Adventure]

Haha

This was nice I like the whole idea of the ghosts on this one the dark scenes at end we're really good still showing color made for a cool comic of ghosts lol an adventure for sure with this one you should make more adventurous ones like this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More adventures with ghosts

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[NightMARE Fuel: Ponyta + Tentacruel]

Now that is beautiful

Such a beautiful piece of artwork here just the detail alone is very awsome the color comes in very good too so that's a nice job there and I must say that the abstract feel is just so beautiful I don't normally give out fives but today this has earned that and we'll deserved I think you could ad some borders on to this but anyways nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some nifty colorful borders or frames would be a nice touch here

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[rubber boy]

Very nice work here

Wow this was great kind of reminds me of the nightmare characters you have added so much detail and depth to the character it's just uncanny so you have some massive talent here and it shows off well I would think about doing something with that background though it's just too plain anyways keep up the great work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more detail and depth in the background

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manicthecat responds:

hey thanks man!!! also sorry it took me a long to get back to you. im just kind of a lazy p.o.s. ya know lol.

[Rorshach]

Love this

Wow this was pretty good I like the darkness of it all it's very good detail and love that lighting from the back but I think that lighting from the back should be much brighter and shine much more with a massive glow of sorts it will accent the main focus much more just an idea to try out

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More lighting from background

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[Maid Lucina]

Cute

A cute piece here love the use of color it just seems to standout and is very vibrant you have a style of it's own and that makes it pretty unique the backround could be changed up though but besides all that this was notbad. So keep up the decent work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background changes are in order

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[UNDERTALE/KAGEROU]

Oh wow

What can I say about this piece it's kind of creepy in the fact that it's scary but I do have to say the animation portion of this is pretty brilliant and the character itself is well done. I think the only thing to top this off would be to have some glowing eyes or something that would really be awesome and scary at the same time. Just something to think about for this brilliant piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glowing eyes would be perfect for this element

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[Guilty Crown Vee/Rookie Parody]

Very intense

Well this one was very good love how they seem like they are standing on some mountains or something I think a sun setting in the background would have been perfect and you need a sparkle on the end of the guys sword just for an extra effect or something but those are just a few ideas that could really work and make this even better looking

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A shine and sparkle on the sword and a moon or sun set in the background

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[Wishing Rem {Vee/Rookie parody}]

Very nice

Wow I have to say this was very impressive stuff I don't think this is your best of works but it's still amazing and I think something more should be done with that backround as it was somewhat bland that actually may be the intent but wouldn't hurt to have more detail well anyways keep up the fantastic art works

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Backround seemed bland

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[Inktober Day 9]

Random

And here's a random piece with lots of unique and odd characters some really random characters. Tobad this was not in color it would be pretty awesome if you ask me. But I do like the detail you have added here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes as it's more of a random idea

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[Potatoman Begins: Page 4]

Oh dark

And here we are with a dark one this one allows for some better hlow and lighting effects but I see you didn't push that idea too much but as for the story of this it really does come alive all and well and the story unveals here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More lighting effects

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