XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ghost is creepy]

Notbad

Well you cant go wrong with some pixel art work this particular piece was a bit small and the animation was everywhere but was still pretty good I thaught, the visual here was pretty nifty, my advice here would be make the view screen much larger and make the animation much smoother, nice job here.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
my advice here would be make the view screen much larger and make the animation much smoother

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[Commission : XirixLunara]

Cute combo

So here was a nice black and white combo group and they look very happy almost feel like a colorized version could even look good too but honestly you have a nice art piece here very welldone on this one.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe a color version

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[Pixelated face]

Simplistic

So I found this one to be simplistic, but it has its personality about it that makes it fun even added a kind of shine and sparkle I did think you could have a color backround rather then a white one.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
maybe a colored backround

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[Role]

As always a great comic

This one was funny wish these were longer Well As always a great comic that you have created for us all to enjoy this was a nice one I really enjoyed it from start to finish some really nice work and this particular one was pretty entertaining aswell so props to you for another nice entry here.

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[Steven Universe is Awesome]

Colorful

Now this was a colorful piece you have a nice action piece too that black backround though seems like you could ad much more in there maybe some added color design maybe some colored border even, anyways a good character you have here and love the color.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
that black backround though seems like you could ad much more in there maybe some added color design maybe some colored border

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[Navia Sitting Down]

A nice lil character

So here was a nice lil character you have here, the black backround seems to really push the visual more for the red hair and such, nice shine added too so no major changes are needed here on this character

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
none

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[Lockjaw]

Unique and interesting web comic

This one was nice not much on the backround detail but still great Well once again you have created a great web-Comic very nice design a fun adventure you keep the humor up and make the story interesting and the art is always as amazing I have been enjoying it for a long time and hope to continue to enjoy it, so do keep it going strong.

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[You're Fired!]

OK

So once again a nice comic style always with some nice colorful art and colors and always added abit of funny moments, the comic style is pretty good and you make it work so I did find this to be pretty entertaining

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
none

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[Fishy Fishy Fishy]

Wow

So this was really nice I love what you have done here with all the color also love that the pixel comes off so well, this was a really nice visual and an artistic design with some color about it all made for one great artistic piece of art here, maybe ad a frame on this piece.

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
A frame or border would be nice.

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RatherRandomReality responds:

Thank you for your review and your suggestions.

[Happy birthday, Akira!]

Nice character

So the character here is really nice love the shine effects like on the leggings and hair you really have a way with that shine, overall the character is really nice great backround detail too, besides all that this was nice

~~SUGGESTED IDEAS~~
none needed

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