XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sketch 2]

Great sketch

This was a good sketch you have here, its not everyday that just a simple idea can go from a sketch drawing into something as fantastic as this and all though its a black and white style drawing here I do think you could ad more to it but what you do have is pretty brilliant.

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Just make more like this as this was beautiful stuff

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[Inktober #5 False Bullet]

Umm

Ok there isnt much to say here. You have literally nothing going on here. I do like the joke you wrote in the bottom about being worth a shot. It was a good joke. I did laugh but next time draw something. I'm surprised you didnt get in shit for this hahaha.

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Actual content next time bud lol

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Blank is part of the joke do, as in a blank bullet, you know? False bullet? But yeah, this was just a witty way to skip a day. :) I thought you might've skipped these particular ones intentionally!

[Inktober #6 Rainsicks]

Decent

Well notbad but this seems like it continues or something, nice looking characters under the rain but could use more colors inside the people themselves, you left me wanting more though and wanting to see more of this purple rain, so anyways it was a decent little ink art and I think alone it is a good piece but maybe make this one into a flash animation.

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Turn this into an actual flash with animated rain drops.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Purple rain hmm... gets me thinking of the movie with that same name there! Actually i the midst of watching it today. :) That would be pretty cool, though seems like a lot of extra effort.

[Decisive Battle]

Really nice

So this was some really nice work here I love all the lighting effects and shines they seem to come off well and spread a beautifull sparkle here and there you really make some nice artwork here and I really liked this piece and I dont see any need for any changes on this fine piece, anyways nice work.

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I really liked this piece and I dont see any need for any changes on this fine piece

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[Inktober #7 Lucky 7]

Lucky?

Well this one here was very entertaining with this number you ussd, kept me wondering why you picked this number, and gave me a few smiles with the use of yellows and the outlines in the numbers and squiggles, and somewhat random squiggles at that but thats what i liked about it, so good job and keep it up.

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One thing I tell artists is that a border will really improve your art, and I think this one here could use just one of those but it is fine as is.

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Maybe some subconscious Las Vegas reference; maybe some subconscious reference to something or one on site. :) 7's generally considered a lucky number so... seems coincidence weighs strongly in its favor! Glad you liked it.

[Inktober #8 Eightball]

Love this

I really do love a good 8 ball piece. I have one or two myself that I have done. I do think your version of this is interesting. Books piled over it was a new take on it I have never seen before. I do think that there is still too much white space and the overall 8ball is a bit too small but the colors in the books and their positioning over it with a slight tilt was nice to see. Very creative piece here. I did enjoy it

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I think this one here could use a background of sorts to limit the white space and make the 8ball bigger but it is pretty good so far

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Ah yes, I remember those! Knowledge weighs heavier than luck... maybe? ;) Thanks for the review!

[Sketch 1]

Notbad

A very unique piece here, So this was notbad at all, I like this style of drawing it is black and white but thats one of the things I like about it, and I think you could ad some slight subtle color to it but honestly you have enough detail it may not need any color, but some color might be a plus.

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you should make more of these types and such.

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[Sketch 4]

Good drawing here

Another nice drawing here the backround could use some detail some props or some backround elements, I like that its black and white but that color would really bring this out more, This was actually really good sketch and or drawing as some like to say, but yes a bit of color would really bring this one out, anyways keep making these awsome sketches and drawings.

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the backround could use some detail some props or some backround element

~X~

[Animal-Clown-Ruler]

Very nice

another great group of fine characters this particualar one has some deep detail not as much shine but I think you could have more shine and more sparkles here and there, and ad some fancy frames and such, anyways nice work here and I look forward to more of your work as its a beautiful sight.

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I think you could have more shine and more sparkles here and there, and ad some fancy frames and such

~X~

[Inktober #9 Cloud Nines]

Nice

Another nice piece of art you have here some good coloring and very nice visuals with the 9s. I would for sure like to see this as an animated short, maybe just have the nines floating downward in a gif type display with the window staying still. I think the use of the red and yellow curtains was a nice touch too and made it feel more realistic.

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Nice art here but needs to be animated

~X~

Cyberdevil responds:

Animation required every time there's something falling huh. ;) Thanks!