XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[NG Halloween]

Wow Intense

So this was some "INTENSE" stuff the amount of detail is uncanny I am very impressed with your work and "CONGRATS" on the frontpage, this is one of those pieces I would suggest to ad frames and some fancy borders so its has that awsome gallery piece just something to think about, Theres alot of nice little artistic and amusing things about this piece, I did however think you could have put more into it, so below and through out the review are a few tips and advice that could help improve on this, You have a symbolic concept here and implemented appropriately, but overall I found it to be pretty good.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
this is one of those pieces I would suggest to ad frames and some fancy borders so its has that awsome gallery piece just something to think about

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[Inktober #3 Some]

Neat

I love this one actually, it looks like an "OLD-POEM" or a lost letter. I think the "DETAIL-HERE" is nice, even tho you are just repeating a pattern, but it "FLOWS" in a nice way and makes you wonder what is going on here or what the words all mean in the end. I wonder what you were think when you created this one? I love the color of pink you used and the simple white with it. Maybe next you could add a border with a page effect to make it looked like a ripped up page or something older in that way? Just an idea. I do think this one was a good piece of art from you. Keep it up as always.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
This one could use a border type to make it appear like a page.

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Cyberdevil responds:

Wordplay, is all. :) Did take a looong time to fill the frame though - there's no copy pasta. Thanks for the review!

[Jupiter Pixelart]

I like it

So this was pretty cool, I like the style here a good texture of the planet allthough I would not have a clue what jupiter looks like I think you created a good feeling and visual on this I do think the "CANVUS" could be larger though, just an idea throwing your way.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
maybe you can make a larger Canvus maybe even then allow for more detail, of other things and will allow for more fin elements and more detail as mentioned, so make a larger canvus. just an idea throwing your way.

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[High Tides]

Very nice work

And this was something "NIFTY" I really like the artwork here love the stars in the backround I would suggest having some stars dimmer and some stars brighter aswell as shinning more light on the two girls at the bottom, but regardless congrats on the award of front page and nice artwork here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest having some stars dimmer and some stars brighter aswell as shinning more light on the two girls at the bottom

~X~

[Mission accepted]

Very intense

Well I have to say that this was a very intense piece great expression and the eyes just came off so well the shine on the ball was great I would love more of a shine too, its pretty impressive work and detail, I wouldnt mind more lighting from the backround even, but anyways nice work here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
some lighting effects.

~X~

[Newgrounds was funny when]

Wow this was impressive

I am loving all the little "DETAILS" of newgrounds and all the old and new stuff that purple lighting comming off of the screen is nice if anything I would suggest to make that screen brighter and much more of a glow on it and such. anyways really nice work here, hope to see much more from you sometime.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More shine and glow from the screen.

~X~

[Bird Witch]

Beautifull piece here

Now this was something beautiful some very "ARTISTIC" elements and I really love that you added the notepad and tools in the photo, I think I would ad some backround color onto this or a colored patteren of some type, but besides all that you have an amazing piece of artwork here.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think I would ad some backround color onto this or a colored patteren of some type

~X~

[Inktober #13 ThINK]

Pretty cool

So this was pretty cool and some nice "ARTWORK" here the pink background inside a detailed "BACKROUND" was a really nice way of doing your art this time around, and you added some shine line details that was a nice effect. I think the background detail in this one was pretty good even for a pattern of some type. I think the detail of the image in the middle itself was really good and this is one of your better ones, not much to say to change here or give opinions on because you have many great elements going on in this one.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Nothing to change, it is find as it is

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Glad you liked!

[Devilman Crybaby]

Wow love it

So this one had some very nice and descriptive "DETAIL" I think that center white character could be more glowing also adding some frames and or borders on the art piece itself would make it more like a visual gallery piece, So what caught my attention with this piece of art was a lot of small things that slowly pulled together something nice here. and it all just jumped out at me with your unique style here, you have some good skills and you pushed the limits, so nice work on this piece.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I think that center white character could be more glowing also adding some frames and or borders on the art piece itself would make it more like a visual gallery piece

~X~

[Inktober #14 Balls]

Haha nice

This one here well this one made me laugh and I did really enjoy this one. The ball itself looks like it is sad, I don't think you meant to give that feeling off but the ball has a look of a frown or just a sad expression on his face based on where you put the ball lines of the tennis ball. I dont much care for the color of the background, but I see why you chose it. I would go for a happier color next time if you don't want the ball to seem sad. I know colors don't sound attached to emotions but they have proven to be related and linked. I would just change that up but good job overall.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some colors that are more happy

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Cyberdevil responds:

Well the sadness was intentional, so I think I went with the right ones then right? ;) It was meant to be both sad and happy, as mentioned in the description, but turned out a bit differently after all. Glad you liked it though; thanks for commentin'.