XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Blaze Lingerie 2]

Very nice work

You have some very nice drawing and with this particular piece I really love the deep blue theme you have going on I think that chain was just about perfect you should have it sparkle just a tad so nice job there

~Things To Improve on~
A bit of shine and sparkle on the chain

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[Curly Brace]

Very nice

This was very nice I like the red but think with the darker background you could have a deeper red or something anyways nice job I like the drawing and you have some nice drawing skills would love to see more though

~Things To Improve on~
Some deeper reds would be nice

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[Soldier in the rain]

Very nice

So this was some really nice work the shine was a nice touch the rain was an even better touch but you should represent the rain hitting the ground better maybe some puddles or something that jumps out more that would be a real plus of things anyways nice character design I really liked it so nice work indeed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some better rain effects when it drops

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DovahFeyn responds:

Wow, I wasn't expecting to get any more feedback on this. Thanks for your feedback. Weather effects are something I have barely done, so I will definitely try to do some more work on it.

[Prince Of Persia Process]

Nice work

Well this was cool could use more effects like on the flame and have it flame with some brightness even a small animation on the flame wouldn't hurt either but I like the progressive showing of your work is actually notbad at all and you have a nice style of work here keep up the good work and keep the energy going

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more flame work more detail

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[Rogue Star]

Decent

Well this was notbad I thaught this could have been better maybe more design on it more color you should really take this through Photoshop and enhance it with some brighter colors and more effects to it it's a nighty piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Needs some Photoshop effects

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[Hero & Pet]

Nice work

This was cool the background could use some detail or some design of some sort the twirling circles could be hlowing or brighter light up or something but you have a nice character design here very good work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small effects that could be added

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[Kanon - Ayu]

Cool stuff

So I am going thru your profile and looking at both old and new works you have a fantastic style of artistic ideas and creations I'm not too fond of this but only because I'm not use to it but I love what you did with the sky you should ad some bird or a flock of birds flying through but anyways nice work once again

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A flock of birds would be cool

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[Snowfield.]

Very nice

This was cool I love what you do with some of the background scenes and create this vast world with this one you are dedicated at every turn and it shows off well so nice detail and great creative scene here very nice work indeed I like your style will check out more of your work but for now keep up the fantastic pieces

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This was perfect as can be

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[Spirit of the Woods]

Love this

I love what you did with this piece the green stars they could glow a bit more and sparkle of course I could see you adding even more smaller stars in the background as well but that's just me wanting to see a more vast world from your character but still you have a beautiful piece of artwork here I look forward to more though

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Brighter stars distant and more stars

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[Me. D:]

Cool

Another cool piece by you with some nice design here a big ol smile lol not sure what to suggest on this one you have some good talent for sure maybe fix up the background a bot more detail and such but for what it is it's decent work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround detail

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