XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Penny practice 3]

Very nice detail

And here was some nice details in this the pencil work or line work in general was massively detailed and very fine work you really filled the whole drawing board too and that was a plus I think if you ad some color like maybe just the eyes this would really standout very nicely so my opinion is to ad some color not all just a part here or there but very nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some added color would be nice

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TheShii responds:

funny enough after some physical copies of this were made I took some prisma markers to it. I appreciate the feedback!

[Spidey!!!]

Nice Spidey

Nice Spiderman always one of my faves when I was growing up I like that you had a full background here but the background is missing some tops of skyscraper buildings and buildings in general that would be a nice addition to this but I like the character work and I like the details with in the character so that was all a plus for me and some nice effort here on one of my fave characters

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background detail like tops of buildings

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Dry-Art responds:

Yeah, I should've paid more attention to the background. Thanks for the tip!

[Poison]

Very creative

And here you have some very creative stuff going on you really filled the canvus with all sorts of stuff and all very good quality I was impressed with this whole piece I think you can ad more brightness to the sun very good creative stuff here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More flow and brighter sun

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[Creeping Madness]

Odd

So I found this one to be odd and strange but it's a good use of color and a nice abstract style of art with great color and some strange creature but it's stuff like this I find to be original so very nice work here maybe more charchter design on this one

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More formation of a character would be nice

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[Procrastinization]

Good detail

I like the detail in this love her look and that hair is really wild I do think as some improvment you could ad more shade in the hair and as for the background that was very impressive with the design I think you should have a burst of light back there it will reflect off of her and show more lighting detail on her skin tone just an idea that you maybor may not use but may improve on things

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some light brust from back end and some more shading in hair

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[Cute Etna]

Very cute

Now everything here was really good I love the shine you added in all the different points I normally would suggest more shine especially on end of tail but you do have some decent shine it's the background that could really use something more the base color is nice but may also needs a design to it like some pattern and such but anyways very nice work on this fine charchter piece hope to see more of your fine work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some design or pattern on the background wall

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[OPEN ETNA]

This was cute

Now this was a cute piece here everything looked just right some cute charchter and cute friends very nice form I love her hair and tail you need much more shine and sparkle on her tail like the tip of it then maybe a streak of shine on her hair it would reflect nice off the deep color you have but with all that said I will say this was a pleasure to review and hope to review more soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and sparkle points here and there

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[GoH: Devil]

Devilishly good

This was a nice devilishly good character with some really nice form and I like the shine I wouldn't mind more shine and some sparkle on the tip of her horns would be another great idea she is perfect with the black dress and this really came out well a nice art piece and you bring lots of energy here with lots of fine detail so nice job on this one anyways keep up the good work I really like this piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some random shine and sparkles her and there

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[Collision of Asses]

Nice fresh colors

I like the nice and fresh colors used here you really have some sharp design here as well I like the blood splatter but my question here is why no blood splatter on them and there bodies that's one thing they should have I know you like the whole fresh look but blood on them would have been a cool idea very nice work here and just ad some blood on them even if it's just a little bit of splatter

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Put some blood splatter on there bodies

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