XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Relaxo - Ray]

Great and entertaining

So these are pretty fantastic and you always bring a good adventure to the table, I have enjoyed this one with a few chuckles so thats a good thing and the intent I believe, but anyways it was like a burstof energy with a bowl of laughs so thank you for that. The ending was the best

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I really like the ending here you should do more stuff like that.

~X~

[Wishing Well]

Brilliant comic you have dawned in us

You have a dedication on these episodes or series of comics the characters are like-able and are pretty entertaining, I really do enjoy the humor aswell, and What I like the most is how the story plays out in a funny way so there is some good checmistry. love these originals.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned I love these old originals just wish there was some added color to them.

~X~

[Simplifying Ray]

A great comic

And here we come onto another piece of the comic and it is pretty good nice style nice adventure and you you made it entertaining as always, I have come to enjoy this comic series and your work you have an interesting style so keep that up its very good. I like it hope you make more, I wouldnt mind that beam of ray more redish just an idea though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make the beam more redish so it looks more like a beam.

~X~

[Air Guitar]

Interesting

I really like your work and love how this comic plays out the comic really does evolve into something different and unique and you seem to have some success at it with your style also love the humor you bring to this so very nice work here, I will for sure look forward to even more.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest some color in the text bubbles would be interesting

~X~

[Red Lion]

Wow amazing

Wow this was amazing work the amount of detail is beautiful the color is just meshed so with with other colors I would normally suggest some background but this was perfect as is and was just a great art piece I like it alot and added it as a fave so nice job indeed I would love to see more of your work here sometime soon

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Not a single thing this is a masterpiece

~X~

[24th Birddy DEe]

This was cute

I have to say this was pretty cute I love the little animation you added and it makes it all come alive with more vibrant feel and it's almost like he is dancing so that's a plus I like the nice fresh colors and just jumps out at you I can see you improving on some more crazy animation to this it's a nice art piece though but anyways nice work hope to see more soon

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More animation

~X~

[Character Art]

Very detailed

Now this one was very nice and the amount of detail on all the characters was wow so much detail so much shading just a beautiful bunch of charchter work here now while this is a white background for the detail of the characters this could use a darker border or frame of some sort but just an idea here or there

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A dark tone of borders or frames

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lamgiang responds:

@ XwaynecoItX: thanks for the feedback. I will try that next time.

[Train Station]

Love it

Love the lighting effects on this and all the characters with all the different little details it's like a real world is taking place so very realistic and you show some style here and just a nice art piece overall now as for that white border or frames I'm not so sure about all that as it seems out of place I could see something darker or with a wood frame like

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A different border frame then the one you have

~X~

[Viking]

Now that's a sight

Wow I must say that's a sight just the idea of what's going on and the moon and it's an adventure that is taking place now with that blue moon I really think you could push more of a lightning effect and more glow behind it so that it just jumps out more with some lighted up glow but with all that said very nice job

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More light up moon

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