XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Articuno]

WOW

This is some really well done fan art. The pokemon has a great detailed background that really comes at you and brings the pokemon to life. The expression in the eyes is also good and keeps with its character traits. The sparkle and shines all around this as a foreground are a great addition to make it really pop and look like a battle may occur. The glow in the wings is really eye catching and really gives this art something special. The colors are good too but the green feels a bit limited. Overall a good piece and a good fan art. And so this was a good piece I found today, and will start this review off with saying that you know what you are doing, you have a good idea of what you want to do and it all seems to workout well. I like the progress you have done here, And I Applaud you for the good effort. So it was a pleasure reviewing this piece and I hope one day to review more of your work as I thought it was a unique piece, This just Radiates a blend of unique style about it, so keep up the positive ideas and effort.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
The green part of the background just needs to be bigger and maybe have more green in this.

~X~

EdoNova87 responds:

I really glad i love my work :3

[Pixel Pico and Friends]

Cute

This was a cute piece of work with all the newground characters and there pixel formation, One thing I wish was better about this would be that the whole "CANVUS" was much larger in size that way you can ad more details in the backround. just something to think about though.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As mentioned a larger canvus for more detail.

~X~

[Sally]

Sweet

A very sweet and nice piece here, you have done a good job recreating "SALLY" and her innocence and charm with this art. I like the use of the graveyard as the background from the film. The added jar of her materials is a bonus too. The skulls and details in the background really make it come alive. The blues you used for her are also great and match with the film. The textures you have included in her clothing is also very wonderful and adds some realistic touches. I love the use of snow over the entire piece to really give that feeling of a cold night. The legs and arms seem a bit big tho so I think that is really the one thing to watch out on cause that character was very very skinny but perhaps you are going for a more realist size display here. Another good find, of some decent art we have here, now im no expert but this is pretty good if you ask me, and its clearly nice visually, you have some good ideas here and I like what you have done here today. wouldnt hurt to add some flair or abit more flair then you already have. I have been Accustomed to all sorts of styles this one was different, Ok well time for me to end this review but must say it was a fun experience reviewing this piece because of the talent and effort that you gave us. But glad I Finally got around to reviewing this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More proportions on her and maybe some light beaming off the moon hitting her.

~X~

[SlattenFatty]

Wow nice

Really nice character here I love how the reds blend into the greens on this one, and those eyes very intense I do wish the eyes were a bit larger, but you do have some great talent and have shown some awsome detail here. maybe a little work on the backround too, just some small details here and there.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some detail in the backround just something small.

~X~

[Newgrounds Spamfest]

Colorfull

Wow this was pretty colorfull I love all the different characters and all the different color really brings this out, this is a pretty good piece, I wouldnt mind some more shades and sparkles here and there on a few of the characters, and even some huge borders on this would be cool too.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few shades, some sparkles, and some frames on the edges would be cool too.

~X~

[emo girl Standing full body]

EMO

Good lord not those "EMO" girls. I do like the look of this girl and the slight reveal of her breasts is sexy but not too slutty. The outfit you made here has good coloring, gotta love red. Her expression and smile are great and that detail textures and shadows in her face make it really look like a cartoon or a possible animation to be. The legs are a bit off at the bottom as they seem too short after the knees, maybe work on body proportions. The background is a good use of color for the girl but needs a bit more I think. Good job overall, beware dem "EMOS" Pieces like this always keep me interested there is always some nice detail or even simple method of how it was created,but this was notbad at all. And so there you have it, the review is shortly commingto a finish here, I was pretty pleased with the outcome here, it was pretty interesting, there may be some adjustments but maybe not much just depends on the direction you really wanted to go with this.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Work on the legs a bit and maybe give more details in the background.

~X~

[Lifeguard]

Different

Well I will say that this was kind of different but I like the subtle style of it and its a funny character, I think that the backround could have some people walking and such and just have some backround beach stuff but maybe not needed still a decent art piece you have here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround beach scene like people and flags and stuff.

~X~

[Demitirous Doom (With Sketch)]

Wow nice

Dont think I remember this it was pretty good then and still is in todays standards you have some really nice character work, the onlything with this piece is that it needs some backround work maybe a scene or just some backdrop of some sort but still good work for todays standards.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some backround work ofcourse.

~X~

[Jackalope]

Good

I think this here is a good sketch work but could use a few more improvement like more of background as those ink lines seem a bit of a rushed inclusion. I love how realistic this is and how you tried to create a more complicated head-turn position rather then a profile or front view sketch. The eyes are very cute and beedie, and the details for the ink lines are very well done adding texture to the piece. I love the added flower they are eating too. I Applaud you on this one, These kinds of pieces I really come to love because they just sort of jump out at you and tell a sort of story. very Engaging. Its always good to come across different and unique styles of art and as we come to the end of this review I will get to some helpful options soon. One might be that this could be Polished with more Expression of creativity.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Just more of a background, maybe colorize this

~X~

rosesarentread responds:

Wow, thank you for such an in-depth critique! Right now I’m not too good at backgrounds, so I’ll be sure to work on them!