XwaynecoltX's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Inktober #9 Cloud Nines]

Nice

Another nice piece of art you have here some good coloring and very nice visuals with the 9s. I would for sure like to see this as an animated short, maybe just have the nines floating downward in a gif type display with the window staying still. I think the use of the red and yellow curtains was a nice touch too and made it feel more realistic.

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Nice art here but needs to be animated

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Cyberdevil responds:

Animation required every time there's something falling huh. ;) Thanks!

[Inktober #10 Clear]

Nice work

This was cool and this was a one in terms of quality here and your line styles were pretty consistent. I wouldn't mind even more colors as there was one the one color and it tends to get lost with the rest of the work when you have only one solid color going on. I think that this one is pretty nice as it is tho, but yes, definately needs color. I hope to see this next time with my suggestions as you have repeated designs before.

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Some more color other than the only one you have going

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Cyberdevil responds:

Feels like when I start using additional colors it easily messes things up, sometimes best to opt for simplicity, but I shall experiment; see what happens in the future. :) Thanks again!

[Megaman RWBY]

Nice

So here you have a nice group of characters here and they really stand out well, very sharp and crisp details, my tip here is that you should ad some kind of interesting frame to surround this whole piece I like what you have done here though, very nice work indeed.

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my tip here is that you should ad some kind of interesting frame to surround this whole piece

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[The Gorgeous and the Grotesque]

Black and white stylish

Really nice with the lighting effects I think you should ad much more lighting effects would really improve on this piece, The Black and white stylish stuff here is nice I love what you do with the lines to formulate some nice shades and detail, its un-canny what you can do to make these things truly formulate all with just black and white line work, and its pretty smooth linework if you ask me.

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I think you should ad much more lighting effects would really improve on this piece

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[The Most Haunted Forest]

Very good

Wow this is a great piece of artwork and captures that haunted feeling right down to each detail. The erie way you drew the shadows of trees and the use of fog effects make you really feel this is creepy and perfect for a haunted setting. The blues and cool colors really make it seem haunted too because it isnt using bright happy colors. Good choice there. I would say this needs some characters but you said it was a background for a piece you are doing. I look forward to seeing this from you.

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I am just looking forward to when you add some characters. Good job overall.

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[Inktober #24 The Greeting Card]

Card?

I think one here is more of a morse code than a card but this piece here is very interesting. I mean, it isn't like your others and say is a saying. I am trying to work on what it says actually, because it is bothering me, so you have my interested in that aspect. I think the lines you used for the text is good, but too basic. You have much white space surrounding them and you could have cropped this a but so the lines are bigger and easier to read. Apparently this translates out to "HELLO". is that correct?

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Less white space and make the text bigger to read the code more

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Cyberdevil responds:

Well it's a card with morse code. The pun's in both title and code itself, so if you actually know the code... heeey, you actually looked it up! :D Yes indeed, it's a very literal greeting card! Thanks for that effort!

[Daily Show vs Fox News]

Not bad

Ok this one is not bat and interesting, you have done a good version of of the Transformers series with something of a political twist and comedy added in. I think the work of the pixels was a good choice for remaking something as complex and diverse as Transformers and the feeling of comedy for some of the characters being transformers to give you that comical feeling is well done and you're going to have a good career with pixel art. This was some nice work, I like the way you have named each character like you would an autobot or decepticon. Good jokes in this one with colbert and all that so the joke was executed well and I UNDERSTAND what you are trying to say here so nice job and some nice artwork indeed. I would make this a bit bigger in terms of pixels size. Not the art style but the aspect of size. Id go more HD with 4k quality so you could add this on a monitor and really show it off. As I have stated, good work here keep up the good work, you really know how to make pixels complex and even the backgrounds youve constructed really shine and give off that Transformers feeling. It keeps your theme going and allows the comedy to flow from each character to the next. The detailing in each character and the fact youve made them look like the character they are portraying but as a robot was spot on and impressive. Im not too familiar with all your characters but the ones I did know were funny stuff to see as Transformers. Great stuff hope to see more soon.

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Add more size and quality to this so it can be HD or 4k for wallpapers or just to allow you to view details more.

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[King Frog]

Nice black and white

So this was a nice black and white drawing I like some of the dteail but seems like you could polish it up a bit more these styles of black and white are notbad and they present a classic form of beauty but anyways you have a nice sketch or black and white design here.

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some small color might sufice

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[Bird]

Brilliant again

These jokes just get better and better, I like the color added but would love even more color maybe atleast the frames, I know I say brilliant but thats what you make this into a brilliant peice of adventure with some comedy attached and thats what the front line would say about this so keep up the great work and keep it classy and keep it brilliant I love how this series is turning out.

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I like the color added but would love even more color maybe atleast the frames

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[Packed Lunch]

Cool

Another fun joke and well executed Alright so what Can I say that I have not already said this is a good piece here and all of the ones in the series are I like how each one has a different feel of story to them and while the characters are the same there is still some excitemeant. so thanks for the effort here.

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some added color for sure.

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