XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Eleven fanart]

Nice

This was cool I wouldn't mind more beam on his face even some brightness to the right of the canvus to show where that light is comming from but have to say you have done some amazing work here great structure and live the meshing of color and textuture

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More beam of light and source of light

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[Itadakimasu]

Very nice

I like this I love the connection from the fish to her face and ears to what she is eating it's all a circle of progress in a way I think the only thing here that could be worked on would be some more shine on her hair but maybe not too much anyways nice job

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A bit more shine on her hair

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[O-hanami]

Nice

I know her face is supposed to look like that but just wish there was more emotion in her face but anyways this was notbad of a piece of art you have here very nice detail on clothing and just all the little details so very nice work here anyways keep up the great details

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[A Pretty Face]

Beautiful

And another beautiful piece you have here the stern face is great gives her that alurring look the hair flows perfectly and the dark shades really work for this kind of reminds me of an old black and white 20s styles but anyways really nice work this is one of those pieces that could use a frame or border along the edges like a portrait might have

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some frames and or borders

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[Raneem]

Beautiful

Wow I have to say this was beautiful and almost perfect piece not sure what you need to do to make it even better because it's pretty solid and love what you do here if anything I would put some frame around this might be the one thing missing to make it that much better but nice work indeed here and I look forward to more artistic styles like this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Put a frame and or border along the edges

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[Self Portrait]

Very nice indeed

Wow I must say this was a very nice piece of art a self portrait not always easy but you did well on this one and showed a really nice paint style I'm not fond of the white background but it's still pretty good maybe a base color or something that is different from the white but it could use something more back there maybe even some border and frames

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some border and frames on this and some color based background

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[Submerged]

Love this

Well this one is a very nice piece love the underwater scene here I do think you could use more fish and other sealife just floating around and such that would give more sealife element to this piece but it's a good piece of art here hope you make more like this

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
As more sealife like fish a shark etc

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[summer day]

Notbad

This was notbad I really like the beach theme I do however think that you need a sail boat in the background or more waves etc the girl drawing here was very nice good structure and her eyes are gorgeous so it came out pretty well and I was pretty impressed

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some props for the beach like a sail boat etc

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[student girl]

Your character work is amazing

You have some amazing work on charchter structure and design the colors are solid and come together very well very nice skin tones I think you could have more shine on her hair maybe even some sunlight in the background but that's just an idea to try and think about

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some more shine and sun beam or sun light

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[autumnal stroll]

Very nice

I honestly don't see any need for any changes on this the background could have something more but your drawing is well done very fresh and the clothing is very detailed and fits so well of the drawing I really liked it and an overall nice piece of art here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Maybe adding something in the background

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