XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[She's abit of a tease]

This was different

Well I have to say this was different but you have a nice style about it I think the body could be polished a bit more more form and more color tone just a tad but overall this was a nice job like it very much and hope you make more

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More polish on the body tone

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[Er get it off me.]

Love it

And love the expression and emotion you gave her face that was just perfect it was the background that did not fit well with me I think a darker tone of green might work and you should mesh it with another green but anyway nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Mesh out the green with a darker tone

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[Chocolate Lionfish]

Very nice

And wow you really have a way with color and you really make the color come alive these deep colors work so well I think the eyes are nice too and think that you should ad a sparkle on the eyes or eye but it's all good artwork

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad a sparkle on the eye

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[Blowing bubbles]

Love the use of color

I really love the use of color all the right colors just match up just right purple teals etc just works so well so nice job on use of color I think adding some shine to the bubbles would be a nice little improvment to try out

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine on the bubbles

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[Android 18 naked (DBZ) [Shaded Version]]

Nice

I think you did this one already but anyways nice form on the body nice look on the face and even a nice background that really comes out at you all this needs now is a sun set in the background with a beam of light

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad a sunset in the background with a sun beam

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PurpleTANK responds:

Thank you for all the reviews, i been pretty busy today working on my new God Of War - Flash game so i couldn't reply to all of your comments, this one is different because i added shading to Android 18's body, besides that everything else is the same, I will work on a background for the other ones as well as add some sexy muscle tone to Tornados body and maybe make a nude version too. PT

[Caulifla naked (DBS)]

Nice hair

So this one was another good charchter and I like the form of her body I believe that the only thing this one needs is some backround work like you did with the other character a nice sunset or some backdrop in the background

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some background scene

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[Tatsumaki (Tornado) By Vincent]

This was notbad

So this was notbad and the character is good I like the background detail and like your detail her legs look Abit off seems like it could use more muscle tone almost but anyways that's all I have for this one keep up the good charchter work

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More muscle tone

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[Taurus]

Magnificently done

So this was magnificent a piece all on it's own with it's own style of beautiful line work and smoother curves and what I love the most about this is the deep details like the texture of the horns and you could have some shine on her horns and some sparkle on her jewelry that sparkle off in. A glare but besides that this is magnificently done with perfection in mind

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some shine and sparkle here and there

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[Will Some Pie Notice Me]

I like it

So this was a nice paint style and like the skin tone on this one I noticed two things on this one and that would be ad some shine on her legs and back side and more emotion in her face expression maybe eyes open those few things could improve on this fine piece really nice paint style of artwork hope to see more soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few I ideas and improvments as suggested above

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[Ajna Test]

Very nice

Well first of all very nice animation the flowbof the kick is very real and the body emotion is just right that of a real kick so nice job on that aspect now the things that could be improved on this one would be some wind lines showing she is kicking hard thru the wind and of course her being colored would be cool too some ideas there to try out

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some wind marks and such and some color of course

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