XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Rowlett Idk.]

Cute

Well this was a cute piece and I love the animation you have here seems like you could have added a lil more to that and the backround was kind of bland so you should think about adding to that too. Nice character work though just needs more detail more energy anyways nice work all the way around

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some extra depth and detail in backround and more animation

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[capybara girl]

Very nice

I like the way you have this set up. It seems like this piece needs some sort of border it would allow for more focus to the main point of view so nice work here and great characters maybe even ad some depth to the background

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some borders and frames and some depth in the backrounds

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[She Hulk Colored]

Love this piece

You seem to have made it all come to life and the lighter green seems to work well on this one aswell, very good pose of the girl, and I also love the subtle backround aswell, it all fit so well and came alive with a creation of your own so very nice work here indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Dont think it needs anything to be honest.

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[Trippy Shrooms Colab]

Different for sure

Well this was different for sure but you have shown us some nice creation here with this style and such, the colors could be better and you could have more vibrant colors but for what it is, its notbad at all, and I do look forward to even more of your creations.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More vibrant colors and more use of colors.

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[Alive]

Very beautiful piece

Its stuff like this that really get me going on art all the color and all the elements that bring stuff like this alive and very vibrant so very nice job on your art skills and talent here, I like what you have done here very beautiful stuff, so keep making great stuff like this, if anything bring the colors out even more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
If anything bring the colors out even more.

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[Floating through space]

Pretty

The background and effects here are very pretty to look at and the color use is very spot on for a space type setting. I think the cat needs a bit of work, just fine detailing and maybe less use of lines in the outline of the image to flow more with that space type background. It was good that you used a bit of color in those lines but maybe try a blending of the colors instead of simply changing the black line to a color that matches the fill colors. Overall a very interesting pretty artwork. I love stars and space so I did enjoy this one. You have shown some decent effort here, and it does spark some interest especialy with me, its the little things that keep me interested like this piece. I got a good feel with this art piece, it was interesting yet it could use a few improvments as stated already, but overall I thought this was actually a pretty good piece, so keep up the decent artwork here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just try to blend your main image with the background more and use less lines to give a better look

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thewolfprime responds:

Thanks so much! Yeah I've been working on improving my line work. :)

[I think I feel Sick]

Change the backrounds

Well while I love the design here and you have some nice creations that black backround just doesnt mix for some reason so some type of design pattern or even a lighting effect of some sort. just try a few different things and see what works the best. anyways nice design here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some changes in the backround for sure.

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[gross candy]

Colorfull

Wow this one has lots of design and colors to it, it really just jumps out at you with a unique style about it and thats what I liked, not sure about the black backround though maye put some lighting in the backround somehow., just an idea though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some effect or lighting in the backround would be nice.

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[Lion's Head.]

Awsome

Well I must say this was pretty awsome I love the head and the amount of detail you have added in here was pretty impressive aswell, you really know how to put some nice ideas in here, I do think the backround could use more detail or some effect back there, anyways nice work here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround work ofcourse.

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[Dorakk Red-Shield]

Very nice indeed

This was very nice work I love those specs in the background I think you could have them glow more or at least have some of them glow more and sparkle that would really represent the element much better so nice job on this as white keep up the great work this was a fantastic piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More glow on the specks in the background

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