XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inner Darkness]

Nice

Well here is a nice piece of work, the detail is emaculate and the colors shine with pleasure, the art piece itself gives off and tells of a story, overall very good stuff here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Onlything I can see you working on here would be maybe adding some "LIGHTING" effect in the backround.

~X~

[La Fille du Marais]

Wow

First of all congrats on the front paged stuff, and this was pretty impressive. I do wish there was more effort on the backrounds and with more detail ofcourse.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The backround was a tad bland, maybe some small effort in those areas.

~X~

[Scarecrow & Doggie Pal]

Notbad

Well this one is notbad kind of neat and nifty, I do however wish you had a "COLOR" version or even parts of it would be great in color, just an idea to think about.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Adding some color or even just parts of it colored would be a great plu.

~X~

[Darkness Fanart]

Notbad

Well notbad on this piece here it does represent some darkness about it and all I like some of the small things you have pushed here, but maybe more work on the "FONT" it was ok but could represent more of a scary touch to it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail and effort on the font.

~X~

[Mountain Dragon]

Nice work

You have brought this to life this type of design is always an eye opener and keeps the viewer interested in what you brin forward. You have a nice piece here would love to see some more "TOUCH-UPS" and I will get to that in a bit. Now with me ending this review in just a bit I do want to say it was a pleasure checking this piece of out as it kept me interested and wanting more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And now this is where I try and bring up some things that may help this sometimes new ideas or even old tricks can help but sometimes not but this is what I have. Some glow in the red eyes, maybe some "MIST" in the backround like with the mountains and all and then I would go as far as darkening up the grassish area maybe give it more of a dark feel.

~X~

[We Are the Golden Mix]

Nice character sheet here

So this was a nice character sheet with lots of use of color, lots of unique characters and overall lots of detail, I really like the use of color here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe on a larger "CANVUS" you could show more detail some of the "EYES" seemed kind of smal but still ok.

~X~

[A story including you! 2]

Interesting

Notbad of an art entry into the portal Some of the visuals here are pretty interesting nice design overall just some decent work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I can really try and help but you bring a lot of talent to the table, but lets see where I can actually help, but anyways lets give it a go.

~X~

[Fat Dragon]

Dragons are cool

Well I particuarly love "DRAGONS" and this sketch here really represents a solid dragon great line work great sketch work all around, maybe a color backround though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Yeah I would say adding a color back round behind a black and white sketch would be pretty awsome.

~X~

[The Doggy Goes...]

Nice Hand

Well nice hand drawing here the shades the lines, all very good light texture here makes this a pleasent, would have loved some more stuff or focus in the back round but you still have a solid piece here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some focus in the backround maybe even a small point of focus would have worked.

~X~