XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[December COTM - "Wizard"]

Nice effects

You have some really nice effects here the lighting effects are really good and I think you could ad a much more vibrant glow on those effects and it's something you could really push. But besides that this was a nice art piece very well done very artistic and a style of it's own very unique and I like what you have done here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Add more glow

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[Pop Team Frigid (Animated)]

Cute

This is something my girl woulod like. it reminds me of my-little-pony. i am sure that is not your goal here but the cuteness just captures that type of look in their faces. maybe it was an inspiration? I am not too sure here. I would add some borders here since it is animated just to make it look more like a show. They animate very simply but I feel they need to do more than just that bounce, maybe have their eyes swint too? SOme more in the animations woud be best, This one really caught my eye, the deep style of talent really shows off well with this one, there are some bland areas that can be worked on but other then that this was awsome. You even added some Groove to it so nice effort here. So with this piece it kept me wanting more for its interesting design, but as I do end this review I would like to say its a nice piece overall.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More animation effect, try making their eyes swint like a smile and a border around the image

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[Faces]

Cool

Ireally cant wait till this gets deeper into the comics I like your character work here and like the humor but I am in need of some of that deep detail and color you have later on but I will give you that you added some nice humor on this one and thats a plus on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color like on the edges.

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[Horroscope]

Haha

Well I have to admit this was pretty funny, you do have some funny stuff that you really bring out and some jokes are good and to lay it all out on a comic is pretty nifty and I had some chuckles with this one, so nice job once again on some humor on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Color ofcourse.

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[me in chibi]

Nice use of color

So first of all you have a nice sense of color and you have some vibrant uses of color thats what I like about your work here and other works in your profile, adding some backround svene would have been a great change here but besides that this is a nice character as it is, look forward to more from you real soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding more effort on the backround would be a great idea here and making this a better overall piece.

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[Tankmen-loves box]

Cute

Haha Well I found this to be cute yes I used the word cute, Anyways this was actually notbad and seems like you could have added more little details like "SHINE" to the glasses and some texture to the box itself, maybe even some detail in the backround, but really besides that this is your own creation and it is what it is.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few things like shine in the glasses, texture in the box and some backround scene,

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[The Sugar Claws Cover]

Peach

Really love the color-tone you used here it seemed to mesh very well with the whole piece as a whole, This particular piece seemed to need a pink or reddish border or frame of some sort, A really nice sense of shades aswell, and your comic should really do well, wonder how it all went since this is a bit older now.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This particular piece seemed to need a pink or reddish border or frame of some sort,

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[Jokes]

Interesting

WEll here we have another interesting comic and I do like it, but again nice to see what it was like before it got somewhat decent, the added color later is a huge plus, nice little story you have here though and made me chuckle, so nice job on this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color but I know that comes later.

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[Spring]

Nice

Not sure what a lot of these are but I like the design and looks like you put lots of time and energy into this with great effort and thats what really counts the artistic shine really jumps out at you and I was very impressed right from the start so very nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some borders and or frames would be a plus for sure.

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[Blue Martini]

Cool

And another beautiful piece you have here not too much colors in this one but you were still able to bringout some interesting styles of things and the shine on these are pretty good, so overall I was pretty impressed with your style of work here and again always artistic.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad even more shine to it.

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