XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Starcraft Terran Medic]

Nice stuff

Now here you have presented something good here there are some things about this that really standout and some that dont. but its a good start sofar. Now sofar this is a good start and you made it stand out and some areas didnt so much. Very nice visual here, love some of the colors and tints it really brings things out well. Now before I get to the helpfull changes part of the review I will say that you have done well here, and I was impressed with a number of areas.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ok and here we are with another helpful idea or two, hope they do help but if not Glad I was able to put a tad bit input on a few things. Maybe adding more of a "SHINE" in places like on the outter helmet areas you had some shine already but wouldnt mind seeing more of a bright type of shine or sparkle shine.

~X~

Vonschlippe responds:

I honestly think this is a rubbish review.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Please provide actual descriptions of what's good and what's bad. You repeated the first sentence twice, partially reworded, to bloat the paragraph. Your only suggestion is vague and does not help in any way whatsoever in improving the "not so good" elements of the piece. Maybe I'm over analyzing but I don't think you put any effort into this review.

~Von~

[Orestes: What's this?]

Alien-ish

So sometimes its kind of hard to judge someones art, but sometimes you have too, I think you have a wonderfull piece here but again could use some more efforts and better details, maybe a few changes but not much, anyways notbad. There can be more progress to be made though. I found this one to be interesting I like the antanna like things on his head, I thought you could add some effects there with those maybe a glowing ball of sorts might give off a sense they are alive and whatnot. As this review comes to an end i just want to say that it was a pleasure seeing this and reviewing it, while it was not perfect or bad, it was just right and showed some skill of art and in the end it was pretty decent. some things could be better but its an awsome piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So some slight changes could go here but not to take away from your direction either but once in awhile its nice to change a few things if needed ofcourse so I have a few possible ideas that you should think about. You have a good Installation, here and have outdone yourself. More shades or more detail in the backround, then as stated above maybe some glowing speres on the end of the antannas from his head would be a nice added effect.

~X~

[interesting use of trike]

Tricycle

So its always a pleasure to see stuff like this they are both artistic and show off the Artists visions and skills, and with this particular piece you did present someneat and differant so I had some pleasure in revieing this, so nice effort here. This one here was a very good drawing of a tricycle and gives off a story that its broken and not in use, i would even go as far as having a child in the backround with some tears of sorts for the added story to it. But anyways great art piece everything seemed to come together, now as always there could be a few changes here and there but then also i like it as is, but regardless this is pretty neat and nifty. so keep making stuff like this one i look forward to much more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So someimprovments would make this a tad better but then again I dont want to take away from anything of your creation and design. but here are some posibilities. there may be some areas that you can make your Priority but here are some possibility options. This has a deeper story to it maybe adding onto that like a crying child would be a great add-on.

~X~

[Master Deathskull]

Batty

Kudo's to you on this piece, Now here is something that really stuck out to me its these types that are really nifty and something kind of differant, But I really enjoy finding stuff like this on the portal. And I am excited to review this piece as its full of creativity and imagination. We canallgo a little batty with this one, you have some nice shades and the actual bat is a pretty impressive drawing, its the textor "FONT" at the bottom that could use some work, maybe a different font with thicker letters or something so that it stands out more. A nice art piece here, some good creative touches and feel to this whole piece, but it was something new and differant and i really liked it, so nice effort there, anyways keep up the good work. And untill next time keep up the decent art styles. There was a few ideas to make better but the art piece was still ok.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Its the little things here and there that could really propell this into something more, the extra this and the extra that will help for sure, so i have gone ahead and suggested some possibilities. So the right Approach would to have some Modifications here and there on some areas of the piece. Font could be much better with more thickness and something that jumps out at you.

~X~

[Portrait of Self]

Stange Face

Kudo's to you on this art piece, now that i got that out of the way lets move along here, So here we have something not too shaby, the artwork is notbad, in fact I kinda like what you did here, some more polish up here and there would be a good start of improvment though. Hmm I have to say that this one was pretty interesting some nice use of color and drawing of the character aswell, its kind of just there. But anyways good art piece here i like the effort you put fourth here, and it shows and shows the skills you have, you should make more stuff like this as i look forward to seeing more of it, so keep up the great work, i really like what you presented here today.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
So as I look for some improvment points,this was a decent piece it could use some more efforts and a few adjustments for a better outcome so here are some ideas that may help, and i do hope they help as this is a good piece of art with some good potential, so anyways try some of them out if not all its all a plus for you. Wouldnt mind seeing more focus on the eyes and such, maybe adding more color all around would be a big plus.

~X~

[Orestes: Apple?]

Skelly

An interesting skellie you have here. Skelly here with some really smooth lines and nice backrounds not sure I would change anything maybe adding more "SHINE" to the outter top part of his skull but thats about it. And so not much more to say except that i really liked this piece, there was some grey areas that could be worked on, but still really enjoyed what you presented here, and was glad I had a chance to check it out. so make more stuff like this because ofcourse ill be there to review it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
If you were to improve on this, I would suggest some new ideas, Its pieces like this that make me enjoy art even more, so i may have a few ideas that i would hope could help you improve on stuff, But here are some ideas that could help to improve some things, More shine to the outter top part of his skull, and maybe even a sort of red hlow comming from the eye socket parts to add to that extra effect of the overall picture.

~X~

[Me]

Pixle

Fantastic use of art in this one, This one kinda blw me away so very nice workon this one, and this is the sort of stuff that I have really come to love. you have Captured something great with some Flair and you have some good insight on the art world, so nice job here. Kind of like some pixle like art this was pretty nifty and the bright colors are cool, I think the only issue here is that the "IMAGE" could be on a larger canvus style. other then that it was decent. But anyways This was pretty interesting something new and thats always a plus when you see alot of the same styles, so keep up the good work and keep making creative stuff. So keep making nifty stuff as this one and always keep a creative mind. and keep making stuff that will make one think.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
You have a decent piece of arthere so its a hard siuation to suggest some improvments but as they say theres always room for some sort of improvment. You have a good Installation here, Your Priority in the efforts here are high and thats why i liked it, so nice job here today. Making it larger in view screen size would be a plus maybe even adding some type of borders around would also be a plus, but overall it was decent.

~X~

[simplicity]

Simple

You seem Dedicated in some parts on this one and it was Refreshing to see more different syles of art here, I was pleased with most of this, while some parts could be better. Well I must say this is simple, but alos i see much more in this aswell, so when I do look at this I see from a distance a man walking a long path to his goal, maybe im strange like that but overall its as it is simple yet unique. I have had a good pleasure in reviewing this, you have a good visual up here and its all rolled into one decent submission of an entry, There is some unmatched creativity of effort here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Kind of like a car or house they do need a little work so that they can run better, Even if its a new one You find all the little kinks that need some working out, So here is my take on some of that on this art submission. if something is broken in the house you can fix it up easily or ad new things so lets try some things. While this was just kind of simple there was some depth to it, you could spruce this up by adding a border or frames around the edges or even a red dot or circle. "COLOR" does amazing things when its just a small amount.

~X~

[Short Comic #5 - Sethdd]

lol Cute

I personally feel that That this was an ok piece, but Lets start from the top and by that I mean the whole piece it has a certain style that keeps me interested but other areas kind of drew me away. Haha this one had some humor to it, I am thinking these might look alot better with some color not the frame work but maybe just the characters themself. notbad of a comic maybe added an extra set of boxes to make it a tad longer to extend the humor somehow. Things are set up and as this one is coming to an end, you have presented some interesting things here and I must say you presented it all in good fashion.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I always stress in my reviews of fixing this or adding that, but in all honesty this was nifty and I can see adding some good ideas here that will make this much better. extending the humor with a longer comic frame work is one way to improve, might look alot better with some color not the frame work but maybe just the characters themself.

~X~