XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Linear]

Life

Well its exactly as it says "LIFE" and that describes it clearly, there could be some splash effects thrown into this like some ripped open area with color comming out expressing life can be anything. but just an idea i like the meaning here though.

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As mentioned above, break the norm adding some color or splash effect could be that area of effect.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

That would be cool. :) Thanks for the feedback, and sorry I didn't respond earlier, for some reason this didn't show up in my feed back in September.

[Picasso Face]

Hmmm notbad

Well this was notbad, kind of interesting, I like the color tones and shades, even the outline seems to come together all in its own cute way, would have loved some "SHADES" in the backround but other then that this was notbad. will have to check out some of your other stuff soon.

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Nice work here, nice basic tones but all came together, maybe some extra shades and whatnot.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

I wasn't really going for 'cute'. XD Thanks for the comment though! Always fun to read your reviews.

[Send in the Clown]

Nice

Another nice piece and this one has a nice "COMIC" style about it so you really made it feel like the joker and all his crazyness, so nice work here and props to you on some good stuff here.

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Nice comic style would love to see you expand on that more blocks or something.

~X~

[Abandoned]

Wow

Wow I love it, this is awsome and this is going o be a saved item for me you have really showed another world here a world into darkness but its a beatuifull piece and glad to make this a fave of mine, so nice job indeed.

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I like what you have done here and wouldnt change it.

~X~

[Shadow Bane]

Dark

So this is dark but thats what I like about it, and the color in there makes it standout even more aswell, even the backround was notbad, the "DETAIL" was top notch so nice work all across the board.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe some cloudy smoke effects in the backround to give more of a dark feel.

~X~

[Zombie Bats]

Wow nice

Wow I will say one thing you have a nact for these kinds of things I think you have done very well with this piece nice detail decent backrounds would love to see some blood maybe drops on the ground or some open wounds. nice work here.

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would love to see some blood maybe drops on the ground or some open wounds.other then that this was decent work.

~X~

[Arashi]

Nice

Well this one was nice work, there are some nice things here I think there are some things you can jump on more, like the red "EYES" bring that out a tad more more of a glow, the lightning bolts that are around him could also have a glow or thicker lines aswell.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More glow on the red eyes, and more bold on the lightning lines surrounding him.

~X~

Undeadkitty13 responds:

i see thank you

[Crowbar]

I like

Well I like this one, texture is awsome the blood is notbad either, you even added a good backround I would suggest adding some more "BLOOD" or gushes of blood. overall its a complete piece.

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A complete piece you have here some extra blood would be one way to go about things.

~X~

[Zombie Spidey]

Unique

Now here was something unique and different, I have always been a fan of spidey and here you have made an interesting take on him, onlything I dont like here is that "BACKROUND" maybe a darker and cloudy backround would sufice. anyways nice work here.

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maybe a darker and cloudy backround would sufice, just something to think about.

~X~

[Flame]

This style is pretty nice.

This is a nice style you have here the "BLACK/WHITE" style is always a nifty piece of work and whileits good I do want to say adding just an ounce of "COLOR" would be great just something to think about for future black and white styles.

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Just an ounce of color would be a plus.

~X~