XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fire]

Flame on

Haha ok anyways very nice effect here and great use of the flame itself it's is visually beautiful and smooth animation so nice job there I do however think that you can improve on something like this and that would be to give the flame a much brighter glow and radiant feel about it like a flame might be

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More glow and brightness from the flame

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[Animating with CSP]

Wow nice

This one was actually pretty cute and I do like that little animation as well it made it that much more better I was just not fond of that backround I think you should have had more of a back drop of a background or something it would show more of where your little characters world is but anyways nice and cute with this piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background scene of the characters world

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[Power Cut]

Notbad

Well this was notbad and must have been an easier one to make with all the darkness about and such that lighting could be brighter though and that's just an opinion though I do like this one it was quick and to the point

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Brighter lighting effect

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[Obstacle Course]

Lol

Alright this one made me laugh a very good chuckle with this one and it's entertaining ending and that ending was pretty good too really funny so you executed the joke well actually thaught it could have gone even longer

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Really nothing but maybe longer comic next time

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[Mwlruotpbrejjk]

Beautiful

This is a beautiful piece here the color alone is very impressive and you have all sort of stuff just comming out it's just uncanny and you bring it to life no need for any changes on this piece it's perfect as is so nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Perfect as is

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[Bedtime Story]

Very nice

And another nice piece to the comic series bedtime stories are great I loved this story it shows love and caring I think you could have added more glow on the lighting in this one though like more glow effect but other then that it was pretty good and I was well entertained with this one as a whole anyways nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More glow effect from the lighting

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[Potatoman Begins: Prologue]

Awesome

And here with this one you really show alot of detail and bring that forward and that color is deep to the story is notbad and this was notbad I thaught you could have stretched it out a bit longer but was still a great piece and can't wait for the next one so nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Stretch it out a bit more maybe a scene or two more

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[Fresh Air]

Very nice

And here we are with another great comic piece by everyone's fave duo they really get into a mess with this one I think all the color really pushes this one over the edge and it makes it just overall great so nice detail in this one. I wish the frames we're more detailed but it's all cool

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some detail and or color in the frames borders would be kinda nifty

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[Squishy]

Cute

Well here was a cute piece and you really know how to bring out the color first of all the design on the character is really good but nice color I think the white border should be a dark pink or light purple though nice job though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some change of color on the border frames

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[Demon girl]

Wow nice

This was very nice the texture is very good on this piece I do think you need to ad some shine on her backside though ad some sparkle and would have been nice if she had more of a sultry smile or something but overall this was a pretty character and the background could also use some work but anyways nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround work some shine and more smile expression

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