XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Legend of Zelda]

This was pretty fantastic

Just as the title says this was actually a pretty fantastic piece of art with very fine detail love how you have some lighting effects in there but you should have some sun light really beam down in on them not too much but show off some lighting effects

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more sun and lightning effects would be a huge plus here

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[AjitPsi]

Fresh and flashy

This here was fresh and flashy I like your style I like the sprite mode about this all and the flashy whirly circle behind it. I would love to see some lighting effects really come alive in this from that flashy circle thing. Just an idea to think about

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some lighting effects as mentioned

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SuperPhil64 responds:

Thanks for the review! I didn't go too crazy with it and give it lighting effects because I was trying to emulate the EarthBound sprite style but I always appreciate constructive criticism. Cheers!

[Rottytops]

Cool

Very nice work here I like the feel of this very fresh and new. The green cloud seems like it could have more of a glow on it. Just something to think about but besides that it's actually notbad at all not much more to say about this other then it's fantastic

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glow behind the character would be nice

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[Gone Shopping]

Nice

A nice design here it allows us to see what's really happening in the underworld of the water lol no but really some nice job here I like all the details of this and all the focus points I could see you adding some more little detail stuff here and there making it even better nice job indeed.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few little more tid bits of detail items would be a plus

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[Raven]

Fine work

A fine piece of work here with some amazing shine texture and detail just overall great designs here with a realistic design it's a plus on all fronts with this one love the deep colors and textures I would not suggest any improvments at this time as this is great work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe just a backround scene

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OddmireAsh responds:

Thank you! I agree that I do need to work on designing backgrounds, most often I just draw the character and have a simple colored background.

[Notebook 04]

Very nice drawings

And here we have some very nice drawings good linework not too fancy but you gave us a good idea of your style and it's very well done. Now I personally would love more color and more fine detail within the drawings but that's just me. Some color would be very nice.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned some color. And some more detailed lines

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[Slash]

Notbad

This was notbad, a sketch of sorts here with some interesting line work, but that line work is pretty impressive, and while its just a sketch and such I could see you improving this a great deal, like adding some color and such, but anyways nice effort sofar.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color would be great maybe just a tid bit of color.

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[Slappin Da Fin]

Cute

This was a cute little flash you have here, the art is fresh and bubbly just smooth colors and it all seems to come around very nice here, Only thing I could see changing up would be maybe a glare from the sun. Keep up the awsome work this was a great drawing nice effort shown some decent detail, and was glad I had a chance to review this very nice indeed, hope to checkout more of your work soon. but anyways keep up the great efforts and nice work you put out. Hope to see more soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Only thing I could see changing up would be maybe a glare from the sun.

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[Infinite Red Bulls]

Impressive

This was impressive and creative, Nice use of color here with the styles and unique textures and there is a story going on here love all the detail that this has to offer, you really made something here so nice job all the way around, as for an improvment point maybe some glare from the tv but thats about it I would say. anyways keep up the good work. it was an interesting piece of art, could use some touch ups here and there and was overall pleased with the outcome, so nice effort indeed, now just keep it up on the rest of what you, wich you can see is fine so-far. keep at it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some glare from the tv.

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[i google you]

Intense

Wow this piece was very intense and while its just a few colors and such you still showed some nice style here with whats going on, I feel like you should have the "LIGHT" reflect on more. but its a really nice piece and I really enjoyed it dark and light.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Have more light reflecting off areas maybe shoulders.

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