XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[H.O.O. Cares! Guest Artist]

~~REVIEW~~
So this one is abit older but still has some good quality to it, kinda wacky but there is some sorta story there, it almost has a Comic style to it, all the text and fonts was pretty cool, i think the one thing i didnt like was all the pinkish in the backround it was blending too much with the two main characters, but still besides that it was pretty good if you ask me, and as a last resort of improvment maybe some sorta borders around the edges, just something to try and think about but besides all that this was still pretty good if you ask me, anyways nice job.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some borders would be nice and maybe besides the pink in the backround you could throw in another non blending color there

[Cathulhu Fhtagn!]

~~REVIEW~~
Haha so this one was really good there so much to see and you added lots of personality especially with all the differant cats and such and some humor aswell like the dog that has a cat face sign lol that gave me a chuckle, I think it could be improved maybe with some sorta backround or even solid base color but something would be nice back there, might even be cool if you added some more cats in the distance maybe even some more dogs or something but again does need something more, but anyways this was pretty fantastic, you should make more like this, for now keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well as stated above > some sorta backround or even solid base color but something would be nice back there, might even be cool if you added some more cats in the distance maybe even some more dogs or something, anyways good luck.

Zolah responds:

Thank you for your reply!

Yeah the dog was a 'spy' reference, Thougth it would be funny :) I seldom get a chance to do something like this. I shall defenetivly go to more Cons in the future xD my geekbar gets raised to the maximum and bad jokes just falls from the sky!

I made it like this so i could print it on t-shirts and such later on, so think of it as a 'invisible area' xD But sure, I will think about what youve said for my next picture, I could just change so I have two different ones if I want to use it as a print. One more detailed and one with less wich would be better suited as a print :) I also noticed that the colouring was way off, on the laptop they werent this colour and I think i will from now on only paint on my stationairy :/ wasnt meant that some of them would get an odd colour tint :/

Thanks once again!

[Queen Blue]

~~REVIEW~~
This was vert beatifull, i love the soft touch and feel to this it was soothing to see very peacfull colors and shadings you gave it that real old feel wich was nice, now as for the backround that could have been better though, maybe someold style design or city drop or just something in the distant, but really other then that this was pretty good if you ask me, and i do hope to see more of your work as this was pretty good and has a nice touch too it, anyways keep up the fantastic art pieces cant wait for more from you, untill then good luck.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I suggested some work on the backround but to be honest it was ok just as is.

[Poultry]

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was pretty cute, it was very simple i like the simple-ness of it, it would be nice tp see more in the backround but in a way it was also ok with what you had alsoso nice job there, maybe adding more texture in the skin tone and even the x you had in the backround, but some more color blending would be nice, The quote text at top of his head was pretty funny and amusing, as for the whole creation and design, so i stated some improvment ideas, hope it helps, good luck on anything else you have planned aswell, i look forward to seeing more from you, anyways for now keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
more texture with in the skin tone and such, also could use something more in the backround as that was abit bland,

Leigh responds:

Yeah sure thanks.

[Heart squashed into pieces]

~~REVIEW~~
OK so this was abit differant from alot of stuff, so my take on it was i really liked it and like all the use of color, you really have it splash out in a very good way here so that was possitve, Thispiece also has some meaning with the words and the whole feeling it gives off of being crished by someone maybe, not sure but it does tell a lil story and that just makes it even better, now to make things better maybe you could darken up the heart more redish and more dripping below, but thats just me, for the most part of this this was pretty good, anyways keep up the awsome work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More redish color could be used, and more dripping below.

Flashmovieboy responds:

Thanks a lot for such a detailed and constructive review ! I appreciate this :)

Before having a girlfriend, I thought that loneliness is the worst pain ever to exist in the world. But after a relationship with her, I learned that while loneliness is a pain comparable with being hit by a wooden plank. It hurts, but doesn't leave a scar. The pain of a break-up, however, is like getting spear of steel impaled through your heart. Not only does it hurt, but for a while, makes me unable to love anybody the way I loved my ex.
Thanks for the advice, although I wanted to avoid using too much red, I'll keep this on mind.

[Weird Dog]

~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm this is notbad i kinda like this one actually i love how you have the eyes so big and large and in your face, they do have a glare or shine too them that seems abit too much but for the mostpart it was still ok. also you should think about giving it some sorta backrounds, maybe some other dogs in the distance or some dug up holes as dogs like to do and such, but anyways this was a pretty good art piece i thought, i hope to see more of your work soon, keep it up.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest a less glare on the eyes and some sort of backrounds would be nice,

[Girl from Rio]

Wow so this one caught my eye this morning. All the tethers in the back are pretty nice would have been nice if You had given them more color. Though. And maybe even have the eyes more open. But I must say this was pretty impressive from the get go. So nice work I was really impressed

And as for improvmens a touch more of color would be nice maybe with the testers behind her just something. That shows differant the testers with more focus

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[Pluvia Promo Poster]

Ok so this was kind of nifty here I love all the lighting and darkness of it. Maybe there should. Be more lighting effects with the moon lighting the water but don't darken the sail boat anymore then it is. Lighting effects can go a long way. Just a thought. But other then that I really liked this. The drawing and character cameout pretty well.

So as mentioned above some more lighting effects would be nice but for what it is this was pretty good already.

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ZombieMonkey responds:

Thanks for your advice! :D

To tell you the truth, this was really my first attempt at doing this kind of lighting in a piece. I'm still nowhere near being good at it and I appreciate all the help I can get in improving upon it. :D

[Mr. Goldiglock and Natalia]

Now this was something. Differant. I am really loving the glow you gave the guys body it really stands out and as making that even better I would give it an even more glow. All the colors are sharp and fresh on this piece. The characters are well drawn so awesome job. Maybe a lil more detail in background next time but other then that this was pretty nifty

As for improvement. Points. Some extra glow. And also some extra detail in the bacriunds. Anyways great job here

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